Sweetie Belle thought it would be harmless, she thought it would wear off after awhile, she thought Twilight could fix it... She thought wrong. Can the teenage filly keep her hormones in check, and keep her small problem a secret?
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Wonder what Dinky's club is... Really excited to see where this is going!
Hello, just popping in here to point out a few minor errors that I spotted while reading this...
I think that you mean theydon'thave their cutie marks.Thanks to onyx735 for pointing out my stupidity.Should be of a clutz not or.
Wrong they're usage, should be their.
While technically correct it would read much better if you insert a comma after classroom
Final thing to point out: while perfectly fine as it is now, if you made the the thoughts into Itallics it would read much better.{at least in my opinion}
Other than that though good chapter, can't wait to read more.
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AA. Anonymous Autosatiators.
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Maybe Sweetie isn't the only one that has 'extra equipment' and Dinky is picking up on that?
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Nah, she means they don't need to crusade because they already have Cutie Marks.
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That would be quite the package!
Nice SpongeBob reference with the first sentence.
Once again, it's the 'popular' (my opinion: skanky and slutty) girls vs. the friends of our main protagonist. I can see that AB and Scoots want to stand up for Sweetie Belle against DT and Silver Spoon whenever they can, but don't you get the feeling that there needs to be a point where the CMC have to learn about "understanding when and where to take your shots" instead of this widespread weird thing where there is always constant strife?
We get it, but seriously, choose your battles. Part of this thing is because DT and Silver does have a bit of blackmail bait on Sweetie Belle, but it also works because Sweetie Belle herself is allowing it to run her life, instead of the other way around. And it seems like that with the Dinky scene in the cafeteria...she's so worried about others finding about her 'accident' that she ignores others cruical things, like the fact that Dinky picked up on Sweetie having a little bit of time to herself in the middle of the damn place, and mistakenly gets thinking that she's one of those that doesn't give a damn as to when to give a little personal satisfaction.
I understand that if it came to it so easily, then the story would be over. I guess that we are looking for the watershed moment where Sweetie Belle stops being paranoid about what others could think about her issue. What would DT and Silver have on Sweetie then if she went to their faces in front of the entire school body and rants her heart out at the two bullies, which would expose her being a herm (and at this point she doesn't give a damn anymore), as well as how she knows how much of a slut those two have been--pretty sure that there are others that have their suspicions....
6481580 Oh yeah, this does take place in the future [sigh].
An enjoyable read, am glad to see you continued in the end!
yay! More story!
*strings tiara and silver up and readies a razorblade spiked dildo* can I please dismember them pretty please with their virgin blo....slutty blood on top? .... why not .. ok yeah ya need them for the story but I know you could change it...... FINE I wont castrate there filly parts you can put down the shot gun.
but seriously deathsia you write great villains the amount of hate for them is amazing. hell you could even make flutters hateable. I am curious as to how this next part will turn out and if I may be as bold I wanna take a guess on what happens with dinky and sweetie. after eating out skank spoon as bitch tiara climaxes to the show she goes to dinky's club where she learns dinky and her friends are swingers and bucks them all so hard they fall into coma's and all ends happily with scoots and bloom dancing naked over the severed heads of tiara and spoon........ WHAT!? I can't help it you make them antagonistic bitches to easy to hate.
I'm curious if and when the CMC will find out what's going on and how they will react.
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Ba-da-pum Tsh.
But really, I think it's probably just a sex club for fillies and they're going to be real real surprised by their newest member. ifyouknowwhatimean.
I can't wait to see whats next .
I love it so much and you obviously put a lot of effort into it because of how long it is and still isn't complete
I look forward to further development
I wonder what dickie with do when sweetie belle goes
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This is the real one: i wonder what dinkie will do when sweetie belle gets there
It's the D-Club
...Y'know...D for Dinky?
...Right?
A secret club? I wonder...
This video popped into my head when I read this. https://youtu.be/HA1mbZ_MMh8