“Princess, do you think the Spirit’s cursed other ponies?”
“I don’t know, but I really hope not. If he did, I’d never… Anyway, shouldn’t you two go home?”
“No? It wouldn’t be a sleepover, then! You know, I bet Sis isn’t afraid of him! She’ll teach him a lesson!”
“…I don’t even want to think of her meeting him…”
“Well, we’re not scared of him! If he tries anything against us, we’ll get cutie marks in Spirit butt-kicking!”
“Spirit butt-kicking…?”
“Princess? Are… Are you scared of him?”
“Well, I…”
“Course she isn’t! She’s already a ghost! He should be scared of her!”
“At this point, I’m honestly more scared of what your sister will do if she finds out you two came here without her permission.”
Three diamonds.
Every stitch on the back end of the freshly bought cloak was placed to imitate its owner’s cutie mark to a tee. The three mares had been working in a small workroom within the Hollow Shades fabric shop for some time now, seated together around a table and surrounded by other tourists who were working away on their own cloaks. Though Hollow Shades residents always marked their cloaks with Princess Luna’s cutie mark, visitors had the option of customizing theirs with different symbols if they so chose.
“Oooooh, I like it!” Pinkie said, watching Fluttershy carefully finish sewing the first of her cutie mark’s butterflies onto her own garment. Fluttershy smiled in reply, obviously proud of her work, prompting Pinkie to turn her attention to Rarity. “And what about you, Rarity?”
“Almost done,” she muttered, still working away at the last blue diamond. When given the choice, she had, for a moment, considered sewing on the cutie mark of her favorite princess, as most of the tourists were doing. She eventually settled for her own cutie mark, however. Goodness knows Sweetie Belle would probably try to steal one inspired by her newfound idol.
“You look better, Rarity,” Fluttershy said, smiling at her friend. She’d been worried for some time now, ever since the nightmare bombs, and though Rarity could tell Fluttershy was still concerned, she appreciated the pegasus’ discretion.
“I feel better, darling,” Rarity said, focusing on her stitching. “I simply don’t know what got into me!”
It was a lie. She knew very well what had happened, and even now, hours later, the image on the wall haunted her, terrified her from a small corner at the back of her mind. Could it really have been the Spirit sending her a message? Was it a warning to back off? Rarity had tried to convince herself she’d been… hallucinating, or delirious somehow; maybe she had simply grossly misinterpreted the shadows? The chill that was fast becoming familiar ran up her spine again. It had felt so real.
Her worries for Twilight still clawed at her, and for once, she wished she had some way of communicating over long distances. What if she somehow ended up indirectly hurting Twilight with her actions? Was that his master plan? If only she could ask Twilight… She’d once heard powerful unicorns of old used spells to contact each other over great distances—maybe Twilight could do something similar?
It was odd, but the more she thought of the alicorn, the more she found herself… missing her company. And worrying about her even more, too. She shook her head, trying to dispel the thoughts. Come now, Rarity, worrying won’t do you any good. Twilight’s an ages-old alicorn ghost, she can defend herself. And… there’s really not much worse the Spirit can do to her, is there?
“There!” she exclaimed, her work finally complete. She got up and tied the cloak around her neck, making sure not to hide the necklace beneath it, before modeling to her friends. “How do I look? Fabulous, I presume?”
“You look great, Rarity!” Pinkie Pie exclaimed, taking the chance to stand next to Rarity and compare their cloaks. “And your necklace is really pretty, too!”
“Oh yes,” Fluttershy agreed, nodding and then looking back to her own unfinished cutie mark. “I should hurry up…”
Rarity looked around and noticed a mirror near the back of the room. She excused herself for a moment and made her way over to it, nodding her head approvingly while she admired her reflection. She pulled the hood over her head, initially hoping to find her reflection looking alluringly mysterious, but instead…
Instead, an image of her hooded doppelgänger entering Twilight’s library filled her mind, and she took the hood off quickly as she forced the image out of her mind. “Stop it, Rarity,” she hissed under her breath. I should be focusing on other matters… like Princess Luna, for starters.
Through the mirror’s reflection, she looked at Pinkie Pie helping Fluttershy in the distance.
Pinkie Pie and Princess Luna—or, rather, the “imaginary” Moonlight Lullaby.
Everything pointed to Lullaby being Luna, and yet… Why hadn’t Pinkie told anyone of Luna’s whereabouts? Had the princess perhaps forbidden Pinkie from doing so, just like Twilight had? Honestly, what was it with princesses and not wanting to be found? Her only choice was to question Pinkie about Moonlight Lullaby and hopefully get as much information as she could on Princess Luna’s potential whereabouts.
She made her way back the table and sat down, using her most dazzling grin to catch Pinkie’s attention.
“What’s up, Rarity?” Pinkie asked, folding her hooves on the table and smiling back. “Did you like your cape?”
“I do, darling! Very much so,” Rarity replied, adjusting it properly. She then cleared her throat and similarly folded her hooves on top of the table. “I must say, I find Hollow Shades’ fascination with Princess Luna quite charming!” She paused and focused her sight on Pinkie. “Supposing the legend is real—”
“It is, Rarity!” Pinkie quickly interrupted.
