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0.o Oh wow. I'm rooting for you!!!
can't wait to see whats next!
YESSSS
"You claim to know Fear? I shall scow you true Terror." Princess Luna
Hells Fire: And now, Nightmare Moon will Come back to kick that goat ass so hard, that the Moon will have a new friend, I got to see this!
-puts his gas mask with barb wire on-
You got blasted in the CHEST. Short of one hell of a healing spell or a senzu bean, you shouldn't have survived that. I'm glad you did but...
Hm, wonder what's going on?
Who knows?
Also possible.
Strange...
Oh god...
You double spaced between them and would and more concerned ABOUT what was happening. Also, I'm curious too, what's going on?
Guess so.
Curiouser and curiouser.
She's right, your dream, your mind, you are in full control.
Fair enough I suppose.
What are you planning?
You can fix that I suspect.
Possibly.
The Ghastly Gorge.
Or die from having all his bones broken.
I'd listen if I were you.
Tambelon. That's where he's from.
That isn't going to help much.
Now make the connection...
Exactly.
Neither do I.
Go Nightmare go!
dun dun super mareeee!!!!
6323797 thats a great fan made video
Now everything falls into place. Grogar is a monster. Not only an ugly goat, but also a monster. I really hope, Nightmare Moon gains back her power in the way, she is planning to do it.
now this is how to steep a story up this story is really going places fast and hitting hard.
6323890 Because quoting an entire chapter to state your opinion is the thing to do now? Could've just simply stated what you wanted without reposting the entire story? Not only that, but it wasn't feedback... just what your reaction was to chunks of text. And most of those were one liners.
Now for real commentary, I've been enjoying the story so far, and if that's as far as the gore tag goes, then very nicely done. If not, well, we're all (supposedly) adults and can handle it. And if Nighty does get her magic back... maybe Twilight planned it that way? Have it available once reformation was achieved? It'll be interesting to read..
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It's less stating my opinion, and more doing a running commentary. And I didn't quote the entire story. Just most of it.
6324581 And hopefully you do realize that doing JUST running commentary on MOST of a story takes a lot of space. For those that don't care to read running commentary (me, and I'm sure dozens of others), that's a lot of scrolling.
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You have a point, I'll admit that much. But, there might be some that do enjoy my running commentary or at least don't mind, like the author, he doesn't seem to mind.
6324600 If you scroll down, you will see two other "Walls of Text". And some readers have already commented on them, asking to have them removed. One of them also includes gifs (takes up more than needed). While every reader does have the right to comment, it is my hope that commenting, regardless of form, is done tactfully, so that others are not bothered by the how it's done. Of course, it is up to the author to remove and let remain comments...
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Yep. Although in my defense, I usually only use Wall of Text once a chapter, and I'm fairly certain most people followed this for the story, not the comments. And there's the Find fuction on most tablets and computers where you can just type post comment in and you can go directly to posting your comment without scrolling through dozens of comments and I'm rambling aren't I?
Im thinking this with Nightmare Moon, reminds me of that scene in the older Ben 10 animation, where Grandma Energy Being comes back and sees Gwen, and mentions about her being an Energy Being, "Ill just destroy this body, you can learn to make a new one later" or similar?
Basically, Grogar killing NMMs physical body has released her spirit to regain all her power and so bring about that what he was trying to stop?
Makes me wonder if this was Celestia's plan all along; fighting fire with fire, or evil in this case. While she's smart, I don't think she's omnipotent, although she could have a little cheat going on the side. Something like "visions" that suggest to send Twilight off to do things rather than herself or Luna. Makes you wonder why she keeps sending Twilight off on these missions.
Kinda funny that she doesn't bother helping the girls with their nightmares yet stops to help Pipsqueak. Makes sense when you recall it was the girls that blasted Nightmare more than once. And speaking of blasting evil with rainbows, suppose it turns out that Nightmare isn't stronger than Grogar but equal? They end up in a stalemate, wrecking the hell out of the Everfree where he's camped out. Along comes the girls with there Elements and open fire. What then? Pretty sure Grogar would be boned (ok, bad pun) but what of Nightmare? Here she is, just got back all her power and was going full on badass mode with an ancient necromancer, suddenly she's dope-slapped upside the back of her head by a very familiar rainbow... At this point, it boils down to what the author feels. How discriminating are the Elements of Harmony? Would they rip her apart, again, or focus on the tolerance and good that have been taking root in her? Question then becomes, is she an alicorn like Luna or spirit like Discord? That would help determine what happens from an overwhelming surge of Harmony.
This is of course assuming the Elements are used at all. Who knows? I'm detecting a heroic sacrifice in the works here, of the body/flesh anyway. It's notoriously hard to kill a necromancer when they're almost undead to begin with. Usually it takes something like attacking the soul or mind to permanently put them down, a task well suited for a dreamhuntress such as Nightmare. And for double the fun, go fetch Luna as a partner position in this hasty dynamic duo of dreams. (No one remembers Electra Woman and Dyna girl)
6324673 Isn't that how it always works: bad guy learns of the sole being capable of stopping them but has yet to gain the ability to do so, acts to prevent said person from gaining said ability, ends up helping said person to gain said ability then proceds to wonder how
Bring on the Nightmare powerhouse.
6324697 Celestia really had nothing to with Nightmare Moon's creation other than giving Twilight and Luna the okay to go ahead. It was Luna who wanted to find a way to keep Nightmare from possessing another creature and building a new power base, setting herself up as a goddess queen and potentially attacking Equestria again. Twilight was the one who did the research, coming up with the theories of making a spirit creature made flesh.
Grogar you dun goofed
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So if I get punched in the sternum I'm dead right? Or does it have to burn to kill me? I'll have to be careful with my coffee then...
While the spell being lethal is a safe assumption, you make it sound as though she should have died JUST by location. We don't know how strong the spell is, so it's better not to assume the protagonist(?) should be dead.