A Heartfelt Thank you

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Mark is a Brony who has just watched the series finale of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. He is overcome with sadness, but then a magical character offers him a chance of a life time. He takes it.

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DiscordFan

DiscordFan #1 · Apr 22nd, 2015 · 2 · ·

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It was too adorable and sad!!

Fav! And Like!

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Krazy Stargazer

Krazy Stargazer #3 · Apr 22nd, 2015 · 2 · ·

well here come the tears

On behalf of Bronies everywhere i think you did a good job conveying the sort of emotions we would feel at the end of the season.

Maignaciojr

Maignaciojr #4 · Apr 22nd, 2015 · · ·

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Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you liked it. :D

Maignaciojr

Maignaciojr #5 · Apr 22nd, 2015 · 1 · ·

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Thank you for your kind words. MLP:FIM is great for the cultivation of one's soul. Too bad we really can't go to them and thank them for all of their inspiration. :)

Harms Way

Harms Way #6 · Apr 22nd, 2015 · 1 · ·

Taking a direct hit to the feelings...

Such a beautiful story. It certainly captured how I felt at the end of last season and will most likely feel at the end of this season.

Have a like and a favorite my friend!

Maignaciojr

Maignaciojr #7 · Apr 22nd, 2015 · 1 · ·

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Thank you so much. I feel okay at the end of every season because I believe there will be another one to follow it. I'll feel quite troubled when the series finale happens, and MLP:FIM ends completely.

Harms Way

Harms Way #8 · Apr 22nd, 2015 · 2 · ·

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I can only imagine that day. As much as I want to deny it, that day shall come. But even when the show stops, the bronies and pegasisters will continue to spread love and tolerance throughout their lives.

TwistedPretzel

TwistedPretzel #9 · Apr 22nd, 2015 · 1 · ·

I feel sorry for Lyra. This was her fondest dream, too, and she was denied it. Understandably so, true, but still denied her dream.

Maignaciojr

Maignaciojr #10 · Apr 22nd, 2015 · · ·

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At least she got to see a human up close. :) Yeah, if she could have asked Mark questions, it would have been great. As I was writing, it just felt right to have him wake up after the group hug. It could be neat to consider the question "Do Humans exist because Lyra believes in them so? :D Thanks for the comment.

FireRescuePony