On a serious note, this is an intriguing story and anyone who got squiffy over the content needs to toughen the fuck up 'cause its really not that bad. I gave it a fave and like so HA!
You get a down vote because of no trigger warnings, that is very impolite. Just think about how you would feel if you wandered into something you found was just not to your liking, for example foalcon tentacle porn. No warnings is just rude.
Well... i had a feeling about it when i started reading, TRAP... but!!! it's not a bad trap... actual story, and the guy did the "right" thing... lol... now you know its fiction, and dude in his place "OH SHIT... IM OUT OF HERE" the Boss in his work place was a nice twist. have to say didn't see a lot of storys with this idea in them, not that i can recall anyway
5755854 Go fuck yourself. If you don't like what you are reading then you click on the many different icons and links to get out of here.
The only trigger warning that is needed is for anything associated with rape. Otherwise it isn't a goddamn trigger. It just makes you go "Oh. Ew. Okay next story."
Unless you were raped by a pony who just lost her balls, literally. Then you can totally have a cause.
5756254 If it is indeed futa, I can make an exception here because she's in the middle of her sex change, and I found it pretty clear that her penis has already... left the building, as it were. It wouldn't be simply "futa for the hell of it".
In fact, because of the subject matter, this story can be inspirational if you look at it the right way.
5755854 The only Trigger Warning that anyone ever needed was for rape or abuse. I don't know what exactly it is you're complaining about, but if it's Transgender people that bother you so much, then I must deliver to you a hearty "FUCK YOU!"
5755899 5755914 5756048 5756481 5756546 First of all, I did not criticize the story, the premise, or the characters. I pointed out a breach of etiquette. All sex acts that are not plain vanilla should be mentioned, it's just polite. Secondly, this is magical pony land porn the list of all possible "surprises" a mare can have in store is extensive. Thirdly, perhaps I could have been clearer but I did say that it was the description NOT the story that I down voted.
5756698 I've never done "Triggers" I never will. You don't need to be on guard at all god damn times. And it's very clear what was hinted at. If you're reading from me, you'll probably be able to see it coming, and the signs were all there, its like a reading comprehension test at this point.
5755914 Right? People are so afraid to take a chance they need fucking triggerwarnings to keep from accidentally reading something they might not want to continue.
5755145 well... while i didn't find myself in that situation yet (and would prefer not to) i live long enough to say "life is strange, shit happens" and having sex with a man is not the end of the world. i prefer girls. others prefer boys. some like both. if i happen to have sex with someone who used to be a man, i might question what i was thinking at that point but to go so far as to say you'd kill someone, thats fucked up man.
5756942 Because of accent differences if nothing else most but not all english speakers would understand. Warnings should be posted as a courtesy because even if something is blindingly obvious to most of us that doesn't mean that everyone will get it.
EDIT: if you'r wondering what else the description could possibly mean just remember this MAGICAL pony PORN. Even understanding every word the description could still be talking about HIM turning into a mare for example.
5757013 I cater for people who want to read HIE, more specifically I do a lot of romance. Guess what? This isn't just a clopfic, it's a romance story, and if I wanted to cater to something different I would. If I wanted to cater to someone who couldn't figure out the obvious, I'd write comedy. I don't have to spell it out, I have to trust that my readers are smart enough to figure it out on their own, like adults.
At any rate...trick is just to write a person. You could be writing a moon person from sigmas eight, and a fucking bird creature with the face of David Duchovny, but you write people and suddenly everyone stops caring. But oh, that trans has a penis! BURN THE WITCH.
I might be a lot more tolerant than I thought...or maybe the majority is less tolerant than I thought.... Either way, somethings off.
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Uh huh...cool.... Do go on.
This was good...um,
I'm not all to quite sure what I just experienced...but, ok.
Air Raid is best trap.
It was different, and that in itself, is a good thing.
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These comments're already becoming funner than the story thanks to the "totally straight guy who jerks off to cartoon ponies" types.
Was still hot as shit though.
You could say that 'surprise' for Mr. Protagonist at the end was...
(puts on sunglasses)
...a "pain in the ass".
I'll show myself out.
Also wanted to add my own "YEEEAAAH".
On a serious note, this is an intriguing story and anyone who got squiffy over the content needs to toughen the fuck up 'cause its really not that bad. I gave it a fave and like so HA!
moar
69 likes... perfect.
oh you.
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5755648 Missing the one in front of that zero right there...
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Nnnnope
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You get a down vote because of no trigger warnings, that is very impolite. Just think about how you would feel if you wandered into something you found was just not to your liking, for example foalcon tentacle porn. No warnings is just rude.
