This makes me very happy. I wondered why you decided to skip this interaction prior. I mean the story wasn't horrible without it, but it's better and a lot more cohesive with it. It makes an oddly amount of sense that it was added afterwards, considering the last line in the last chapter.
There is some back-and-forth regarding Red's referenced gender throughout the chapter (them being referred to as both a he and a she). Intentional?
I'm aware of the concept of transgender, but I'd imagine that someone in this situation would've simply referred to Red as a he in the beginning of the chapter and then a she towards the end as they began to accept it and became less drunk.
I get that he might be trying to reconcile the situation internally, but, considering the circumstances, I'd imagine that with how wasted he was, anger would've won out and all considerations for gender identity would've been out the window.
I finally got around reading this incredible second chapter. This is beautiful. Thank you for writing this masterpiece
Sure it sounds extremely kitschy if I put it that way, but you have shown what compassion and love is all about in an absolutely unusual and wonderful way. Wonderful balance between clop and love-story.
Okay, now the third chapter makes more sense and doesn't feel so out of place :D
Much-needed chapter, this one. Sorta brings the next few full-circle.
This makes me very happy. I wondered why you decided to skip this interaction prior. I mean the story wasn't horrible without it, but it's better and a lot more cohesive with it. It makes an oddly amount of sense that it was added afterwards, considering the last line in the last chapter.
A little disjointed and fragmented, but over-all: not bad.
There is some back-and-forth regarding Red's referenced gender throughout the chapter (them being referred to as both a he and a she). Intentional?
I'm aware of the concept of transgender, but I'd imagine that someone in this situation would've simply referred to Red as a he in the beginning of the chapter and then a she towards the end as they began to accept it and became less drunk.
I get that he might be trying to reconcile the situation internally, but, considering the circumstances, I'd imagine that with how wasted he was, anger would've won out and all considerations for gender identity would've been out the window.
nice chapter
Now I understand why he's still with "her". Great chapter
I see we brought out the feels cannon today.
It was vary touching and showed what both sides where thinking well, good job.
Ah, that's better! Had to deploy the Feels-nuke, huh?
Nice description in between the lines
Ah, much better. Though, I get the feeling this was originally the pair retelling stuff to that griffin I forgot the name of.
Well, interesting.
I finally got around reading this incredible second chapter.
This is beautiful. Thank you for writing this masterpiece
Sure it sounds extremely kitschy if I put it that way, but you have shown what compassion and love is all about in an absolutely unusual and wonderful way. Wonderful balance between clop and love-story.
This was a sweet chapter realy touched my heart.
the dick just makes it better tho
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So true