I love my little pony so much I want to write my own stories, just to be able express my thoughts and feeling freely just feels super great.
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You are trying way too hard with the craziness and appearance of the OC there. The atmosphere is so melodramatically, forcefully dark it's pretty cheesy. Tone it down a lot, and get an editor if at all possible.
why the fuck WOULD ANYBODY MAKE SHIT LIKE THIS
6366126 I purely hate the god damned idea that's what I hate, hate my opinion all you want I'm sticking to my guns
You can literally cut yourself on the edginess, holy shit.
>romance tag
Stockholm syndrome?
6366135
Then why the hell are you here complaining? You knew what it was from the cover. Nobody cares about your opinions, you're entitled to them and no one will judge you for having them.
However, we do care about the very immature and rude manner that you express your opinions.
6366299
Out of all these comments, your is the kindest one so far, and I thank you for that...
Night
6366126
Thanks...
Night
...... So it never occured to you that if someone had kidnapped the pseudo daughter of the immortal ruler of equestria, and said pseudo daughter saved equestria a dozen times, taht maybe that they would rapidly hunt down this idiot within twenty four hours?
6366498
Well... maybe, I didn't really understand what I was writing at the time...
I didn't really think about the kidnapping thing until I looked over the first chapter...
Oh, Gods... I feel horrible for this...
Night
6367457
Other than that? I'd say it's a good fic.
Goodish, anyway....
6367457 & 6367831
Thank you both for your comments, I really don't mind if say how you feel towards this fic.
Night
wow just wow
wow just wow
wow just wow
6401734
Shocking and hard to believe, right?
Night
6366010
I agree with the editor part, but I don't have enough experience with the Darke, to state my opinion on the matter.