After your near death experience in Manehattan, the group tries to recover and continue on. But life is never set in stone as it seems. Sequel to Regret.
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Damn... Poor Dash...
Wait...what? Didn't she say that she was infertile? You know...can not have kids? Unless she was either lying to him about being infertile or that even she didn't know that she was pregnant and had a miscarriage or some shit...unless it was Applejack since she was pregnant or if it was Lilly.
Hell I don't even know anymore!
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It's Applejack's baby that was lost. She miscarried. I wanted it to be subtle, simple, but also impactful. Though, I had a feeling people might get confused.
Good chapter.
Though, how can someone be infertile from having sex/being raped? I'm confused about that.
FUCKING CALLED IT! Where's my medal?
'Drops mic.'
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Injuries, plus a lot of other medical issues, can lead to infertility. While in real life, IIRC, it's not permanent, the assault left her infertile.
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Im pretty sure rape can cause infertility. If violent enough, and untreated, it can cause abdominal injuries.
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I see.
Well, I guess you learn something new everyday. I just hope they find a way for Rainbow to have kids.
"When there's a will, there's a way." That's what they say.
So you're telling us that we have to wait untill December 2018 for anymore chapters?
(If it takes you that long to make them)
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Kinda saw it coming, but... Damn...
Also, this...
Really reminded me of a comment I wrote on the "As It Is" chapter...
Did I inspire you? Totally okay if I did. Heck, I'd feel honored.
8678420 OH damn, now that is definitely going to screw a lot of things up in the future.
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Yep!
ARE YOU KIDDING ME!?
We’re all over here freaking out while I Am The Night is just:
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I'm honored, sir. Thought it sounded awfully familiar.
Many feelings were stirred during this chapter. Leaving us with a haunting cliffhanger which makes me both sad and happy. God-bloody-dammit.
Hol’ up, the entire last act? And, this isn’t the last act... damn son.
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I'll be writing out the whole third act, which is planned to be the final act, before publishing it. That way, it has a decent schedule from one chapter to the next. That way, people aren't waiting months at a time for the next chapter.
When I first started this story, I was planning on making it a really long one, going over several weeks and months at a time, even years. But as time went on, I didn't necessarily get bored of the idea, but it would've been tough to properly tackle. There will be time jumps here and there, but nothing too long.
Plus, after I retcon and cut down some of the chapters, the story's gonna be a hell of a lot shorter.
Also, I do plan on creating an alternate version of the story on Fanfiction, where Swift Shadow exists as he did in the early chapters. So in a way, you get more of the same story without missing the old one.
I really had a Crowley mindset when I started making stories. Hell, Crowley and even Darf are the main reasons I'm writing today. I hope to be as good as them one day.
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I’m not holding anything against you, mate. Just the mentioning that you’ll finish it is music to my ears. Too many have been left unfinished. Besides, you have given this site a great story to enjoy.
Keep it up like this, and you might indeed become as good as your inspirations.
I’ll be waiting patienlty for your update(s).
GAH! THE EMOTION AND FEELS ON THIS ONE ARE TO MUCH I WUV IT >u<
I'll admit, even with the amount of sex the two shared together from before, I knew Rainbow would come out saying that she's infertile since she allowed him to release himself inside of her back in chapter 10. Looking forward for future chapters of Act 3 in the near future :D
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Something tells me our guy won't be too happy not being told about the foal...
I just went through both Regret and After in a day or so, definitely liked it! The writing style isn't really what I'm used to, but it really turned into a good take! I expected what had happened to Dash early on, but the final cliffhanger really got me! Bravo
No shit!
?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!!?!!!!????!?!?!!!!?!?!?!????????
WAHT???!!!!?!?!?!?!?
Hey at least I finally caught up. Now I just need to catch up on The Maretian... by about 130 Sols...
Writing the entire act before publishing? This could take a while...
BUT I'LL WAIT :D
Kudos for the silly authors note
👍👍
Damn... That's brutal... Those seven words are worse than what was described earlier in the chapter.
WHY ARE YOU LEAVING IT LIKE THAT!?!