Twilight has to break up with Flash Sentry due to royal reasons... and the fate of Equestria. Pinkie Pie, (with the help of Cheese Sandwich) throws a party. A 'So Sorry You Broke Up I Hope You Feel Better Soon and Find Your True Love Someday' party. Yes, that pony does have a party planned for every occasion!
But Twilight isn't feeling good about it. She goes into a mini depression, but decides to go. She was expecting a small get-together... not all of her friends getting paired up! And the worst thing to happen happens, Flash gets together with one of Twi's friends.
Will Twilight come to terms with what really has to be done? Will she accept her new fiancé? Will her friendship survive?
Find out.
Chapters (3)
From what I've read this far it looks to have MANY inconsistencies, grammatical errors, and moves WAY too fast. In the author's note you even said ''What would have taken twenty minutes took two hours''. This is what gets me the most. I'll say that at the beginning there were some good use of details (however scarce) but there are people on this website who write chapters that take (in some cases) several hours and require them to use all their writing ability to create something amazing. The storyline you set up SOUNDS good, but you need to learn some more things before you can make something like what I described before.
5879598 OK! Thanks for the feedback. I'll be more descriptive in the second chapter of this story.
"You and Rainbow did a thing!?" Alright, THAT made me laugh.
Well that escalated quickly
5887730 Haha, glad you like it.
5888363 #trollestia