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Hearts and Flutters

Ah, Hearts and Hooves Day! A time of chocolate, roses... and sheer disappointment. As Fluttershy listens to her friends chat about all the fine stallions in town, she can't help but feel a bit lonely...

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Limescale

Limescale #1 · Apr 29th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Perfect ending. Fluttercord is always an instant win in my book!

General Grievous Hero

General Grievous Hero #2 · Apr 29th, 2015 · · ·

Cool. Love it when Fluttershy finds out who it is!

AbendSchimmer

AbendSchimmer #3 · Apr 29th, 2015 · · ·

Thank you!! :)

taterforlife

taterforlife #4 · May 1st, 2015 · · ·

WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT! I had a feeling that you might have kept something out of the character tags, and being a fluttercorder, I just had to find out!!!!!! *YES!*

Sequel or second chapter????

AbendSchimmer

AbendSchimmer #5 · May 1st, 2015 · · ·

Thank you! :) Yeah, I wanted it to be a bit of a surprise! No promises on a sequel, but if the inspiration strikes I'll certainly let you know.

Dandereshy

Dandereshy #6 · May 5th, 2015 · · ·

I never was a huge fan of FluttershyxDiscord, due the very fact that Discord is far older and, well, larger in size, simply put, than her, but a good story is a good story, and this is exactly that. I do want to remind you, when you start a new sentence, even if it's intentionally broken up by periods in dialogue, be sure to capitalize the first letter:

“So, then I said, ‘It is such a lovely night! Maybe we should go for a stroll,’ and then he agreed! Oh, it was simply fantastic! And he even convinced his little assistant, Fluer, to leave us alone for a few minutes! It was the best. night. ever!” Rarity’s voice rang out across the little cafe as four friends sat around a table, sipping on coffee and nibbling on fancy cakes.