ok whos the fucking retard who downvoted my comment? you are going to show yourself you butthurt little cunt? whatever poor maud i am going to kill pokey for that maud cant die she just cant.

I like it. Please continue.

when i found out he was walking with his next victim, i swore i could hum the "Jaws" theme in my head.

The plateau looked much different in the light of day. No longer shrouded in darkness, Twilight found herself pleasantly surprised at the magnificent view offered by the
There, on the horizon, was her destination:

I don't know if you're still working on this, but that first paragraph seems to cut off too early, like you forgot to finish the sentence or maybe deleted part of it by accident.

A year huh? Let's hope it stays dead.

I eagerly await the next chapter!

So, I felt like it was worth making an account to coment on this. Realy enjoyed popped, looking forward to reading this this one.
Keep up the excellent work :)

You should keep working on this! I loved popped and id really like to see this story come to an end in a satisfying way!

*that moment you finish the first one, goes to the sequel and discovers it haven't been updated in almost two years*

8008829 I know how you feel

Hmmm...and interesting couple of chapters so far. I look forward to see how then goes.

I really hope Maud is okay though....

I'd feel "Popped" should be trilogy, and I think there'd be key storylines like losing 2/3rds of the Mane 6 the way they did and having the Pies, Apples and Ponyville being generally on edge, including the Cutie Mark Crusaders and Button Mash.

I have zero clue if this story will ever be finished, but in case it won't, I wish Tapoff would share the reason with us. Popped was among the best "darkest of grimdark" material for me here on FimFic, and I would hate to see the plot die. I even had some suggestions (well, more like questions) for the author, but now I'm not so certain.
I'll just keep tracking and see if something happens.

I really wish you'd keep writing MLP. You're really awesome at it.
Links to your new works?

Shame this was never continued, if only to at least see Pokey finally meet some form of major loss beyond losing his home.

Chucky Kills Pokey in the most badass way.

Since the story stops on that note, I’m just gonna say that Pokey finally died when he fell off that cliff.

The End.