• Published 10th Jun 2012
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Sweetie Belles Bitter Sweet Treat - Kenseirabbit



My first story containing Sweetie Belle finding her first love.

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An "Accidental" Fall

-Chapter 3-

An “Accidental” Fall

Celestia had lowered her sun just as soon as the three had got back from their shopping grandeur. Basking the three girls in its beautiful glow.

"Wow! Look at the sun set!" Sweetie Belle exclaimed as she turned towards the horizon.

"Sure is beautiful ain't it?" Apple Bloom said longly.

"Yeah yeah, It's all sweet and stuff. Let's go." Scootaloo tried to turn away but was soon captivated by its stunning brilliance.

The way the sun seemed to melt into the horizon, the way the city itself seemed to pulse with the orange beauty, and the way mountains in the distance seemed to have held the sun up for just a moment longer; as if they themselves did not want the light to go away, had the three fillies stuck to the spot.

"It is beautiful isn't girls." They heard a sweet but authoritative voice say as the sun had melted away leaving Luna to present her glorious moon. "I never tire of getting to lower the sun. The sight calms me. It seems to melt all of my weariness and thoughts from the day’s politics."

"Your Majesty!" The three gasped as one bowing.

"Rise Crusaders. There is no need to be so formal." The white alicorn said with a light chuckle.

"Well you see princess we haven't been the Cutie Mark Crusaders since, well since...." Sweetie Belle started.

"Since I got my awesome Cutie Mark!" Scootaloo cut in, showing off her gray thundercloud with a purple lightning bolt.

"Well that looks a lot like your friend Rainbow dash's Cutie Mark, doesn't it Twilight?" The Princess remarked giving Twilight a hug with her wing as she strode up from the hotel.

"I have noticed that myself, but have been too caught up with the school trouble to ask about it." The principle said giving them a quick glance. "So what brings you here Princess?" She said gazing up at her old tutor anxiously.

"You have always been one to get a little to preoccupied with your work, and please Twilight! We have been friends for so long! You don't have to call me Princess." She said looking back down at her with a soft loving smile.

"I am sorry Prin... Oh! I mean Celestia." Twilight said meekly. "I forget that sometimes."

"It is quite alright my dear friend." The Princess said nuzziling the principle. “I am sorry, but I was just on my way to the palace. I have some business to attend to. Twilight while you are here I would like to see you at the palace. It has been far too long since we had some time together.” With that the princess flew off to the palace.

"What in the hay was that all about?" Apple Bloom asked.

"I don't know Apple Bloom, maybe she just came to say hello to Twilight. They are best friends after all."

"Yeah that makes sense. Lets get to bed girls we had a busy day..." Sweetie Belle said looking back at the huge pile of bags and boxes of stuff. "At least we got through Rarities list today. We can shop for ourselves another day."

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"Wake up Class it is time to go to the Concert Hall!" A voice boomed over a magical orb floating in all the classes rooms.

"Eh.... Make it go away...." Scootaloo said covering her head with a pillow.

"We have to get up girls come on!" Sweetie Belle said jumping up and down on Scootaloo's bed. "We have to at least go and eat breakfast! Come on!"

"Argh.... Fine I am coming for the breakfast...." Scootaloo said rolling off the bed. "but I am not happy about it!"

The girls walked out into the hall and up to Apple Blooms door.

"Apple Bloom! Get up it's time for breakfast!" Sweetie Belle said banging on her door.

"She isn't answering." Scootaloo said staring at the door.

"What in tarnation are y'all doin'?" Apple Bloom said walking out of the door next to them.

"Uhmm Apple Bloom what are you doing in that room?" Sweetie Belle asked tilting her head slightly confused.

"Whatdaya mean? This here is mah room." She said rubbing her eye.

"Then whose room is this?" Sweetie Belle said just as the door to the room was opening.

"What in the world is going on out here? I was having my beauty sleep!" A very aggravated Diamond Tiara said coming out of her door.

"Oh great you woke up Diamond bi.." Scootaloo said angry.

"Scootaloo! There is not call for such language!" Sweetie Belle yelled at Scootaloo cutting her off before she could finish her swear.

"Fine whatever, I am going downstairs for food." Scootaloo said coldly.

"I'll come with you girls." Diamond said in her smug voice.

"What? Y'all can come if ya want, but ah don't think Scoots will take to kindly to it." Apple Bloom warned.

"Well seeing as we are the closest things to friends she has in this class, I can't blame her." Sweetie Belle whispered to her friends. "That would be fine Diamond. If you want to eat with us then lets go!" She finished cheerfully.

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"Wooooowwww... Look at all this food...." Scootaloo said drooling over the huge selection of delightfully tasty breakfast food.

"Ah know! Lookie here! They got hay bacon, hash browns, pancakes, oh oh daffodil breakfast sandwiches! Mah favorite! They even have them new doohickies! Waffles I think they are called...." Apple Bloom said browsing the overly large selection. "Well if y'all three are done being pigs over a food bucket, I am gonna eat." Apple Bloom remarked picking up some food.

"We're going to eat, just give us a moment." Sweetie Belle defended. "I guess I could just have some of this." She said picking up some hash browns with a piece of hay bacon.

"I for one don't eat breakfast! I am to tired in the morning to work off the fat." Diamond interjected raising her head in the air.

After eating the breakfast the girls had gathered with the rest of the class around their teacher.

"Alright class we are going to the concert hall to "check out" the male honor choir class." He told the class with a small laugh empathizing on 'check out'. "I am sure you are all eager to see what skill they have."

