For the past millennium, the small and technologically-advanced Equestrian Empire has waged war against the old and corrupt Cleomanni Confederacy, employing weapons of terrifying might in their struggle. It has been three years since they lost.
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Its a shame the did not get all the supply's, and are hopefully they are alive, mostly concerned about Sierra
If only that nuclear bunker hadn't been breached by bionic murder doggos
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Agreed
Nice chapter, very interested to find out more of why Storm can survive not breathing for what twenty minutes. Because I don't think that's normal.
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I hoping they would get most of the supplies. BUT taking out that whole routine. Should maybe make them think twice about attacking or at least put some hurt on them.
They are more valuable as pilots who are capable of piloting the damn mechs not on the damn skimmer. My god she's insufferable
With enough boredom and textbooks anyone can get super smart
I've had the exact same question for quite a while. It was your fault for putting her up on overwatch for hours on end
That... makes a lot more sense now...
Ah crap baskets..
Huh so now they get serious. This is definitely went from bad to shit creek
At this rate turn her into a cyborg or something. I hate that she always gets hurt in ever other chapter. She needs a break author
Well fucking hell.. they are definitely screwed now
That bitch!!
Welp shit... what ever happened to lucky?
As Storm's invisibility spell affects all of the magnetic spectrums I'm hoping Bell got the radio signal out before the invisibility took place despite the position of the sentence in the story, if not it is only a minor plot hole I spotted anyway.
Enjoying the story so far! I too wonder what is causing Storm's respiration weirdness, sounds like this chapter really jumped the shark or cliff face rather, I hope there are enticing explanations for all this chaos, did they bioengineer Storm as a test subject for their own soldiers only for such tech to fall in enemy hands (er hooves). Oh! the explanations are numerous!
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Bell was under duress at the time and did not consider that he'd be unable to raise anyone on the radio because of Storm's magic. The fact he received no reply is telling. I turned out to be moot, anyway, since most of the rebels had already bunkered down because of the Confederate artillery. Even if they'd been uncloaked, few, if any, would have received the transmission. Good eye, though.
I've been working on the next chapter, but I got injured at work a few weeks ago and have been recuperating. I was trying to help a guy with a flat tire, and I had my hand on his fender as I was leaning down to see if I could find out what punctured his tire. He had his hood up and was reaching under it for the jack so he could swap to his spare. I'm sure you can see where this is going. Without warning me, he dropped the hood of his pickup right on the tip of my left middle finger. It took my fingernail right off, broke the tip of my finger, and dug into my nailbed. I think it actually latched partway on my finger. It was bad. I drove myself to the ER and needed four stitches to stop the bleeding. That finger was useless for typing until a few days ago when it was healed enough to leave the bandage off for extended periods.
Just out of curiosity, how did you come up with the languages for the Equestrians and the Confederates? I’m interested
Also, are the Unknowns speaking German? It looks German.