Well... i had a feeling about it when i started reading, TRAP... but!!! it's not a bad trap... actual story, and the guy did the "right" thing... lol... now you know its fiction, and dude in his place "OH SHIT... IM OUT OF HERE"
the Boss in his work place was a nice twist.
have to say didn't see a lot of storys with this idea in them, not that i can recall anyway
5755854 The description made it clear as day what was going to happen.
5755854 Trigger warnings? God, kids these days.
Hell, it isn't my bag personally but points to Hat to going there. Would read anyhow.
Nice job Sir Hat, going places most don't go when it comes to fics on this site lol. Very nice story in such a short amount of time ^_^
nice one :)
If only things were so easy in reality...*sigh*
5755854 Go fuck yourself. If you don't like what you are reading then you click on the many different icons and links to get out of here.
The only trigger warning that is needed is for anything associated with rape. Otherwise it isn't a goddamn trigger. It just makes you go "Oh. Ew. Okay next story."
Unless you were raped by a pony who just lost her balls, literally. Then you can totally have a cause.
First thought:
Retired. Extremely. Dangerous.
Anyone else got a stupid idea when they saw the title?
This is an interesting story actually... Wow, I mean... Holy crap Im drawn in
...just to be clear, are we talkin' futa here?
5755145
Well someone's not secure in their sexuality.
5756216 I wouldn't be here if I thought it was futa.
Anyway, interesting story, Sir Hat. Came for the cute picture, stayed for the story about finding yourself. I'm interested to see where this one goes.
5756251 I wouldn't be either, but when I see something like this:
I do have to wonder...
5756254 If it is indeed futa, I can make an exception here because she's in the middle of her sex change, and I found it pretty clear that her penis has already... left the building, as it were. It wouldn't be simply "futa for the hell of it".
In fact, because of the subject matter, this story can be inspirational if you look at it the right way.
5756202 Bruce Willis in Equestria
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The soundtrack for this story (so far):
Chapter 1:
Chapter 2:
Chapter 3:
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The only Trigger Warning that anyone ever needed was for rape or abuse. I don't know what exactly it is you're complaining about, but if it's Transgender people that bother you so much, then I must deliver to you a hearty "FUCK YOU!"
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First of all, I did not criticize the story, the premise, or the characters. I pointed out a breach of etiquette. All sex acts that are not plain vanilla should be mentioned, it's just polite.
Secondly, this is magical pony land porn the list of all possible "surprises" a mare can have in store is extensive.
Thirdly, perhaps I could have been clearer but I did say that it was the description NOT the story that I down voted.
5756698
I've never done "Triggers" I never will. You don't need to be on guard at all god damn times. And it's very clear what was hinted at. If you're reading from me, you'll probably be able to see it coming, and the signs were all there, its like a reading comprehension test at this point.
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Right? People are so afraid to take a chance they need fucking triggerwarnings to keep from accidentally reading something they might not want to continue.
"A story about John: Warning Humans"
5756761 So we disagree, just so long as I have made it clear that i was not trying to attack your story.
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It was pretty clear you weren't attacking either, but that doesn't stop you from looking like a...
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5755145 well... while i didn't find myself in that situation yet (and would prefer not to)
i live long enough to say "life is strange, shit happens" and having sex with a man is not the end of the world.
i prefer girls. others prefer boys. some like both. if i happen to have sex with someone who used to be a man, i might question what i was thinking at that point but to go so far as to say you'd kill someone, thats fucked up man.
5756786 that was a lot of effort just to be rude
5756698 erm can I point out that the very description of the story itself kinda implied this?
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What's the arrow suppose to be?
5756942 Because of accent differences if nothing else most but not all english speakers would understand. Warnings should be posted as a courtesy because even if something is blindingly obvious to most of us that doesn't mean that everyone will get it.
EDIT: if you'r wondering what else the description could possibly mean just remember this
MAGICAL pony PORN. Even understanding every word the description could still be talking about HIM turning into a mare for example.
5756965 Its pointing right, a donkey can also be called an ass and the last one is a hole.....
You look like a right ass hole.
The cover art and title of the story reminded me of the game 'Transistor'.
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I cater for people who want to read HIE, more specifically I do a lot of romance. Guess what? This isn't just a clopfic, it's a romance story, and if I wanted to cater to something different I would. If I wanted to cater to someone who couldn't figure out the obvious, I'd write comedy. I don't have to spell it out, I have to trust that my readers are smart enough to figure it out on their own, like adults.
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...What? They're just generic clop lines....
>tfw people in the comments complaining about the fact it was a dude
>mfw nobody minds that it's a fucking cartoon horse
>gender is the issue
The austism is strong tonight.
Also, good read.
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Right?
At any rate...trick is just to write a person. You could be writing a moon person from sigmas eight, and a fucking bird creature with the face of David Duchovny, but you write people and suddenly everyone stops caring. But oh, that trans has a penis! BURN THE WITCH.
I might be a lot more tolerant than I thought...or maybe the majority is less tolerant than I thought.... Either way, somethings off.
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Certainly missing that cock up your ass, aren't ya?