"Uhmm Mr.Faulkner?" Sweetie Belle asked.

"Yes, dear?" The choir teacher asked.

"Are there any other schools there besides us?"

Mr.Faulkner stroked his chin. "I don't think so Sweetie Belle. I am sure we are the only class coming to see them and thats only because of Ms.Twilight over there." He said nodding his head over to the lavender mare who had just walked away from an older couple that looked a lot like her.

"Alright Mr.Faulkner let's get this show on the road!"

"That's weird isn't? I mean Avery said he was here with his school." Sweetie Belle said slightly confused.

"Maybe he isn't here for the concert and Mr.Faulkner doesn't know about them?" Scootaloo said looking over at her friend.

"I guess. Oh well, lets just get going."

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The class showed up at the concert hall and all had stopped to gaze at the exquisite detail put into the building. It was taller than the surrounding buildings. With a huge dome on the back part of the building which had to be the concert hall itself. The door way into the building had many intriguing designs. Showing Celestia on one side with her sun above the door on the right and a crescent moon over the one on the left. Through all the design you could make out the cutie mark of Filthy Rich.

"Simply amazing! This must be Celestia's grand hall!" Sweetie Belle examined the grand building.

Mr.Faulkner walked up to the girls.

"Hardly! This is just a Hall that was recently built in this area. Actually I think it was built by Filthy Riches personal funds."

"Daddy helped build this? Then it must be divine in the hall itself." Diamond said happily trotting inside.

Mr.Faulkner stopped for a second, with a deep look of confusion and slight fear.

"Daddy?" He asked looking at the girls.

"Yeah she is Filthy's daughter. You didn't know that?" Sweetie Belle responded.

"I didn't even think of the possibility..." He said walking off in thought.

"Wow look at this place! It is amazing!" Scootaloo said looking around the hall.

"Ah sure as shootin never thought Ah would be in a place like this." Apple Bloom said agreeing.

They had walked into the grand hall looking around taking in all the scenery. As they looked around they noticed the choir concert colts were down on the stage.

"Hey Sweetie Belle. Isn't that Avery over there?" Scootaloo said raising a hoof in the direction of the stage side.

"Hey I think that is!" Sweetie Belle said cheerfully. "HEY..."

Scootaloo quickly covered her mouth.

"You want to make a fool of your self Sweetie Belle? You need to get his attention in a very personal matter." Scootaloo said with a smirk.

"A what? I don't like him guys!" She said her white face turning a deep shade of red.

"Uh-huh and I am the tooth pony. Alright you are going to go over there and talk to him, but surprise him! Sneak behind him and give him a good little scare."

"Alright fine I will go over there and talk to him, but I wont scare him!" Sweetie Belle said walking down the aisles of chairs towards the stairs. "I will just walk over there and say hello."

As she walked down the aisle a plot hatched in her head. One she never thought she would think of. "That's not usual of you brain, but I like it." She said to her self with a sly smile.

Sweetie Belle walked up behind the colt with a wide grin on her face. "Hey Avery, what are you doing here?"

Avery turned around to see who had just spoken to him. Right when he turned around to face the mare something had pushed him over and he felt a soft coat upon his. A really soft coat that smelt amazing. For a second he was in heaven, until it was broken by a voice.

"Hmmm, mind telling us who your marefriend is there Avery?" The voice said laughing.

"Marefriend?" He said then he realized what had happened. He looked downward to see none other than the mare from yesterday. "Sweetie Belle? What are you doing here?" Sweetie Belle looked up.

"I thought I would drop by and say hello."

"I can see that." He said gesturing towards her laying ontop of him.

Authors note: Alright now that I have 2 and 3 out the way and edited and put back up improved I get to go back to posting up new chapters. (which of course will be of better quality.)

Comments ( 9 )

Im not sure if i missed something. Im confused.:rainbowhuh:

Edit: Yep apparently i only read half of the last chapter for some reason.
Okay, anyway, good chapter. only issues i saw were just some formating things but it was easy enough to read anyway.

756833 Yeah I know the format is weird. I am still trying to get used to it, and I am browsing typing things like using Word, Notepad, or even using the page it self and just typing it on here. Thank you for sticking by for me though! I know it can be torture trying to figure what I am saying sometimes...:ajsleepy: I will get it all sorted out trust me.

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hmm for some reason i just saw your response for my first comment. :rainbowhuh: I can help you some with the editing if you would like, Im not the greatest, but another set of eyes is always good.

And guitar is definitely a good instrument to learn (my favorite haha, hence my username.) Fun for just casual stuff with friends and such. But im a fan of all instruments, and music in general, and play around with different instruments a lot.

764586 Any help would be great I you want to help just PM me and I will get back to you. lol Message fail much? :trixieshiftright:

Please make new paragraphs when there is dialoug :applecry:

769521 Yeah I know.... I plan on working on that like I said earlier...

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Yea, I know it's minor but still....

"Daddy helped build this? Then it must be divine in the hall itself." Diamond said happily trotting inside. Mr.Faulkner stopped for a second. "Daddy?" He asked looking at the girls. "Yeah she is Fancy's daughter. You didn't know that?"
According to "Family Appreciation Day", (S2, Ep12), Diamond Tiara's father is Filthy Rich, not FancyPants.:raritywink:

811382 Oh crap... I knew I had that wrong somehow.... Thank you for that, I have been meaning to change that.

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