The legend of the stone filly

by I love princess twilight

The stone filly sings ch2

That night something strange happened the stone filly statue began to sing and all of pony vill could hear the sad Melody of her song. ("Imprisoned in stone afraid and alone stuck in a place no pony knows forced to stand and be still as I wait for the day that I will be freed from my prision of stone". "I once had friends and a loving family but then jealousy took it all away and now I stand and wait in the darkness for the day that I will be freed from my prision of stone)". This song confused ponys or made them cry once the got the meaning the next night she sang again but it was a different song (" One little filly so cold and alone lost to my friends and family they all think I'm dead but I am not I'm just stuck here all alone in the dark left to slowly crumble and break but I stand and I wait for the day that I will awake from this night mare but its real and I am left here wondering will I ever see my cousin again or will I be stone forever". This time filly's cried and parents were confused but rarity looked like she was crying all night then applejack came in with a worried look on her face applebloom had started crying but wouldn't tell them why. and it was really worring them because this never happened before and wanted to ask twilight for help figuring it out

When they finally got her to tell them what was wrong she told them that "the legend of the stone filly was true but they were actually trying to help their friend not turn her to stone". Here you see she had hurt her hoove and they tried to heal it but used the wrong spell and accidentally turned her to stone instead. And she felt really bad about lieing about it.
Then the news that the filly's had been found and returned to their families brought joy to pony vill
And new hope as well as a reason for pinkie to throw a party. So all's. Well that ends well. =)

Author's Note:

This is my first story so I hope you like it .

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[StormyVenture]

You should try to expand this, rather than condensing it in this manner into a sort of spark notes as you have thus far. Also, it would make more sense for this to happen a few days later. Presumably this sort of occurrence would be a reason for Flash to be in Ponyville and Princess Twilight sitting out in the square in the middle of the night would draw the attention of others which would explain why they might put some credence in the story after presumably being dismissive and skeptical for years.

That night something strange happened the stone filly statue began to sing and all of pony vill could hear the sad Melody of her song. ("Imprisoned in stone afraid and alone stuck in a place no pony knows forced to stand and be still as I wait for the day that I will be freed from my prision of stone". "I once had friends and a loving family but then jealousy took it all away and now I stand and wait in the darkness for the day that I will be freed from my prision of stone)". This song confused ponys or made them cry once the got the meaning the next night she sang again but it was a different song (" One little filly so cold and alone lost to my friends and family they all think I'm dead but I am not I'm just stuck here all alone in the dark left to slowly crumble and break but I stand and I wait for the day that I will awake from this night mare but its real and I am left here wondering will I ever see my cousin again or will I be stone forever".

This really should be formatted differently to set off the sung parts.

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That night something strange happened the stone filly statue began to sing and all of ponyville could hear the sad melody of her song.

Imprisoned in stone afraid and alone,
stuck in a place that no pony knows,
forced to stand and be still as I wait for the day that I will be freed from my prison of stone.

I once had friends and a loving family but then jealousy took it all away,
now I stand and wait in the darkness for the day,
that I will be freed from my prison of stone

This song confused ponies or made them cry once they got the meaning. The next night she sang again, but it was a different song.

One little filly,
so cold and alone,
lost to my friends and family,
they all think I'm dead,
but I am not.

I'm just stuck here all alone in the dark,
left to slowly crumble and break.
I stand and I wait for the day that I will awake from this night mare,
but its real and I am left here wondering will I ever see my cousin again or will I be stone forever.
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I've taken a few liberties with breaks in the lines of the song.

When they finally got her to tell them what was wrong she told them that "the legend of the stone filly was true but they were actually trying to help their friend not turn her to stone". Here you see she had hurt her hoove and they tried to heal it but used the wrong spell and accidentally turned her to stone instead. And she felt really bad about lieing about it.
Then the news that the filly's had been found and returned to their families brought joy to pony vill
And new hope as well as a reason for pinkie to throw a party. So all's. Well that ends well. =)

They? Is "her" Applebloom here? A miscast spell by fillies doesn't sound like the sort of thing to turn a pony to stone and that much magical power sounds like a cutie mark in the making. An exceedingly awkward/awful one to be sure. Who felt bad about lying? The statue? Multiple ponies were found an returned to their families?

As I am getting at, the above quoted part is very confusing and feels like it's out of context.