• Member Since 12th Feb, 2016
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Johann


Not active much, but hey I'll try to be on ;^)

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On a cold, stormy night in Marechester, a colt, beaten, maneless and rejected, treads the wet stone streets alone. However, he wasn't alone. An up-and-coming fashionista happened to be in town to participate in a fashion show. Of course the colt didn't know that, neither did he care. "Oh great," he thought. "Another aristocrat."

Then again, the biggest heroes are the ones that are least expected.

Rated T for pottymouthed adult ponies and some violence.

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Comments ( 3 )

I like the story, well written, a good start. Looking forward to longer stories from you. Welcome aboard.

Well, I'd have given the restaurant a try if I lived in Asia. But not only do I live in a separate country, but several miles from my nearest neighbor, who is over five miles away... :twilightsheepish: I'm a bit of a hermit.

Overall, I loved the story. I only saw one maybe two grammatical flaws, so you've earned a 9/10 and a Like/Favorite from me. :raritywink:

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Thanks so much! I'm still trying to get a hang of longer stories, and this means a big bunch to me:twilightsmile:

Also @The Blessed One ha-ha, that's fine. :pinkiehappy: if you do get the chance through some otherworldly circumstance:rainbowlaugh:, give it a visit :duck:

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