For the past millennium, the small and technologically-advanced Equestrian Empire has waged war against the old and corrupt Cleomanni Confederacy, employing weapons of terrifying might in their struggle. It has been three years since they lost.
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New chapter today. Sorry for the delay. Things have been a little hectic in my life lately. Well, more than a few of our lives, actually.
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That was definitely the tone I was going for. In short, a wallow. I've always found fics like that cathartic.
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Hey, thanks for the commentary! If you see any spelling issues, I'd be happy if you pointed them out. However, I noticed you mentioned a couple things that were already correct.
That was deliberate. To ply a trade, to ply the seas, et cetera.
Also deliberate. It's a colloquialism. "If I hear word one" = "If I hear the first word".
One of these was a definite error.
Fixed! Thanks.
How many chapters long will this story be?
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It's far from over. Based on the outline in my head, I'd say we're about one-quarter of the way through.
YES!!! NEW CHAPTER!!! damn.... it's super long too. I know what I'm gonna spend the rest of my day doing
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Weird.. I never got notified by the comment
That's only the start of where the true science starts happening
I'm betting one of these mares arent gonna make it back alive
I thought they'd be called prima and donna
Jeez... talk about bringing order to chaos... these mares are bat shit crazy...
The fuck is that?? Is that the reason why she's able to breath without oxygen?
I agree this conversation should have happened after the mission. Also where the fuck is bellwether to reel these mares in??
I hate you more and more for letting these crazy ponies basically attack storm....
Stop withholding information... you've nearly killed everyone by not explaining important shit
Aww man... why do I have a feeling he's not gonna come back? 😢
You call that a knife? I'd call that a fucking great sword. Reminds me of the butchers from gears of wars
Hail hydra!!!
Wew, that fucking ending. Shoulda thought someone with the name 'Barleywine' would be a manipulative scumbucket.
Oh, and-
Kinda fitting that the race of murderous sexpests are basically a massive euphemism for the Mouse Utopia experiment. Meanest hamsters I've ever had the misfortune of learning about.
Excellent chapter, Train.
Deer? What deer? I dont remember a deer
Sounds likes America
So it seems that not all humans are affiliated with the Vargr. I wonder just how many of these groups are out there. Maybe a few in Equestrian space, perhaps? This makes me wonder at just how badly the human were screwed over in the past.
Also, fuck Barleywine.
Holy shit... and here I thought the pony cannibals were bad
Woooo!! I'm glad somebody agrees with me
Bellwether is not gonna be happy...
centuries of endless war...
She's a cyborg??
That answers my question
Oh shit... she's definitely infected too
Wait what...? She doesn't have the kiss? Then what the bloody hell is wrong with her??
Good god... this is getting worse every day
Well shit. Now I hate him too..
No!!! Nooooo!! You fool! Never run deeper into the ally!!! That's how you'll die faster!!
Here I thought the oligarchs hired the vandals to stop the rebels
I think it fits perfectly
*whistles* damn.. if that thing wasn't so scary it be fucking awesome
What the absolute fuck!? HOLY SHIT HE'S ALIVE!!! BEST CHARACTER STILL LIVES!!!
Bahahaha!!! 🤣🤣
I mean... us as the readers knew about the mole since chapter 5 ish? I wanna say during the raid with storm and bellwether? But nothing ever came of it till now
I hope it doesn't get nicked while she's gone
Small group of rebels against massive insurmountable odds. Always good odds
I wish I had that trinket irl
Its good to have a reporter
Wait wha....?? I was not expecting a female damarkind
Um well. We have literal cthulu type horrors that literally fucked innocent creatures in the head. The cliomani? (Cant spell) who literally mod their females to the literal Teeth just to fight in the war. Danmarkand who kill eat and fuck captives. many other space civilians that are varying degrees of fucked up
So yes every race is completely fucked up except for ponies to some degree
Son of a bitch....
I never knew the word negotiated could be used like this
I'm gonna call you bucket
Ooooo. He knows the danger. Its always good when a random bad guy actually takes the mc seriously
Yeeesss join the dark side. Use your anger to your advantage
What the fuck are they doing!?
Wait a minute.... what if.. that's her boyfriend!!!