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In keeping with the minor theme of pancakes in the latest season, this is good.
Twilight shouldn't worry. What goes in, must come out. Payback will come.
5933069 How true. How true. Personally, I was surprised the first thing she didn't feel was pressure on her bladder. Hopefully, that will come later.
Those poor pancakes. Nightmare is going to get fat.
5933209 I had considered it, but decided that since she was literally born yesterday and had nothing to eat or drink yet, she would have no need to use the bathroom.
This actually reminds me of an episode of Star Trek where Q became mortal.
5933354 Still, she's not exactly potty trained, which could easily be a problem.
Daaaaw.
AHAHAH! A grand way to devour one's meal, with voracious fury! I do look forward to updates
I love NMs little descriptions of hunger, and tiredness. I cant wait to see how she adapts to life in a real body.
That, and he's a dragon, dragon scales are tough as hell.
Also, Nightmare not comprehending that she's stiff and not understanding hunger is hilarious!
Nice chapter, but there's a few things you may want to edit.
"Retina" is not the term you're looking for. I believe what you meant was "sclera"
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That should be "him".
And that should be capitalized.
5933212 PUNCAKE!!!!!!!!!!
Someone has to draw that scene, you know the one that I'm talking about.
I get the feeling Celestia will soon have a competitor for the title of "Fattest Fat-Assed Alicorn in Equestria".
You're making me love Nightmare more and more! Keep up the good work <3
That was simply hilarious!!
Nightmare Moon vs. Pancake: The Battle!
Who will win? Who will yield?
Nightmare Moon, ready to burst? The Pancaces, fully decimated? Or Spike, passed out from exhaustion?
Only time will tell.
(Or the next chapter.)
The reactions and thoughts of her bowels reminds me of the fic 'justice itself'. The first few chapters of that one had Tyreal dealing with the same issues, to what I'm hoping will be similarly humorous results.
Pancakes XD
welp soon Spike will have to clean up a different kind of mess
I really like the idea that the nightmare would be unaware of the biological feelings of her host like hunger and pain. That's a take I haven't read before.