• Member Since 6th Aug, 2015
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LukasAngelis


Just trying to bring tales from a version of Equestria over to this world.

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When Lukas Jackson got taken from his world into the land of Equestria, he decided that he would be a part of history. By becoming the personal bodyguard of the young and growing Twilight Sparkle. When now going to the timeline that he knows, will it be the same as he remembers, and can he keep the timeline in check?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 3 )

Definitely an interesting read that I will follow.
I do like the concept of his arrival being the main story and the end of the chapters being steps towards the Summer sun festival.

Can't wait for the next chapter. :twilightsmile:

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Actually I'm trying to have it be the first chapter be more of a prologue, with other chapters being the episodes of the series each with (I hope) a bit of twist.
Thanks for the comment and the like. Will try to get the next chapter out.

I don't get why this story has not gotten any more attention. It's a very interesting plot having to already know what will happen, but also having to not throw off the story line. (Which he did when he made Twiligt go to Moondancers party which resulted in them arriving in Ponyville half a hour later which made them miss Pinkie.)
The only thing I can possibly complain even the slightest about is that some sentences could use some touch up.


(Sorry it took me such a long time to finally read this chapter. I havent been on fimficion in a long time. -_- )

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