After your near death experience in Manehattan, the group tries to recover and continue on. But life is never set in stone as it seems. Sequel to Regret.
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Great to see an update! Awesome chapter here!
Looks like the jig is up for Rainbow Dash's past.
Also, what about Swift Shadow? Is he planing his revenge against Spike and the stallion anytime soon?
Emperor above.... Poor Rainbow....
Oh boy. This... will not end well.
EDIT: I read the rest of the chapter. Heart-wrenching. Well done, sir. :)
I read the chapter way too fast and now I have to wait 2 to 3 months for another chapter.
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I'm glad to announce that the next chapter will be part of the DLC pack for Half Life 3 upon release!
But to be serious, I'm gonna force myself to start writing at lesser spans of time. Even I hate spending months writing a chapter that could be done in an hour or two.
I’m fine with learning about how much she hates us this way but she invited us to her house. Why hasn’t she gotten rid of anything leaking to that accident. Also don’t like how memories just coming back but I guess there isn’t a better or interesting for the past memories.
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In terms of expanding upon that, the realistic scenario is that she wrote those entries, threw them in the trash after she got back from the city, and the rush and whole endeavor led her to forget. And typically being a lazy character, it's likely she wouldn't clean it up for a while. I'm one of those types of people that throws stuff in my tiny bedroom trashcan and doesn't throw it away for several months. In a sense, Rainbow forgot to take out the trash in her bedroom that she put in months before. When said as poor as I said it, it does sound like lazy writing, but I based it a bit off personal experience to an extent.
As for the memories coming back, it's not impossible. Memories can be repressed or lost and slowly or even suddenly return at times. For example, people who have suffered traumatic experiences in the pass will repress those memories, only for them to come back in the future. It's been around 4-5 weeks since the last chapter in the story's timeline, so our brain has had plenty of time to heal, and the memories will start coming back.
I’m wondering, we banged Rainbow for weeks and days on end, nothing wrong. We banged AJ ones and she got pregnant... is there something coming with that or...?
Besides that, awesome chappy. The emotions where, personally, well placed. Can’t wait for the next one.
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Well, we've banged AJ at least a couple times. :)
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Not storywise, Regret only mentioned ones in the swimming pool if I’m correct.
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Also the bathroom before we got rekt.
I definitely understand our guy's anger. Can't help but dislike him rooting through Rainbow's trash to find all the notes, though.
Uuhhh... who the heck's Kinny?
Did you mean Lilly?
A wise decision...
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MLG rekt damn it lol. Still, if is mentioned she takes a pill or potion to prevent pregnancy, I’m a-okay with it. But it just leaves me now with a “its possible” feel, which is not nurtured!
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Kinny is Nurse Redheart's first name. Well, story wise. :P
Dash called her that earlier in the story, but I had a feeling people probably wouldn't remember her name.
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I think Rainbow is infertile.
This is interesting. Very interesting. It seems like she is comparing him to Grace, which if i recall correctly is the dude who raped her in the side story. Thats why she hated him so much. All the pain Grace caused her, the way she thought of him.
Her past is haunting her through you
Speaking of that side story. What happened to it?
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It's actually part of After, after the end of act one. The title is "Like Always"
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...now that you point that out it would make sense reading it like that.
I hope not...
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I completely missed that, first time I read this chapter.
Fuck...
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Oh thanks! I dont know why i thought it was a side story.
Meh honestly I think I would be more upset about them hiding the fact that AJ's foal is mine. That's really lowdown and unacceptable IMO.
Yeah Rainbow has said some pretty hateful things. However, just the fact that she's stuck by him, and even slept with him, should be more than enough to make him realize how bad she feels about what happened. Hell, maybe after he's had some time to cool down he will get it together and score AJ and Rainbow.
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The way I interpreted that bit of them withholding the information about the pregnancy was mainly for his sake. Since he was still recovering, it wouldn't be best to tell him straight away that he got someone pregnant before he lost his memories. It's a whole mixed bag, but a situation like that can definitely go a million ways.
And I'm glad you actually dug into that. People can definitely be irrational and dumb when they're mad, that they don't want to be around whatever ticked them off, which is mainly what I went for. And I think I actually watched the MLP film right before I finished this chapter, so I think it had a bit of inspiration. But it's been so long, I don't fully remember. :P
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Looking back at this comment, part of me actually wants to make it its own separate story. But I guess it also depends on if everybody thinks it's fine where it is. :D