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I know right?! Lazy spellbook writers!

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Last time I was using it too much. I can never find a good balance I swear...

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Here's the thing with "said". It's a word that sort of blends in when reading. Our brains almost just pass over it without comment and this can be a very good thing.

When writing, you should be using "said" for most dialogue. Because our brains have been trained to just kind of skip through it without really registering anything, it is good for any dialogue where there isn't specific emphasis. Think about any regular conversation and this is going to be 99% of it. This helps those occasions where you want that specific emphasis to stand out all the more because it's something different; it's not just "said" it's "exclaimed", "shouted", "plead", "whimpered", "whispered" etc.

"This is my favorite part of these classes." Ms. Milky remarked softly to herself with a smirk as the chorus of thumping noises rang out in the quiet classroom."

Me: Thumping? What do you mean by thumping?

"Sweetie Belle herself was even memorized by the sight and let out a startled yet soft "eep!" as she felt her own penis impact with the underside of her desk."

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That'd legitimately be grounds for a lawsuit in all likelihood, so i don't know why each and every spell wouldn't be appended with a warning note. All you need is one pony with more money then sense buying a secondhand copy that doesn't have the pamphlet anymore and two weeks later you get a visit from their lawyer.

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Unsurprisingly to the teacher was Sweetie Belle's hoof being the first and only to be raised. "Anypony other than the bookworm who obviously read the book on this subject and ten other variants by different authors?"

That had reminded me of this line I heard forever ago. I think this was it though: What are you a dictionary? No Bitch a ghetto visionary, keep it up and i'll drop you like a case of dysentery.

Only problem is I don't know who rapped that verse either sadly.

Please tell me this will include futa-on-male!!!

But either way, great story! Keep up the great work.

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"Guy with tits" stories always seem to find new angles to tackle old themes :P
Kinda interesting imo. Though hm, kinda wondering if this goes for the classic "full R63" that 90+ % of all futa stories go for, or if you'll keep their horsecunt still involved ;3

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If you read the fic all the way to this point, you'd know its not as simple as "Guy with tits".

I can't say anything without spoilers but if you haven't already, read it through.

6357248 Only read the description so far. But considering it's included in the group for stories about guys with tits, and going by said description, seemed to mainly focus on the male aspect. I did a bit of an assumption tbh :P

And I have too many bag experiences with people going "just read it", as around 19/20 has turned out it was just a huge flop. Especially the last person that did, as it was just a troll that had written a shoddy story about Diamond Tiara, some plot con about discord and R63, just to whine on people and say that "only males can be dominant". Training off a bit here xD I can say though, it does seem like you can have gone for a more "proper herm" approach to this. But hard to tell from just looking. But sadly atm is too much of a wildcard for me to bet on. But do know it looks promising at least :3

Have a like an a track. Love it!!!

i am disturb yet curious to see where it goes.

Sweetie Belle reading the last part: Oh buck...

Honestly I would've thought that SB would've cast the spell in the bathroom...

while i may not be the biggest fan of dickmares this is as always hilarious. sorry I haven't been up to date on reading these you can blame the MLP game for that (changelings don't die, they multiply). I was a bit disappointed at sweetie dealing with pendick err penwood. she should of wrote back "LOL OMG that's so small it's adorable" followed by flashing her's if ya hadn't decided to keep it a secret. but really a cocky prick like him needs his ego shattered. nothing like being told your to small to take a ride.

also that milky cameo I loved it. of OC's she is by far my fave (even have a custom figurine of her) if sweetie ever want's to learn about boob jobs she'd be the teacher for it.

That was one funny and awesome read . and it looks like there busted.

Hot.

You handled this very well. Despite the very raunchy subject matter, the whole thing felt very natural. That's an element I think is missing from a lot of clopfics. I love how you characterized Scootaloo. It's so easy to imagine her growing up into an unashamed pervert.

And I gotta love me some Scootabelle~

Now I need to know the derpy story

Scoot aloof is now my favorite character