Often a single day, a single event can change our lives forever. But even when that event is over, life will find a new equilibrium of sorts. It’s just a matter of accepting this new ‘normal’.
Nice, they're not throwing out the human couple experience. Still curious how things will develop beyond the relationship though. As far as I remember, the throne didn't break only because of the fight, but because Applejack was dishonest with herself to a degree that she hasn't Honesty anymore. That has got to make things more complicated.
It was a good thing in the end that Discord brought Twi and Rainbow to Equestria. There personal experience is serving as a guide to keep things going together which could have failed if they weren't here. Kinda implies if Discord really accidentally trap them in Equestria.
See, there's opportunity here to essentially rewrite history, in a way. Time to put those "I wish I had done such and such differently" thoughts to use! Keep going! ;)
you know what the cool think is? The writer of this story can write a re book on relationships, get payed and ignore us LOL , the writer is that damn good
7503103 rarity is also a problem. You cant marry out of your status twilight. You have to marry a noble. Think about your reputation. me: The five of you are second in ranking only to the alicorns. You outrank all of the nobles and i do not know why that is not common knowledge.
“Look at the facts, Rainbow. This is just like every other month. You two argue, but it also helps your relationship. You two are almost opposites of each other and a small tussle once in awhile keeps it fresh. Just ask Misty, she would gladly agree with me. Besides, we both know you come here because everyone else would just kick your ass for being dumb.”
Went back to look at "A mare in heat" from The Looking Glass and found that. So, in addition to this chapter being a beautifully crafted piece about the love between these characters, it's also a nice piece of continuity. Also a pay-off for some foreshadowing:
Dash broke away, shocked to hear such a question from her marefriend. “And what if Applejack becomes Ponyville’s biggest liar? You might as well ask what you’ll do if the wind stops blowing.”
I had a mad love for "The Looking Glass" and when I saw that Twidashforever left, I didn't expect to find another piece like that. But this is awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter, because you made me skip lunch reading the whole thing in a row. Keep up the good work!
We're doing our best, but we are at a point in the story where we don't have any guideline left from TwiDashForever. Trying to continue things on our own without hiccups isn't that easy, but we hope we can serve you an update soon again.
Seems Im late to the party as always. Yay? Nice reads, got Prequel & Up to date in the span of about.... 38 hours? Looking forward to more. Take your time
The Looking Glass and this finally came up on my Read Later list and I finished to what's been released so far last night...
Can't say I'm too much of a fan of the Clop-Heavy segments, mostly because overall they don't seem to really add anything to the greater narrative. I skipped or skimmed over the grand majority of them and don't really feel like I missed anything from the bits I actually read. I kinda like that the last couple chapters focused more on the emotional aspects of Twilight, Twi, Dash and Rainbow's relationship, as that's what's been driving the story forward while the long segments of X-rated material seem to hold the narrative pace back. I'm not saying any future scenes you may or may not have planned out should be cut, as that is definitely an aspect of their relationship, but finding the balance between that and narrative pace would be kindly appreciated.
Besides that, the rest of my thoughts on this story mostly are a jumbled mess, so I won't get into them since I don't think I could coherently articulate them...
Except for this: Is it normal that I want to break AJ's nose after reading the last couple chapters...?
8639395 That makes sense of course :) I've read so many of your stories and loved them all <3 Just thought it would be awesome to see this story being completed >.<
omg this is awesome *reads*
a exultant chapter perfectly worded.
Nice, they're not throwing out the human couple experience. Still curious how things will develop beyond the relationship though. As far as I remember, the throne didn't break only because of the fight, but because Applejack was dishonest with herself to a degree that she hasn't Honesty anymore. That has got to make things more complicated.
All in all, anxiously awaiting for more
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In which, she is now lying to herself about her feelings, and setting her narrow worldview up for failure.
It was a good thing in the end that Discord brought Twi and Rainbow to Equestria. There personal experience is serving as a guide to keep things going together which could have failed if they weren't here. Kinda implies if Discord really accidentally trap them in Equestria.
See, there's opportunity here to essentially rewrite history, in a way. Time to put those "I wish I had done such and such differently" thoughts to use!
Keep going! ;)
Twilight probably can't carry my weight. AHHHH!
