Daniel Blaze is a human who’s has lost the few people he had close to his heart and has experienced nothing but pain and suffering for years. But all changed when he was brought to a world ruled by anthro ponies, and other mythical creatures.
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THE FEEEEELS
great chapter
6063364 Thank you.
what inspired you to make this fanfiction anyways? besides MLP I mean lol.
6066334 Well, I was reading some really amazing fics such as The Lost Element, A Swordsman's Path to Redemption, and a show that I'm not gonna say or it will spoil the story. They inspired me so much and I wanted to create a special story of my own. I wanted to create a special story for a human that holds a special destiny and have lots of twists to it and have my human character special powers and abilities and special items no one has ever done before no the site. I ain't gonna spoil any of it, so you'll all have to wait until the story goes further.
nice chapter
can't wait for the next one :)
6099444 Thanks
Update?
6107384 Soon. The Great Reader should be done with the editing soon.
This is amazing :O.
I love it a lot!
I little bit of closure I see :).
NO! NO! You do not get to have the "Tragic Hero" with no friends in his old life, and the "Popular Guy" THAT IS NOT HOW IT WORKS.
You cannot have your cake and eat it too! Pick a defined personality for your character, or you'll kill the story for your readers.
Furthermore, the guitar playing was NEVER MENTIONED BEFORE THIS. And the shark bite bullshit too. Remember? They stripped him for the hospital? No mention of teeth scars then.
DEATH NOTE can crap out plat garbage like that (The tennis match of bullshit) but it KILLS THE STORY.
It takes a lot to ruin a story for me. I'll give anything a chance. But you sir have done it.
And so i'm done. I'm fucking done.
Zhel432....dude its his story let him write how he wants it jeez and for Pete sake whatch what you say in the near future....Shadico Brow Barony....this was a good chapter and I liked how you had the characters mother appear as a spirit....
Amazing chapter! and the song was a good choice, I'm a big Skillet fan myself!
that was a awesome and sweet read it really touches the heart .
6283347 Man shut yo B****A** up before you get knocked the f*** out
Okay, there is so much edgy unrealism in this story, I'm barely staying afloat... "Oh, don't mind me, I just the voice of my dead mother." "Oh dear, let us all hold you for an emotionally important moment that makes literally no sense!" *Jontron quits*
i totally agree with zhel432 here.....
there's a lot of inconsistencies in the story.
making the main character BAD ASS is ok as long as its consistent or highly plausible of it being true for the main character.
the gary stu in this is really strong! its power level, its over 9000!!!
still nice to read though!
woot!
6283347 no need to be a jerk ... I happen to like this story very much, and I'm positive there are other people who agree with me.
6283347 dude chill you dont expect everything to be the way you want it just go with the flow and if you dont like the way the fanfiction is going then do one of either two things 1: shut it and enjoy the fanfic or 2: shut the hell and stop reading it so we can enjoy reading it cause *points at a large group of people glareing at zhel432 armed with afew weapons* your making afew people wanting to beat you up to a pulp and if you dont like what i said then dont say i didnt warn you
MEANWHILE IN CANTERLOT
Luna: I sense a disturbance in the force Somepony is loving my moon and stars!
Well, I will say this solidifies Gary stu status, it checks off a lot of things, I can handle a lot of things when it comes to this type of stuff, but when it's like this, it's on a Kirito self insert status
1. TRAGIC PAST
Well, for one, a lot of main characters have their childhoods in pain, mainly because of parents and crappy people, I can handle this type of thing though since it gives a basis of an interesting character
2. PERSONALITY
This is important, at first, he seemed to be quite a complex negative character for the most part, because of his family died and all, BUT after getting out of the hospital or during that, he's suddenly this great guy to the people who pretty much hurt him upon seeing him, suddenly giving these nice guy compliments, and speaking of the characters
3. THE CHARACTERS
The way the characters act after this seems a bit too forgotten and forgiven after, like no lingering guilt despite something like that, it would feel more real for at least one of them to have lingering guilt over that, or having him still be just a tad spiteful over that, which is much more realistic, and let's not forget the Manticore fight, that was kind of bull how he beat it, sudden magical powers and stuff, and let's also not forget this important part, how they all reacted was generic, all of them blushing when he does the shining knight.
There's still a lot more I have to say, but I think you get the point
That's all I have to say, it wasn't a bad read, it was well written and all, it's just that all of this makes me feel this would be perfect for a self insert
I now have a new favourite song...................
Is Daniel supposed to be small compared to the ponies? Or is he the same size because he looks short or stick thin next to them
This chapter made me cry so much :_)
Trust me Daniel, you don't want to know