After your near death experience in Manehattan, the group tries to recover and continue on. But life is never set in stone as it seems. Sequel to Regret.
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I get the feeling our guy has had a rough life...
Great chapter. And I can't wait to see what nickname you choose for the MC.
"Do you hate her at all?"
Interesting question for our hero to ask...
"Time doesn't care."
Man that's so true.
Kind of sad to see that second person won't be as prominent. :<
7758933 Second person might be used in a later chapter, but if I choose to give the MC a name, I might go to first person and third person.
Though I won't be ditching second person. I'll be using it in something like clopfics and such.
But I might use 2nd POV for the next chapter. :)
7759043
Aww, shame. I really liked the immersion of second person in this story.
7759185 Yeah. Second person is best for this story.
This Chapter Has Me Craving For More Honestly I'm Saddened We Are Moving Away From The Second Person Perspective But I Know The Story Will Be Just As Enjoyable Looking At The Reader's Character In. A Different Way
I hope for no name cause I like to still be him in the story :v
I think second is best for this story. Its how it started and how the first story started. I'd rather see this end how it started. You could add a Name but still keep the second person. But doing that this far in really loses the reader and is a heavy shock even if you give a warning. That's what I think.
7759542 Perhaps second person could stay in for a while, though rare, but still have a use near the end. :)
7759707 Well the second person is what brought me to these two stories and changing the layout of the story kind of losses me. I mean I'll still be reading this, but my interest will have gone down quiet a bit.
7760058 I'll probably do that. Crowley did a similar thing with some of his stories, calling the character Rookie as a way of being able to name the character while still doing second person.
Though, I'm pretty bad when it comes to naming 2nd person characters. lol
7760512 well either make up a name and roll with it or you do the "quote" your name ark which I've seen done well or you continue with what you're doing now. Remember the reader is at the whim of the story so long as it fits to the story it will work.
I think you mean
It made her shake.
7763489 The power of writing a chapter at 5 in the morning. :)
I won't mind the add of 3rd person perspective and a nickname. The story is still likeable and can get even better with more options to write with!
Though this basks the question; what nickname? And who will give it?
7764654 No idea. But I've got a while to think about it. I'd take a reader's suggestion if it's liked enough! :)
7764800 Brainiac. An ironic nickname.
I've enjoyed the story so far, and your others as well. Thanks for all the late nights when I should be studying or sleeping to go to work. I'm glad I finally caught up so I could say something.
If you're planning on moving forward with switching to straight third person, maybe the idea of nicknaming him AP (for accident prone) or may be just MC (for main character) isn't a bad idea. Keep up the good work.
7765864 AP would be embarrassing to explain to other ponies when they want to know what it means. XD
7765989 Alright, maybe something that follows after Swift, like Soft Light. Or, sticking with MC, Mellow Chap. I don't know, gonna mull it over in my sleep.
7766196 Those sound pretty good too. :)
Mush Brain.
7767487 Imagine the sex with him.
"M-Mushyyy~..."
7768051 Thanks for that image...
7768875
I love this fic, but I'm getting an issue with this one where it doesn't show up with updates under my favorites list... I've seen this on weirdly select few fics before but this is very depressing. :(
I've added it to my tracking list (much smaller) in hopes of finding updates sooner. Here's to hoping something gets fixed.
7771510 I'll be working on the next chapter this week, so when I update it, perhaps it might do something. :)
How about Rainbow Banger?
Or... not...
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"He found very little, nothing to back himself upon.
So he began to take a look at the patient's files, see what more he could potentially dig up. Past injuries, medical history, etc.
And he found something, definitely.
But it was nothing about seizures.
It went all the way back to his childhood, as in depth as it could have been, supposedly all said by him.
He couldn't believe it."
Not good, I'm guessing?
7774321 Though our hero does seem to have Wolverine-like healing ability.
7786676 Well that's just due to magic. :)
7787371 Still, it's impressive.
7789505 Indeed. He's got video game healing abilities.
I am officially caught up! Now after reading the 8 chapters, now ima rant read if ya want
I missed I really do like how we sat swifts morale conflict and him seeing what he was planing really didnt come out like he wanted, how RDs horrid teen experience made sense of why an element of loyalty can snap like a stick (from regret) and the expliation on how our character healed so fast and his memory loss and possible fix (memories are there but buried we've only heard the bad come out so far) at that as I've seen from author notes, you've been conflicted with 2nd person which is what initially drew me in to the story, I love that personally, however you do why you want.
All and all I can't wait to see what happens what I would like is to see our memories come back personally and maybe just maybe (kinda like out Fallout new Vegas qoute) deal with Swift shadow (our Benny bastard) in "our" way weather it's killing him or having him come to terms with you and possibly settling this with prison for him and such? Who knows plus then the end of this chapter with Dash seemingly losing it it's a what's gonna happen type of thing?
Anyways I loved it all, can't wait for the next installment of this story!
7803457 And I thought I posted a ton of comments...
7804136 that would be me reflecting every chapter or couple of chapters haha! I usually don't do that, but yeah I didn't think of it showing up on here I swear it's more normal in chapter comment view
7804282 I get ya. :)
7805225 but now I'm caught up and I am stuck yet again loathing while I wait for the next chapter, i fell for the story in the last book now I'm hooked haha!
7790548 Still planning to bring Aqua Lilly back?
7807696 Yep. But only I know when. ;)
7814470 yeah, an outburst like that shouldn't be put to the side but at the same time looked at in a manner of which is understandable, personally after something so tramatic (Grace and our injury's) and how our character is I'd truly forgive her, but thats my nature even after the horrid things she said she was still there for us (our protagonist) and cared for us such as when stuff started to blow up, that's just me though and I'm not gullible or dumb, but I am forgiving not to say I'll forget
In a way im saying actions speak louder han words here
7814548 Exactly. In light of everything Rainbow has done since then, I'm pretty sure our guy will forgive her.
7820766 i hope so, but it depends on this amnesia he has and how much comes to him at once, being overloaded with that much good or bad can make anyone freak out, however once he's himself and with terms of what's happend and what's going on and time gone by I'm sure he will, it's just I don't look forward to see our reaction of reliving all that trama if we get to it at all
Edit: typo found
7811239 You still out there?
7860789 Yep. Slowly edging along. lol