Sweetie Belle thought it would be harmless, she thought it would wear off after awhile, she thought Twilight could fix it... She thought wrong. Can the teenage filly keep her hormones in check, and keep her small problem a secret?
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I failed to see the romance in this story ? Is Sweetie going to develop a Stockholm syndrome ?
3 chapters in 3 days, you are just ploughing through this.
If you don't slow down we might cum to the conclusion that you might blow your load prematurely.
In terms of this chapter Sweetie is really in deep and might not be able to pull out in time.
Sexual innuendos aside, good chapter.
Sweetie might be onto something with her time travel idea.
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I've hinted at it very subtly so far, don't worry I'll make it very clear as time goes on.
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Well, i feel I owe it to my readers to update more often after the damned hiatus i put them through so often but i really wish more would comment on the chapters.
6747305 I'm trying to comment more often on stories that I read. (I just keep forgetting)
I WANT to see those inbred stuck-up snob tumors either get their karma served soon...
...OR I'LL SEE THEIR SKULLS SMASHED IN, THEIR SPINES SNAPPED AND THEIR LEGS TORN OUT!
GOD THEY MAKE ME SO F$&@ING FURIOUS!
I can see where you're going with this....
And I LOVE it!
Maybe Silver spoon should be careful with her threats and demands because once they do expose Sweeties secret then there is not really much they can say or do to stop her from getting back at them.
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Absolutely! Not to mention I can't see ANY way this scenario turns out where Twilight is going to laugh off the fact that her student's privacy was violated, once it's all out in the open.. Tossing blackmail into that... well you've clearly got some brass balls if you think you can get away with pissing off one of the four absolute monarchs of your nation and walk away with zero consequences.
I mean, there's basically no shortage of things Twilight could do without directly confronting her to make Diamond's life a living hell, were she so inclined.
Why doesn't Sweety just threaten them back? She's a unicorn and they're earth ponies, so any threats she makes are very real. Plus, she is being tutored by the princess of magic, she would most likely know spells at this point that would terrify adult ponies, and that teen-aged earth ponies would know nothing about! Or, even easier, why doesn't she just threaten to give them dicks to if it's so damaging to there reputation?
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I can think of three reasons why it may not work:
1/ Twilight's a very powerful Alicorn, even before when she was originally a unicorn, but ultimately she's a pacifist. She wants to resolve conflicts using logic and research. Simply put, plenty of book smarts, but little street smarts. Even though she's tutoring Sweetie Belle, she's never going to actually teach her spells that would used to purposely harm other ponies. Not to mention that probably wouldn't make Celestia happy either.
2/ Yes, she's a unicorn and DT and SS are earth ponies, so there is a bit of advantage in Belle's favor. But the issue there is that I'm pretty sure Sweetie Belle wants to try be above the fray and not sink low to their level.
3/ As narcassic as Tiara and Spoon would be, just giving them permnament dicks in a fit of rage would probably backfire immensely. We can already assume that Tiara and Spoon and skanks already (or sluts, whichever you prefer.) There would be a immediate response and somehow those two bullies would make that an asset, like their own cocks are better then the ones that they usually are mounted on regularly (Think about it, that is screaming for a response from the football team at least). Personally I wish Sweetie Belle would do that---yes it's a mistake, but instead of thinking about the negative, she would really need to find a silver lining to it, Everthing has one, sometimes we have to go through a lot to shit to see it though.
I can't help but wishing karma that the bullies get knocked up due to their constant slutting--after all, if Sweetie Belle takes away the one thing of blackmail that Tiara and Spoony has, I have a feeling that the rumors--bad ones--start shining on them, especially if it's common knowledge that they two of them slut out with the athletic teams, and eventually they have buns in their ovens not knowing which colt of the bunch won the race to the egg...I'm pretty sure that they wouldn't like being ridiculed as being the 'the sluttiest little mothers in all high school'...
OMG a lot of this had me cracing up .But purr SB
You're very good at writing high school drama. It feels a lot more real than any high school on TV...
For the record, I am imagining high school Spike as incredibly goddamn sexy. Sorrynotsorry.
Sweetie Belle is really in trouble. She needs help against the bullies, badly!
Sweetie is not really trying to make things up with the CMC is she? I know what they did changed her life forever but she's not even trying to forgive them.
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But isn't Twilight's private library, y'know, private? Wouldn't that mean that the Crusaders committed trespassing and burglary of Twilight's private property? Twilight's shouldn't have to take extra measures to secure her private property from the juveniles of Ponyville. She shouldn't have to suffer any guilt at what happened to Sweetie Belle because of what the Crusaders did. The Crusaders might not have known the consequences of what they were undertaking, but they still consciously consented to their course of action, even though they didn't know the consequences which would arise from their choices and decisions.
Though, writing Twilight feeling guilty for the outcome of Sweetie's physiological transformation and the complications that such brings does feel very organic with Twilight as a character even so. Kudos to you and GreatEater for the shape this story has taken.