Chapter 2 still dead.

6713000 What?

Please wake him up soon.

6713099 Don't worry, he will. >:3

6713046 It's chapter two and I still pretty much dead.

6713205 You're referring to the character, I assume?

Nope, he's alive.

For now...! (Duh duh duh....?)

glad to read this story I am

I'm just waiting for him to wait up now, the suspense is killing me. (Assuming he does wake up but I won't think like that) Be back for more in two days.

>he wakes up

>who is purple horse, why am I in bed

>in coma he dream of being Russian secret police

>rainbowdash runs over and hugs him

>he shoots rainbow

>never trust secret Russian dream police

6713532 thx for spoiling meanie :C

6713601

Alternative version:

>he wakes up

>rainbow runs over

>he yells "I SEE THEM GOOKS IN THE TREES! NAPAAAAAALM"

>he sets rainbow on fire

>never trust viet dream

6713614 now you spoil'd the spinoff :'C

6711718 "Whenever Rainbow Dash does wing-ups, she doesn't push herself up, she just pushes Equestria down."

Now that I have been promptly shredded by feels once. It must be done twice. Here we go!

Really enjoying this read. Was a big fan of regret and now I can't wait for the long ride ahead for this story too. Best of luck to you my friend!

Ohohoho man, what an awesome chapter! My feels, dem words, ;n; awesome.
And I can't help but worry, gawd, you're now one of the few people who can get me worried about the outcome of this entire thing will he wake up? Will he remember? OR WILL HE BE A VEGGIE-TABLE?!

But... I am going to read this all the way through! :D hehehe! Its just that good.

Nice job, nice job!

6713099 If by 'soon' you mean on Act 3, sure he will.

6714713

Act 3

Another amazing chapter! Just one question? How many chapters is this ark going to be? Just curious!

6717742 The original plan was six, but I divided chapter 3 into 2 chapters. There will be a total of 7 chapters for this first act, and around 12-13 chapters for the second act. :D

6713131 he should just die next chapter and then end the story.

6718079

>be oc
>get stabbed
>in coma
>die
>shits
>the end :D

6713258

I want him to wake up imagining that it was a a dream or some shit, or ooo, good ol' cliché amnesia.

6719278 IMHO, amnesia stories are rare on this site. At least, from my experience. :D

I still hope he wakes up angry towards RD. Although, I'm very sure thag will not be the case...

Quite the chapter, mate. Probs!

A pretty good chapter night for a second I thought rainbow was going to clop to him/me since her feelings changed differently from hating him so much (since its second person)

Swift Shadow: Wanted for Murder
Bounty:150'000 ß
Warning: Considered armed and dangerous. Engage with caution

Fun stuff chapter two, read-a-thon tonight to catch up REALY liking the chapters so far I find it hard to write in their mind properly having attempted it in my note book, can't wait to read the rest! Thank ka for the amazing story Mr. Night

I need him to wake up..... now. why? because. i. want. to. see. rainbow's. PAIN.

SWifts war should not be part of this story because now your introducing too many elements onto into it and it convaludes the plot to the point where it's not interesting anymore. But swifts WAR would make for an interesting side story.

And then there was the party .

...
So...
All of this...
Could have been avoided...
If she just...
Didn't try quitting her stress relief method...
Of CLOPPING.