The story feels like it's sticking too close to the source material/film. You should try mixing it up a bit ^^: Otherwise it's the exact same story but with ponies.

7035348 there will definitely be major differences. There already are some, in fact. Try to pick them all out.

Why not have Diamond dogs show up for the next bit.

Write more please

8257660
If I have the chance to write more, I will. I've been very busy with life, you know how it gets

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It's just so far a amazing story