The final part of the Unity Pact Saga. Be prepared for love, life... and conflict. Old enemies will return and new enemies will test the mettle of our heroes in New Humansville and abroad. The Natural Magic of the world has not finished its plan yet.
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6801341 Hehehehehe... Obviously you have not read the other stories in the series. I do not tend to create one-dimensional villains.
6800797 I'm not gona lie, I giggled like a schoolgirl when I saw that the next part of The Unity Pact came out. I have it worse than RD has it for Daring Do. Is this what drugs feel like?
6802620 I have no idea. I don't use drugs.
6802635 Also, if I can make a suggestion for a song to use at some point, look up A World Without Danger. And when you do, tell me if the song brings back memories of your childhood.
6802799 I'll take a look, thanks. Up until now my go-to person for music is the reader Amethyst Blade.
6802535
No, generally your villains tend to give me headaches. "But...but...I'm not supposed to like this guy!" Really, the big point of a lot of TUP stories is that there really aren't villains as you're used to thinking of them. More that you have people who, for various reasons, believe in different courses of action and act upon those beliefs. However, the reader can sympathize with them.
Alex
Not sure about capitalizing de and la.
6803057 Which is part of the, 'true-to-life' ideal I attempt to portray.
6803185 Derp! I'll fix those as soon as I can. Thanks.
Do not taunt Murphy.
She left out that they may occasionally be the size of a house. Or would that ruin the surprise?
6803610 Oh it would DEFINITELY ruin the surprise.
6803193
Which is part of the, 'true-to-life' ideal I attempt to portray. (Omit the comma)
6804471 *eye twitch* Now you're editing my grammar in the comments?
6804488
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One thing that's bothering me.
If it's been a year since the events of UP2, why haven't the blood mages already won?
1. They have their biological super-weapon that wiped out an entire diamond dog city-state during testing.
2. They have thralls who are the perfect sleeper agents to deliver that weapon.
3. They live in hidden underground safehouses.
4. Their leaders are unscrupulous fanatics, with no qualms about mass murder.
What's keeping them from causing a zombie apocalypse, and waiting underground until everyone on the surface is dead?
6807220 There is a hint of why in the Epilogue of T.U.P. 2
6803185 Fixed! Thanks!
6803185
You know, I wondered about that too, but decided that TS made up the name, so he can spell it how he wants. As far as how it's spelled by the people who have that name culturally (if that makes sense?), I have no idea.
You need quotation marks at the begging of each paragraph as the rules are being doled out. Just the beginning, not the end, as the same person is still speaking. You are missing the quotations in almost each paragraph, I think.
Brilliant!
And that's how "Fight Club" was brought to Equestria!
In this context, I believe it would be "infirmed".