7505119 Heh! I just imagined that scene with Ride of the Valkyrie playing only to scratch out as they both plummeted strait down.
Also yay update!!
Gah, so much feels.
Love it. See you in a month.
Just kidding.
you know what the cool think is? The writer of this story can write a re book on relationships, get payed and ignore us LOL , the writer is that damn good
The Feels, they won't stop
7510385 Speaking from our own experiences: No we can't.
7503103 bah, synonyms. Notice courage is the only one self consistent enough to not need multiple words for the same thing. ;)
ScratchnTavi, great to see another posting from you. Always makes my day better!
That was Beautiful It brought tears to my eyes literally You are doing wonderful job can't wait for the next chapter.
Wow.
Ain't that a stark contrast.
Couple chapters ago we have Luna masturbatin to a magical webcam. An' now we got heart felt relationship advice.
Shucks.
:)
This chapter made my night. Heartfelt and well written. You're doing an amazing job.
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rarity is also a problem.
You cant marry out of your status twilight. You have to marry a noble. Think about your reputation.
me: The five of you are second in ranking only to the alicorns. You outrank all of the nobles and i do not know why that is not common knowledge.
Went back to look at "A mare in heat" from The Looking Glass and found that.
So, in addition to this chapter being a beautifully crafted piece about the love between these characters, it's also a nice piece of continuity.
Also a pay-off for some foreshadowing:
7521616 Give Rarity this,
7567507 no they dont
I had a mad love for "The Looking Glass" and when I saw that Twidashforever left, I didn't expect to find another piece like that.
But this is awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter, because you made me skip lunch reading the whole thing in a row.
Keep up the good work!
i still wish this and the prequel were not as cloppy as they are <.<
I love this story so far I really hope you continue it soon ^^
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As soon as our creative TwiDash-Minds start working again
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Clop Clop Cloppidyclop.
Heh, sorry.
Everypony should expect if a story goes into my hooves and WAS clop, it will be Maximum Clop afterwards
You've done a great job with this story since the handoff! Hope the drama continues
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We're doing our best, but we are at a point in the story where we don't have any guideline left from TwiDashForever.
Trying to continue things on our own without hiccups isn't that easy, but we hope we can serve you an update soon again.
Oh my gosh i really like this!
Can't wait for the next chapter
Could you give us a estimate for when the next chapter will come out?
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Sry, from former 3 writers, 2 prereaders and 5 editors only 2 writer are left.
It might take a while
Is this story going to continue or...?
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There is just a comment below you addressing that
7909717 Ooops! Sorry!
Seems Im late to the party as always. Yay? Nice reads, got Prequel & Up to date in the span of about.... 38 hours? Looking forward to more. Take your time
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updates???
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I wrote it might take a while I can’t give you any exact date
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just hoping that it doesn't die like some others
it is feeling as if this story needs a little loving.
How's it looking with updates
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Not there yet, sorry
I can promise that the story won't die, but I can't promise updates in the near future
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That's alright of real life is plaguing you to much take care of that first
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Or was I?
No, but seriously, I get it. Real life, and such.
The Looking Glass and this finally came up on my Read Later list and I finished to what's been released so far last night...
Can't say I'm too much of a fan of the Clop-Heavy segments, mostly because overall they don't seem to really add anything to the greater narrative. I skipped or skimmed over the grand majority of them and don't really feel like I missed anything from the bits I actually read. I kinda like that the last couple chapters focused more on the emotional aspects of Twilight, Twi, Dash and Rainbow's relationship, as that's what's been driving the story forward while the long segments of X-rated material seem to hold the narrative pace back. I'm not saying any future scenes you may or may not have planned out should be cut, as that is definitely an aspect of their relationship, but finding the balance between that and narrative pace would be kindly appreciated.
Besides that, the rest of my thoughts on this story mostly are a jumbled mess, so I won't get into them since I don't think I could coherently articulate them...
Except for this: Is it normal that I want to break AJ's nose after reading the last couple chapters...?
more story please.
You're not going to finish this one, huh?
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It's hard doing a story alone that had 3 writers and 6 editors
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That makes sense of course :)
I've read so many of your stories and loved them all <3
Just thought it would be awesome to see this story being completed >.<
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I'll try my best but I can't promise anything
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I know. Just an example