Sweetie Belle thought it would be harmless, she thought it would wear off after awhile, she thought Twilight could fix it... She thought wrong. Can the teenage filly keep her hormones in check, and keep her small problem a secret?
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oh this is getting good.
Oh boy. Blackmail. There goes my interest.
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Oh,oh,oh! I think I see where your interest went!
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No? Huh... well I'm sure you'll be back when I make an update, afterall the story is only beginning.
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I hope you're right. I find blackmail a stupid choice in general. It's a short-range weapon because your target can always move after you've used it, it outs the blackmailer as a petty and manipulative person, and there's a host of problems if your blackmail target calls your bluff and steps up to claim whatever leverage you have over them, that opens you up to all sorts of reprisal. It tends to be for the small minded and short-sighted.
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If you don't mind spoilers:
The blackmail plot device is merely a setup for the rest of the fanfic. Yes DT and SS will continue to hold it over her head and it will be used to direct SB somewhat throughout the fic but it won't be the main focus.
Hope that revives your interest but just in case, I have this:
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Personally I'm only going to keep reading this if DT and SS get severly punished, and soon.
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And Featherweight. I hate Paparazzi...
6360396 Good point, I hope Rumble rats him out, I can only presume that Rumble was being blackmailed too.
I hate Featherweight...
Ugh does this mean that DT and SS are going to be in this fic for the rest of the story? Fuck.
6362279 Their tags are in the main page for the story, so unforunately, whether you like it or not, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon are major characters in this, just like the CMCs are.
And ultimately, it's probably gonna come down to Sweetie Belle and her own feelings for her 'accident'. In short, she needs to be a dick (pun not intented) and stop really caring about what others think about her. None of these other bastards ARE Sweetie Belle; they can ridicule, symphazise, make fun of, and everything else in between. and can claim that they care for her well-being which is good. But the hard truth is that none of them will ever understand what Sweetie Belle has to do with, unless they decide to permanately become a hermaphorite themselves.
You know, you should add the source to that cover image. Here it is. http://41.media.tumblr.com/09ec1b9a398aed1dff85c11c25f7afb2/tumblr_n9ehltpazQ1rbn6v1o8_r1_500.png
It's from Go Ask Sweetie Belle
I'm waiting for Sweetie to hit DT and SS with the same spell she used on herself.
Hey...have a like also I'm the 100th like here...TRIPLE DIGITS BABY!!
I hate Featherweight, DT and Silver Spoon here. I mean it.
Keep on going! I wanna see more Futa Belle!
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Sorry for the hiatus! update should be coming soon!
hmm ending wasn't quite right lets redo it as it should of been *sweetie grinned at the two as they looked on stumped "w-whats your problem didn't you hear me I have evi-GAH" tiara was cut off as sweetie started to choke the life out of her and did the same with her magic to silver before she could stop her. "guess my secret goes to grave with you two hmm" sweetie smiled as the life was choked out of the two bitchy bullies.* see muc... what do you mean too gory and dramatic?
yeah but seriously this is why i don't write. I'd kill off them two bitches without a second thought. picking on the CMC is one thing but where in the &#^% do they get off saying they OWN her. she's a living being not property. ARRRR I just wanna strangle them ponies.
pleased as always you've done well to infuse disgust and hatred of the villains and compassion and sympathy for the hero. it's easy to write clop it takes talent to do it so that the story over comes the clop to make a great story to read.
Oh, boy this gon' be gud.
Aww, she has to live in hiding for years?
Even lying to her big sister?
And Milky was horrible! Mandatory, no bathroom breaks? Were they trying to get those kids sex crazy?
Of course it sets Sweetie off, so she can't ever find a moment's peace again.
Oh, of course Featherweight got a picture. That sure happened.
And now he's going to take the picture to... Diamond Tiara?
Because he can't afford to ...develop them without her money?
And she's going to go and... make Sweetie Belle her slave, of course.
With no consequences that might send her to juvie for blackmail and rape, no doubt.
And let's not forget emotional abuse. Can't have a good slave without emotionally abusing them.
"So what happens now?" yeah I'm done here
oh purr SB
Rip off their faces and feed them to the previous face owners. That was my second favourite threat in high school the other was I will kill and eat you,stop. The more creepy and barbaric a threat is the better though of course you gotta have the right reputation for it to work.
Well Damn!
6784904 Danm Danial!
Why didn't Sweetie tell Twilight about her illusion spell failing?
That's my only critique, rest of the chapter was real good.
7112317 I think the same... Sweetie can tell Twilight and with her Princess power punish Tiara, but then, there is no story.
Sweetiebelle really needs to let her sister know. She does live with her afterall, it's a wonder she kept up her cover this long.
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Well, that and it isn't going to be very beneficial to Sweetie's learning to solve her problems by having others rectify the cause of the problem. If she doesn't learn how to solve the problem, then it'll just manifest in another way. I like that Sweetie isn't having 'others solve her problems' be her first go-to option.
Omg! This made my day, gotta remember this one.
Wow, Featherweight. Wtf.