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Ohhhh this is promising!
Before i read I'm going to ask this one question? Is Nightmare Moon the alternate personality of Luna or is this the whole Parasite thing?
Fair enough.
This is actually a pretty nice touch, it shows that while Dash may not like things going slow, he knows she has to sometimes for greater accuracy.
Discord, YOU, not your, go there.
That's, pretty clever.
That'd be a yes.
Except for the variety of beings here who can stop you who are right there, Celestia, Luna, Cadence, and Discord. You are powerful Nightmare Moon, but can you stand up to the full might of 3 alicorns and a draconequus?
There was a fail safe right? Tell me, that there was a fail safe to prevent Nightmare Moon from being able to unleash her might against Equestria?
Darn it another Nightmare moon pocessed Luna story. uuuggghhh.
...I like it.
It seems out of character for Discord to be so quiet. We don't even know he's in the room until Twilight mentions he's there. If you were to revise this chapter later I'd suggest giving him at least one or two snarky quips.
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He's probably just waiting for nightmare's inevitable buzz kill when she realizes she can't just run rampant and take over the world XD
Wow, I wonder if Discord is going to be a big help considering he is reformed as well...
You have a few little errors in here and there, but this looks promising. I look forward to more.
-Sanity is overrated
A promising beginning, though you didn't explain why Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy were neede as part of the spell.
5885007 Since Nightmare Rarity is referenced it seems like this will be the parasite version.
5898297 yeah, which is why I'm no longer reading it. that arc should die. badly written and it weakens Luna as a character.
5899739 I disagree wholeheartedly with that opinion but to each his own.
5900336 How can you defend it. NMM not coming from luna at all makes Luna blameless in NMM's actions. thus her redemption is crap for it has no meaning. NMM HAS to come from Luna, she can be parasitic after that but she ultimately has to come from Luna.
5900340 Because Luna still isn't blameless. The nightmare fed on her insecurities true but she still let it in and let it control her. In fact that whole arc is about Luna seeking redemption for allowing the nightmare control her. Anyway let's not clutter the comment section with this, pm me if you want to continue the discussion.
I look forward to hot alicorn sex.
Small typos:
If things went as plan, he could drop it immediately, and if things went poorly, he could extend it around him and the others.
-planned
It opened it's mouth and inhaled deeply.
-its
5887744 You need to get glasses.
Is Rainbow asking Twilight if it is boring?
5900340 Being possessed doesn't remove the hosts responsibility if it was the hosts own feelings and desires that drew the creature/gave it motivation during possession. Luna's jealousy and hate caused her to accept the parasite willingly. I'm not sure why this is such a hangup for so many people when this exact situation is found perfectly acceptable when it happens to Spiderman with the symbiote. Choosing to accept a deal with the devil still leaves you responsible for what the devil does because of that deal.
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I'm sure that there are certain circumstances where that might be true but I don't think it is the case for what is described here. If a parasite infects a host to the point where the host's will is completely overpowered by that of the parasite, the host is by definition blameless; the host has no control over what the parasite does and so cannot do anything to stop it.
It would be like saying that you are to blame for what you do while you are asleep. It is possible that you can roll over and suffocate a loved one in your sleep, but because you have no conscious will, you are considered blameless, even if your actions still directly caused the death. Even if your conscious action causes something bad to happen (like the act of going to sleep/the act of attracting the parasite), you are not to blame for the consequences you could not foresee (suffocating a loved one/attempting to create eternal night and kill all life).
Now if you could prove that Princess Luna accepted the parasite knowing that it would take control of her will and try to kill everypony she wanted to love her, then she could be blamed, but then she would be a malicious (and stupid) psycho equivalent to Nightmare Moon anyway and none of this back-and-forth would be necessary. Luna could possibly be partially to blame for being weak of will, or for being gullible enough to buy-into the parasite's lies, but Celestia would bear far more of the blame for that.
Me as Nightmare Moon: Boo bitch! Boo! You'd better run motherbucker!
...Dear Nightmare Moon, don't make escape speeches. Just run.
5886275 Discord would stop it probably, an endless night would bore him.
It would have been more fitting if discord hawked a loogie into the circle.
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Awesome! Nighty is back!
I have so many problems with this fics. too childish. no Luna. cringe romance with of character.
and someone as old and as determined like groger is that weak-willed? author should get reference from type/moon mages.