Hello! My name is MelodicArtist and I'm on my way to becoming a Brony Analyst. I'm an artist, voice actress, and a singer. I love writing fan fiction and I love playing video games.
Eve Violet, a pegasus mare with good qualities and attributes. A crazy mane style and a weird way to how she earned her cutie mark. She feels lonely, and no pony really hangs around her or even wants to be her friend. Until a pony, well a draconequus... comes into her life and makes her feel special, like she's ment to be.
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Hhhhmmmm not sure why, but I am totally in the mood for a story like this.
Your chapters are too short, 1.000 words are nearly not enough for me. I would say you should write at least 2.000 words.
This chapter feels off, I guess in the first part, you could have shown her own thought´s, about whatever, and without a reason it is weird for me, to see that Discord suddenly takes an interesst in her. I mean I could understand him going to play her a prank, but well.....
6460870 I actually have reasoning into why Discord kidnapped Eve, but I'm gonna explain that in another chapter I'm writing out.
6460856 I don't really care about how long my chapters are, as long as they explain the story and what I wanted to cover during the chapter. Nothing against you though...
6460839 thank you
6464765 it´s okay, I just think I noticed most of the storys this long, having more downvotes, than upvotes, if I remember it correctly, but maybe it wasn´t because of that.