For the past millennium, the small and technologically-advanced Equestrian Empire has waged war against the old and corrupt Cleomanni Confederacy, employing weapons of terrifying might in their struggle. It has been three years since they lost.
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I really don't understand why this doesn't have more views.
Looks interesting, will give it a read.
Finally gotten around to read the first chapter of this story, and it is off on a good start so far. I am a sucker for anything Mecha and and I have been dying to see a real pony mecha story, you made my day with that.
If you are interested in more mech designs let me know about it, Link to my DA Mecha gallery in the link bellow
https://www.deviantart.com/amalgamzaku/gallery/65314007/Pony-Mecha
Just finished reading what you have so far, and I love all the ideas that you are presenting so far, especially the mumurdons, I wonder how they will manage to get them to have some of them join fellow pony side? What could have happened to the Changeling in all this time could they have hidden themselves elsewhere or are they still bidding their time for the resistance to rise up again? I wonder if the ponies had huge advantage over their other races with using deportation and portholes faster and accurate then then what the could do. I wonder what changed everything all of the sudden after wagging was against their enemies for a thousand year. I I hope Twilight went into hiding and finding ways to restore the pony race into strength again. I wonder is the remaining fleets was working to a vast breathing program. I am guessing that the enemies has also raised their own pony communality completely ignorant of their heritage loyal to their slave masters.
Looking forward to see what you will come up with next in this, it's off on a great start.
Nothing like the feeling of sticking it to the enemy in the form of a raid on said enemy’s supply depot.
Nah, all you need is a drill and you're solid!
Time to sign your soul away.
....I'm not gonna remember a single syllable of that.
Sit your ass down, Storm. One Twilight Sparkle is worth an entire Equestrian Empire consisting of nothing but Chargers.
You know, I'm still wondering where Discord is during all of this. You can't just ignore him. I mean, physically you can just not write about him at all, but he's a seriously huge plot hole to just ignore all willy nilly. Dude actually kind of likes Twilight, you can't say he absolutely wouldn't just Thanos Snap his way through the enemy lines to help her.
...eh, I've shipped worse.
Yeah, because they won't reinforce security now that you've been spotted in the area.
Ah, the most cursed phrase in all of fiction.
Dude, your actions were the only thing keeping the two of you alive. You've got nothing to feel ashamed of!
At some point we're going to have to find out who's watching these transmissions, within story context.
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True. In this particular setting, Twi is pretty ruthless. One Twi alone may not be the equal of an entire battalion of chargers, but she's easily as destructive as a whole lance of them. It's not her raw combat potential that makes her such a threat, however. It's the fact that she's a Tony Stark-level wiz technologist who can MacGyver up anything, anywhere. Storm doesn't even realize how valuable of a resource she actually is. Most ponies think she's "just" their monarch. They don't know how deep into the trenches Twilight is willing to go for them.
I'll give you a (very spoilery!) hint. He probably would try and save Twilight, if he wasn't still encased in stone.
The reveal of their actual identity is a stinger that only shows up at the very tail-end.
Probably a waiver
I'm honestly surprised they're vehicles dont have trackers
Attaching wooden blocks to the back hoofs probably
This oddly reminds me of xcom or star wars now. A small group of rebels against a massive galactic empire of aliens
Remove "of".
Something's missing here.
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They may not produce any off-axis thrust, but they do produce a great deal of vibration, rattling the hull right through the arm. They are, essentially, 200mm Metal Storm guns, after all. Basically a rapid-fire howitzer.
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Good eye. I'll fix those up.