The final part of the Unity Pact Saga. Be prepared for love, life... and conflict. Old enemies will return and new enemies will test the mettle of our heroes in New Humansville and abroad. The Natural Magic of the world has not finished its plan yet.
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YAY it's back!!!!!
6799642 It never left.
6799724 I know but it been while since the last one
A Downvote already? I wonder why.
6799770 dunno
Next chapter is already away to my awesome editor!
All my Yes! It arrives! *happy dance*
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Please, good sir, continue.
I will warn all readers that this story will hit you in the feels, and perhaps not always in a way you want. Fair warning.
I really hope this General guy is going to be more than just a one dimensional villain that we're supposed to hate, because if he isn't, I'm going to be very disappointed.
Good work, keep it up!
So happy to see this sequel! Don't worry about the side projects. So long as the main story gets told, I think we can call it squaresies
6800797 I more or less saw that coming the moment that General made his first appearance back in U.P 2. Something tells me this guy will be the cause of no short amount of suffering in Equestria and to Artex himself.
Actually, now that you've given us fair warning about the feels, I'm half expecting: One of the mares of Artex's herd ends up being captured by the Chinese and experimented on. Towards the end of the story when the battle is finally won, Artex finds what remains of her in a laboratory, floating around in different tanks. The samples taken include their unborn foal.
So yeah.... As far as the 'bad feels' go, that's pretty much how I envision the worst case scenario. (Though I think a lot of us would be a lot happier if it didn't come to that)
I'm very much looking forward to seeing how this epic story of yours will finally end.
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Probably from some weeaboo that was mad about you butchering that Japanese dudes name. There is no tso character in the Japanese language bruh. Either tsu/to/su. That and his last name kinda doesn't flow off the tongue either. Hiriboshi sounds odd :P
Also I cannot believe I didn't notice you released this. I'ma story binge and read the whole thing... then cry because I am caught up.
Finally reading it!
6800797 I dont know how I mist this story gettIng listed im here ever day cant wait to see how it all ends
Imagine my shame when I found this. I'm tardy to the party.
Damn, this is what I get for forgetting to follow.
Now I have to catch up!
Aww that evil villain person is so serious and is trying so hard! He would need a good long stout, relaxing sauna and maybe some random silly drunken adventures followed with hang-over and flashbacks of the previous night and he would be right as rain.
Should set his view of reality and self to more realistic footing.
I hate to be THAT guy but...
shouldn't it be
7186554 I cannot find the error you mentioned. Could you tell me which paragraph it is in?
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*Allec Trevar raises hand*
*Panthera raises paw*
*Pardus raises paw*
btw...
should remove that "in"
Also, that's one story I'd love to see!
10223805 Fixed the spelling error.
Well that’s one way to make EVERYONE hate someone
As someone else pointed out 2 years ago, the soundtrack video for this chapter has been deleted from YouTube (seems the channel was deleted) so this chapter doesn’t have the full impact it had when it was released.
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Fixed, but it has been so long I forgot how to put up youtube videos. It is listed as Otherside.