The final part of the Unity Pact Saga. Be prepared for love, life... and conflict. Old enemies will return and new enemies will test the mettle of our heroes in New Humansville and abroad. The Natural Magic of the world has not finished its plan yet.
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yay you and this story is alive.
The cogs turn and the man whose life was changed by love, now dips off the edge of the knife. “Demons run, when a good man goes to war,” now we see what it drives that good man to.
I can see the “Red Hive” following after their queen of things go south. Still, I shudder to think about the the amount of power she can bring to the table.
All in all, this is a great chapter. Can’t wait to see what’s next!😁
Oh, the General has made some powerful enemies, Artex is running on limited information as he knows not of the mind control, and Mother Visceral Slaughter is running on an even more limited form of Artex’s limited information.
Tension is rising, the plot is thickening, Artex may or my not try to go full on berserker rage Wolverine against the General if he doesn’t get a hoof-ed bitch slap from the mother-in-law first (crumpled both sides of the head, anyone? /j) and we may find out how Earth reacts to the news that the President has just presented.
Yay it's alive! That being said....
Holfukshit this is a powdwe keg that Noone knows about. I predict that this will escalate to a full blown war between realitys
The General is lucky that the changelings are not sending (Russian Dogs) as booby trapped hony pots.
You cant mind control the dead?
11022483 I must be missing a reference somewhere because I cannot make heads or tails of what you mean.
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Im sorry, that was posted in a rush from a cheap smart phone.
In WW2? Russian forces tried to train bomb laden dogs to associate the underside of German tankswith food. Unfortunately for the trial, the dogs associated the underside of the nearest tank with food. End of trial.
A honeypot, that I understand the term, is something that looks enticing and or useful, but generally at best is useless, and at worst is infective, damaging, or terminal.
Id say The Philosphers Stone in the Harry Potter series is more of a Virtual Hony Pot. It doesnt exist until you get it, and by that time, its too late.
11023074 Ah, thank you for clarifying.
Artex is gonna go full Doom Slayer on them, ripping and tearing until it is done.
cant wait to see what happens next!
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This.
That's why we love her.
Rainbow Dash: "Wai--whut?"
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Been a while but I recall liking her for not got being smart, consistent or good. She seems to be a person who is not a heel who bows and scrapes to the powers that be and has ability to plan and be cautious.
I’m a terrible person that refuses to read a series unless it’s nearly complete. If I may, how are your plans for the Unity pact going?
11235048 My work has all but stopped because I have COVID. I should be resuming soon.
i was hoping rose would accend out of pure force of will but that now seems more unlikely. Do you think if celestia knew that the genrals were planning something like that virus she might just say screw this to being diplomatic.
Having caught up on this read-through, I have some extra points to comment on:
I wonder what is going on with Artex’ eyes. The green flash seems to be symbolic of something.
The whether or not we have hit the event foreshadowed in Artex’ Post-Nut Nightmare after his first time with Razor is actually a little bit unclear. During the read through I thought it was to do with the actual “attempted murder of mind controlled man” bit, but thinking about it, the Shadow Artex could have been an embodiment of his future revenge and how it may eventually cause his own death if he allows it to consume him. If so, this must have been the Natural Magic warning him of the future in some way.
We have gotten to the “the father will look for the mother and child” part of Full Spectrum’s prophecy, or we are nearing it. I hope that the required info is gotten from the soldiers before Artex makes his bad move, or he goes back to the same one and he has had his mental chains broken by a rectifier in the meantime so he can now give answers.
I am on the proverbial edge of my seat waiting upon what comes next. Here’s to hoping Razor and the filly survive whatever experiments the scientists are planning.
11349451 Writing out the part with Rose made me cry. How did it affect you?
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I personally have found that, to cry physically, the figurative stars need to align with the right amount of story work and also how I read it. I was unfortunately interrupted a few times so I couldn't get really into it, but know that I certainly had sadness in my soul, especially during the re-read and remembering that part during different pieces of the story.
11349874 The next chapter is away to my proofreader, Randimaxis.
Artex is going down a dark path and I am concerned.
Discord's summed up what I'm worried about. Cynecia's relationship with the rest of the world is already on shaky ground as her hive tries to open up. And I fear it's a matter of not if but when she finds out about the member of her hive getting captured and killed bu Hiriboshi. And the result is not going to be pretty...