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Way to throw logic into the situation yet again, goodness if I didn't know better I would think you were trying to develop Nightmare in a manner that when she gets over her pride she will be a character we can easily relate to. All joking aside I do enjoy your take on how she is discovering things about her situation through experience rather than questions.
I'd make the joke, but I'm above that.
HAH!
No, whatever gave you that idea?
I'm guessing that should be a different word? Mortal?
Nightmare really needs to work on her lying skills.
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but I'm not...
"This was a triumph.
I'm making a note here: HUGE SUCCESS..."
Finish the rest if you want.
"Nightmare?" Twilight asked softly. "Are you afraid of hospitals?"
vary interesting I am really liking the idea's behind this story.
do keep up the good work.
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I'm surprised that on-site CPR wasn't the most that was needed, if that. Simply passing out from pulling too many G's isn't all that serious, I think. It's mostly the impacts that tend to occur after.
I'm assuming that Nightmare swatted the hoof that the nurse had placed on her in the previous paragraph, even if the object that got swatted appears to have been left out.
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I thought about it too. Unfortunately the song didn't actually fit into the situation properly. Still.
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And it's because it doesn't fit that it's funny!
That line...
"nurse's" is a contraction. "Nurses" is the plural.
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You made the joke.
Now I want you gone.