For the past millennium, the small and technologically-advanced Equestrian Empire has waged war against the old and corrupt Cleomanni Confederacy, employing weapons of terrifying might in their struggle. It has been three years since they lost.
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New chapter! Thought the battle for Tar Pan was over? It's only just begun.
2021 will be better, right?
Oh damn. Here I go jinxing it.
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When has anything ever gone right for storm and the team??
Why does their emblem remind me of the brotherhood of steel?
Whelp.. I had other plans to do but nevermind those. Now I gotta read
Damn.. your durable
From pony lift?
I mean she's not wrong. She's seen the horrors
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Ah, good catch. Fixing.
That's really sad 😢
What's the onus?
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Onus = Burden, Responsibility, Obligation
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/onus
From Merriam-Webster:
Now I have images in my head of some quadruped Mechs flipping a freakin Carrier from Deserts of Kharak... Yeet!
Thank you very much, this was a very entertaining chapter, can't wait for the next one! :D
Its only illegal if you get caught!!
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Cool!! I never knew that word existed till now
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Your welcome
Now if only they can get this information to the remnin, it'll be a literal game changer!!
Itll be one hell of a ride quill!! And you get front row seats!!
Who else wants to cook s'mores when everything is done?😅
Oh my god!!! They're still alive!! Equestria isn't the last bastion of ponykind!! 😭😭 (happy tears)
Honestly, I was kinda disappointed that BD didn't have a physical body in that conjecture place along with the mech. It would have been cute if DB and storm could finally hug each other
Is it a normal knife? Or was it the knife she won after killing the damarkind back in vanhoover or something?
Does this make storm their leader now?
There goes my idea😅
What about her new sword?
I wonder how her cybernetic hand is doing
I like how he thinks
Aw man... stop ruining the potential toys you can get storm!!
Damn!!! They had enough stuff to make lots of those awesome toys
She'll definitely be mad if she hears this
This chapter was awesome!!!!!!
I'm surprised this didn't opened up with them interrogating the commander from the first wave
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Funny you should say that. I was planning on that, originally, but decided that the ELF would prefer to prioritize the ongoing battle, leaving stuff like that for later.
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That is true but it would also help them in preparation for what would happen to come in the second wave
Ok. It's been in the back of my mind bugging me this whole fic:What happened to Luna, and why do ponies STILL ignore her? It's all about the 'Martyred Maiden' Celestia, as per usual.
From common knowledge we know that the Three Alicorns attended a diplomatic meeting, but only Twilight survived. So, my theory has been thus:
Celestia pontificated. Luna grew bored and sipped her drink. The drinks had all been dosed with tranquilizer. Celestia, or Twilight noticed and Celestia immediately told Twilight to GTFO while she tried to grab/defend Luna and ended up dying.
Luna survived, in a fashion. Those Enhanced Equines that I can't remember the name of, the ones that grow so big they need to be cut out? Cleomanni made Luna into the Alien Queen, and force her spawn into the lesser equines.
Let's see here...
Storm meets horse God by making friends with BD, acquires a superpowered McGuffin as a result of her friendship-induced spirit-walk/acid trip, she beats the shit out of a Jackal in single combat, forcing the Damarkind to peel off from the fight for their dick-stroking ceremonial reasons, then we see her working with her old Charger-buddies in the modern day instead of in a flashback, which ends in trapping Storm's old tormentor in a sci-fi equivalent of a P-1500 Landkreuzer by flipping the bitch...
Things are going pretty well for Storm in this chapter, barring the usual gamut of warcrimes displayed.
...which probably means the next chapter's gonna have Storm suffer some really fucked up shit.
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Karkadanns, I believe. Might be an issue with that particular theory, though, given it looks like individual mares need to serve as incubators for Karks rather than be re-used multiple times. Dunno about you by I'm pretty sure something that big'll cause serious structural damage to the womb, and if Luna were being used as a pseudo-Alien Queen, there really wouldn't be much of a point to the Imps using mares as karkpods beyond sadism.
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One. Numbers. One mare can not birth an army, even a small one, by herself.
Two. Less Alien Queen I guess and more Experiment Zero and Template, but that doesn't quite evoke the same horor imagery. If I were to posit the science behind it, they modified her eggs and greatly enhanced her production, but to avoid killing such a rare specimen they use lesser mares as incubators.
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Ah, fair points. Didn't think of that, really.