The final part of the Unity Pact Saga. Be prepared for love, life... and conflict. Old enemies will return and new enemies will test the mettle of our heroes in New Humansville and abroad. The Natural Magic of the world has not finished its plan yet.
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I think it boils down to school and life. School recently started up again for me, and though I will admit to laziness on my part, it doesn't take much to write a few words. Thanks for keeping the faith with TUP3, Truth. I have really enjoyed the glimpse into this world you have wrought:)!! Also, these updates really help the week go by faster.
Dude, if you don't stop being "sofa king" emotional with these chapters I'm going to have to wait till I get home to read them to stop people from asking me why my eyes are watery during my lunch break.
I don't think it's dull
No,the story just gets better with every chapters.Dont you dare put it on hiatus or cancell it.
7545419 I hadn't planned on it. Almost have the next chapter done too. My old editor just stopped responding to everything and I had to find another one. Fortunately one of you guys stepped up and decided to help me. I will not disclose this person's name because I am not sure they want me to, but this person has helped a GREAT deal with getting new chapters edited and published.
The comment I refrained from making last chapter was, "My days of thinking Cutter isn't fit to be a guard are certainly coming to a middle."
I'm glad Razor is a linguistics expert. Think of all the good innuendos that would go to waste otherwise.
I'm starting to wonder if alcohol should me mandatory at all meetings between Kavim and other species.
I'm just not much of a comment-er, commentator? I loved the Sofa King joke though
I'm just waiting for this arc to end. Nothing personal, I just am meh about this kid and his reformation. Nothing wrong with it.
The job of all parents is to give their kids roots and wings. Its good to see Cutter realize its time for him to leave the nest.
I can only comment for myself, but it feels like the cutter arc is a little drawn out.
Get me wrong, I'm glad it happened. I like it. I'm just kinda waiting to get back to the like 5 major unanswered questions (that I can think of) that haven't been addressed. Ya know?.
7546313 It's true though. I checked multiple websites just to make sure I had the facts straight.
Hammer on the Fimfiction mods to get this thing put back on our favorites' notifications; I HATE missing a Chapter!
7546485 Aw fuck it. I'm tired of dealing with asking them about it. Just check back once a week and see if I posted anything.
7546800 Honestly the majority of the scene is supposed to be in light shining in only from the hallway and not in the room.
That is the exact reason for this part.
Attempted murder will do that to a reputation, and deservedly so.
His attitude is kinda like: "Gee, you kidnap and eat one baby and suddenly that makes you a monster? what I did wasn't TOO horrible, sheesh."
7547254 The complete lack of any sort of empathy on your part makes me very glad you're not a cop. I could see you shooting every suspect you came across.
7547422 You're completely off-base with your statement. There is a HUGE difference between wantonly slaughtering and consuming a child, and trying to scare an unknown and supposedly violently dangerous being from your town only to end up accidentally severely injuring it.
7545436 "My old editor just stopped responding to everything"
Did they die?
Hey, you know what this story needs?
It needs an exploding volcano.
New Humansville is by the sea right?
Put it a dozen miles out from New Humansville and have it blow it's top and then have Artix scream "It blew Up!".
That would make this story great y'know, because... exploding volcano!^_^
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I was shooting for a more basic comparison between two highly violent crimes against people who don't deserve such treatment.
7548341 There is a definitive difference though. Cutter never actually intended to injure Artex. That part really was an accident.
7548178 I don't believe so. I'm pretty sure life got in the way for him. I'm not angry or spiteful or anything of the sort... for something this minor. I just wish he was still able to edit for me.
7548221 Where in the world did I ever say New Humansville was anywhere near the ocean? It's a few dozen miles to the Northeast of Canterlot. It has a big lake, but other than that, it's landlocked. And I am not a big fan of volcanos. The eruption of Vesuvius that destroyed Herculaneum and Pompeii was horrible and the pictures of the preserved people gave me nightmares as a child.
Yeah it is annoying that it doesn't show new chapters on either favorites or tracking lists. It's the only story in my read it later list so I can look to see if there is a new chapter or just the full listing.
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He wasn't trying to tickle him, that's for sure.
He fully intended to injure him, but he didn't mean to nearly murder him.
But the degree at which his intent to do serious injury (after all, you don't stop a random stranger in the streets to give him a little paper cut, people only do that to at least put the fear of severe bodily injury in them) really doesn't mean much outside of whether or not they'll do it again, considering it won't undo what is done.
7549096 Dude, I don't know how many times I have to explain this: Cloud Cutter was trying to BLUFF. He did not think he could cut Artex at all.
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A bluff is a threat without taking any actual action.
Now, if he actually expected that not to cut him, then he must have expected it to only cut his clothes, and if he did believe human skin to be that resilient, he also would have expected the human to know this as well .
Thus, a bluff would be bluffing to damage his clothes, but not actually damage his clothes (which he most certainly did, if he carved right through Artex' shirt and cut open his belly).
So even if it were true that human skin were hard as diamond, that still wouldn't be a bluff.
When a "bad guy" shoots at or stabs Superman, it's not a bluff. It's an attempt on his life.
A very poorly thought out attempt, a very hopeless attempt, and it's doomed from the start, but it's still an attempt to kill him regardless. It would be a bluff if he intentionally shot at his feet, or swung his knife and stop the swing mid air trying to get Superman to run away, but to actually go through with it and follow through with your attack, it's an actual attempt to do them harm.
Even if he knows it won't hurt the guy, he's still WANTING it to, and ignoring the logic that it won't work out the way he's hoping it will.
7549156 Young and stupid. Nobody at that age thinks very clearly when they have their friends around. Nuf said.
Just because I don't feel the need to comment on every chapter I read doesn't mean that I don't like them. Keep up the good work!
7546310 What are those unanswered questions?
7551846 what the fuck is happening back on earth!?
What happened to full spectrum? Like we know she's *ok* but what was that and why did she change? Um the next questions super spoilerey for a side story. And basically concerns how the future of the humans and diamond dogs happened.
Um.... What's going to happen to the Balzac? Um... How many questions did I say I could name of the top of my head again? That last one counts right?
Also this is a perfectly good chapter/mini arc. It's good, it fits in with everything perfectly, I love it.
It's just happening at one of the points in the story where I'm eagerly awaiting a few answers. If this were a TV show, this would be the part where I would binge watch it assuming the episodes are already out.
7551855 Ah. One of those will be answered in an upcoming chapter.
7551978 yay!
>Has the story become dull?
Naw. I am enjoying the slower pace largely because I have no idea how the larger conflicts will play out, which is an uncomfortable feeling at best.
7552144 It's more that the updates go unnoticed as they don't show up correctly on the unread story count. I have to catch it when it passes through the feed page, which doesn't tally story updates, or when I randomly check it.
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I just do "Library>Favourites>View all by last updated" once per day. I have just now realized that fimfiction uses the British English spelling of favorite.
gabby is bringing the skull of a Balsac to be reborn derpicdn.net/img/view/2016/9/14/1249327.png
7565189 That... actually doesn't look too off.
7549179 Agreed. I know I didn't when I was a teenager
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Anyone else concerned his nickname is CUTTER?! Seeker did you do that on purpose you sly dog, you.
I usually neglect to comment cause I want to read the next chapter.
7681542 I apologize for seeming ignorant but... could you elaborate for those of us who don't see the link please?