For the past millennium, the small and technologically-advanced Equestrian Empire has waged war against the old and corrupt Cleomanni Confederacy, employing weapons of terrifying might in their struggle. It has been three years since they lost.
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Riveting. Simply Riveting. Avidly awaiting the next chapter.
It sounds like Pony kind might be best severed to build something like a migrant fleet and bug out. There's no way to win the fight, so it will have to be at least flight.
So now that I got done with the first three chapters I can say how I feel about this.
Overall I love it, it's not every day you see a setting placed after a big wer. Most of all on the side that lost so badly. It's rather refreshing in its own way. So far the story is keeping me engaged even if feels lacking in details at times. Nothing to horabel, I can follow what is going on well but some things come off as rather vague and unclear was to what happend or is going on. But this may be for the best given how long the chapters are. Speeding up some spots is welcome to help it move along.
So over all, I love it and really love the Chargers. Call me a fan of them and I hope to see one kicking some ass soon.
*looking at the cover picture and character tags* not that I'm calling you a liar or anything, buuuuut you may want a fire extinguisher for your pants.
Time to make some friends.
Not dying from venom is kinda important
I'm gonna name you bucket from now on
Probably not
AYE SHE DOES GET IT BACK!!!! THATS AWESOME
This man is an absolute loon!! I love him already
Things were how it was explained to me. Things is how I'm explaining it to you
Okay that's just bs to not tell everyone about it and let them figure it out on their own
Of course because there's always more
I was not expecting twilight to be the empress of all pony kind
Damn that's a very depressing note to end on..
I think what really settles a story like this on a personal level are the extensive and deep descriptions of Pain.
What really bugs me is that I cant visualize most of the Character descriptions here. I noticed how in published Novels the descriptions stop at "white hair, thin face" and then it is ignored for the rest of the novel.
I recently reread the apocalypsis trillogy after 6 or so years and just then noticed that the MC was actually blonde and was forced to Imagine an actors face instead of the authors self insert.
tldr story food, i dont bother with descriptions