This story is a sequel to Octavius
After being together for nearly three years since the Christmas party, Octavius and Vinyl's life couldn't be too much better. Octavius has a steady job performing, Vinyl gets booked fairly frequently for big events, and they saved up enough money to move out of Dash's place and get their own house. Life's really looking up for the once down on his luck cellist.
Then their three year anniversary rolls around. And at another Christmas party, Octavius' life will once again be changed, for better or for worse.
Chapters (22)
You're back! ^^ And with a good start.
Octavius: So you give me a present that you already used?
Very sorry, but I had to ^^'
6283280 I'm glad you like the story :) I did think about the fact that Vinyl had used it, (^^' ) but I figured that'd be a good way for her to tell him
That one craked me xD.
I feared that you would fall into the boys and girls stereotypes, but you handle that well with the humor.
(Your chapters leave a taste of :"not enough" everytime, but I'll wait patiently for the next one ^^)
6308774 thank you so much for all your kind words, both on this story and my previous one. I'm glad you're enjoying the ride :) as for the 'not enough', that's the point; it keeps people coming back for more XD
6309077 My pleasure, and don't worry :what I say, I mean it. I try to not be blinded by enthousiasm
6309382 All the more reason to appreciate your kindness ^_^ hopefully I'll continue to provide enjoyable content
Heh... wrong chapter pal x)
6369572 I'll fix it
A few errors here and there ( I can't point them I'm on my phone sorry ) aside from that it's a short but sweet chapter. And congratulations for your niece!
6372856 Thank you very much! Yes, since I have no editor a few mistakes are to be expected. I went back and read the original story and saw quite a few. I try my best to edit as I write
Ow poor Flutters... Just want a hint before the next chapter: is the boyfriend a show canon character or an oc?
6489907 I don't have an oc but I'm not sure quite yet on who to make the boyfriend. I'm open to suggestions as long as it's not too far off of their show characterization :)
You don't really describe the scenes where she gets hit so I don't think the dark tag will be necessary. Dont beat yourself for not posting very often. Quality over quantity and you do a pretty good job here. If only the chapters were a bit longer °w° (yes it's hypocrite, but what can I say? I love this story! ^^')
6520242 I'm very glad you're enjoying the story as much as you are, and as for length of the chapters, I think I will start trying to make them longer. My goal is at least 1000 words every chapter, but I think I could do better. Thank you very much for your continued support
6520252 You're welcome ^^
Either Tavi is doomed (twice Vinyl's personality) or he gains an ally, time will tell ^^. I wonder when Flutters will meet the rest of the "crew"
6566435 Don't worry, I have quite the plan for Flutters meeting everyone else; as for Tavi being 'doomed', I'll agree with you and say you'll just have to wait and see what I have in store
6566541 Ow yiiis!
good thing i double checked for a sequel to octavius :D
Really nice chapter. Very good use of discorded Doctor (this guy is so much of a jerk, he has no sence of fashion
x), more seriously I think it was a bit stereotypical making him all black ). I shed tears for Ditzy, gosh...
6642609 Well I wasn't exactly going for discorded, per se. My real goal was to base his design off of the ninth Doctor, who did wear all black. Anyway, I am glad you enjoyed the chapter, and as for ditzy, I about broke my own heart righting this chapter
6642652 Of course, sorry didn't though of the ninth doctor.
The feels... But I was wondering, what is her disease exactly?
6672011 No idea honestly. I think I made it up?
That cliffhanger! I can't wait °w°
Hey everyone, I posted a new blog post. I'm hoping to get some help with where to take this story. Who knows? Maybe I'll pick your idea to go forward with.
I don't see why people would be mas at you, it was a good chapter ^^. I like where this is going
You can't imagine how glad I was to see that you updated ^^ and this bit of nostalgia was a good to refresh our memories about what happened. Welcome back Koschei ^^
7210382 I'm so sorry to have kept you waiting, but I hope to have my updates out more regularly. Thank you for your kind words, and I hope you continue to enjoy what I have to offer.
Good chapter ^^ maybe you could have settled the moment and location before the big dialogue. It's better to be able to visualise.
7232979 I just wanted to try something new. I'm not sure if I'll do it again, but I thought it was a pretty clever idea.
7233621 I's not bad. Having no narration in between helps to focus on the characters indeed. I said that because I'm very visual and was a bit lost at first but it's not that bothering ^^'
7234103 Well I'm glad you enjoyed it, and like I said I just wanted to experiment with new writing ideas
Maybe the action goes a little too fast. She merely got changed and Dash is already here. Take your time to settle the mood. Apart from that, sweet chapter. I really like having Ditzy's pov from time to time ^^
7259894 Yeah I agree it felt rushed but I think the idea was she took a while to get dressed. Remember she's still a bit slow on some things
And for those curious, I put a warning on the chapter since some people might be upset by Vinyl's story.
I finally caught up with the last three chapter. Wow, so many things are happening, I fear the worst for Ditzy ;A;
You don't have to excuse yourself because a chapter is short. On another note, I wasn't ready for this emotionnal rollercoaster °w°"
Come on, your updates always worth the wait ^^ nice fluffy chapter
I can't talk for everybody but I'll gladly read more of you ^^ I like how you write Ditzy, it feels very realistic
7926335 Thank you very much for those kind words; I'm glad you enjoy my work as much as you do
Alright, I cried. Good job and thank you for taking the time to make this story. Looking forward to the others