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Obligatory, though oddly enough I couldn't find one of Nightmare Moon.
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Nextly,
one of the more interesting typos i've seen lately.
Lastly, fun chapter and a great way for NMM to get in touch with some of the upsides of being a mortal.
I'm loving this story so much! A complete different side of Nightmare Moon. I love it.
I can imagine the ensuing conversation between Cherry and her friends the enxt morning.
"Hey, Cherry, what did you do last night?"
"I had sex with Nightmare Moon."
"..."
"..."
Cherry:
Great story so far, and love NMM trying to figure out what mortal is. The only down side is that now I have to take this story out of favorites and into my Mature section. I invite anyone to see what I have on my library shelves, with the only locked shelf is the mature section.
Still a good story and I can't wait for more.
6038377 Really, did the first chapter say Luna was poccessed?
Yummy. Obviously Nightmare has to learn really, really much.
Daaw. Also, this was hot.
Hmmm, was hoping this would be a Moonlight ship, but this was pretty hot. I guess we shall see where things go.
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Thanks for the flowers but I lack the ability to write such characters. One line or a short paragraph, sure but not a whole story. Quirky/silly/random/pervert characters are more my forte.^^
6038408 wtf is pocessed? you mean possessed? as in something else controlling your actions? then no, nightmare did at one point, but for this she is separated and given her own body
this chapter was so mechanical in the whole clop scene that it was hilarious, especially when it seems like nightmare is trying to be serious. i'm not sure if that was the intention or not, it's just how it seemed to me. that's not to say that it's a bad thing. there's a lot of terrible clop on the site. that's just me saying that it seemed more like something out of the big bang theory than a clop chapter
6042609 for me Nightmare Moon has to come from Luna. not take her over.
Great story, and I don't mean the sex. I don't really care about F/F sex, and this one was really no different (still not bad, though), but the actual story here is great. I can't wait for more.
This was a pretty Cookie Cutter Clop Chapter, but not bad.
6042649 you mean you like it when nightmare is the manifestation of luna's inner turmoil and anger instead of being a parasite that controlled her?
eh hehehe im just waiting for the morning when twilight rocks up
6043061 yup. she can be a parasite after Twilight used the elements but she has to come from Luna first. ANYTHING else weakens luna as a character.
I found this chapter to be cute... I also am liking the story; very interesting take on the hole Nightmare Returns somehow to Equestria; theme... So thats awesome!
Nothing more to say.