“Of course! So, knowing the legend is real, where do you suppose Princess Luna might be?” Rarity ventured, trying to guide Pinkie with direct questions before moving on to her other plan.
Pinkie’s ears dropped. “I don’t know,” she admitted, and Rarity wasn’t able to detect a single hint of dishonesty in the statement. “But I’m going to find out!”
Plan B it is, then.
If asking about Princess Luna wasn’t going to lead to any answers, then Moonlight Lullaby it would have to be.
“And what does Moonlight Lullaby think of it? Surely she must believe in the tale, too?” Rarity sighed theatrically, putting on a sympathetic face. “The poor dear, it’s a shame she’s sick… Actually, Pinkie, I have to admit, I’m rather curious about you two! Could you tell me more about her?”
“Mh-hm! I love talking about her!” She furrowed her brow in concentration. “…Well, she loves the night! She knows every star and constellation and planet and— I don’t even know how she knows all that! But she can’t see them right now, since she’s sick and all.”
“Oh, of course…”
That did make sense, though.
Princess Luna was—or had been—in charge of the moon, after all. How terrible… If she’s really trapped somewhere, she can’t see the night, can she? It would be like trapping Twilight somewhere without her books. Perhaps that horrid Spirit had shown some kindness to the bookish alicorn.
“But it’s okay! I draw them for her!” Pinkie added, reaching inside her mane and taking out a small booklet.
For Rarity to say she wasn’t slightly concerned that such a booklet could fit inside the mare’s mane would have been a lie. How in Equestria did Pinkie manage to store things in her mane like that? Then again, Rarity supposed she’d seen stranger things. She watched as Pinkie flipped through pages and pages of writing and illustrations until she stopped at a two-page crayon drawing of the night sky, the constellations marked out with white lines.
“Here!” she said, hoofing the book over to Rarity. “Take a look-see!”
“Oh, how cute!” Rarity said, showing it to Fluttershy, who’d momentarily looked up to admire the drawing. “I’m sure Lullaby must have loved this.” She closed the book after a moment, intending to return it, but her gaze lingered on the title on the cover.
Pinkie’s Dream Journal — #87
Hmm… Interesting.
Just as she made a move to reopen the booklet, Pinkie took it back and, to Rarity’s dismay, returned it to the seemingly endless black hole of her mane.
“You keep dream journals?” Rarity asked innocently, hoping to draw out more information on the subject. “How interesting!”
“Yep! Ever since I met Lulla,” Pinkie replied.
“Really?!” Rarity all but shrieked, clapping her forehooves against the table. If she’d been keeping dream journals since she met Luna, then— Oh, Twilight was going to love the information. She then, however, remembered that not only was she a lady, but that she was a lady in a public place. “A-ah, really?” she repeated in a much more socially acceptable volume, clearing her throat and playing with her mane. “Interesting, indeed… Actually, if you don’t mind me asking, how did you meet? I assume you’re foalhood friends?”
Pinkie nodded. “Yep! She was my first friend when I moved here as a filly!”
“Moved? From where?”
“Tall Tales!” Pinkie replied. “I moved here with my parents and sisters when I was a filly. I…” She looked around as if to check that nopony was listening. “I hated it here at first, ’cause it was in the middle of a super scary forest.”
To an adult, Hollow Shades had charm, and it certainly must be the same to foals who’d been born there, but for a filly who’d been forced to move to such a place… Rarity could see why the little Pinkie Pie might have been afraid. She doubted that she herself would have been too thrilled if she’d been forced to live in the middle of the Everfree Forest as a filly.
“Well, I hated it ’til I met Lulla, at least. I had really awful nightmares the first week,” Pinkie continued, not noticing how Rarity’s ears perked up immediately. “She would sing lullabies to help me sleep, and then the nightmares went away.”
“What about the other foals? Did she get along with them too?” Rarity asked. If Pinkie didn’t have any information, maybe the other now-grown foals did.
Pinkie shook her head. “No. Lulla didn’t like them very much.”
“Why not?”
Pinkie looked uncomfortable, making Rarity wonder if perhaps she ought to stop her inquisition, but… she really needed this information.
“She… She thought they were mean to me,” Pinkie replied finally, intently watching Fluttershy sewing. Rarity remembered the elder mentioning Pinkie had been bullied as a foal. “B-but they weren’t! They just like— They just liked teasing me!” she added. “They used to say that I should go back to Tall Tales ’cause maybe they’d believe my tall tales! Hahaha…” Her laughter, unlike previous times, sounded so… fake and insincere.
Rarity felt a knot in the pit of her stomach. “That’s not very nice at all…”
“Lulla used to say that too, but it was all in good fun! They just liked to tease me, really, that’s all!” Pinkie quickly said with a laugh that sounded very forced. Uncomfortable. “Anyway! My parents and my sisters moved back to Tall Tale when I was bigger, but I stayed here.”
“But… Why not go back with them if you didn’t like it here?” Fluttershy asked, apparently having been paying attention to the conversation. “Was it because you’d miss Lullaby?”
“Nope. I did stay for Lulla, but because she needed me. She doesn’t have many friends, and I would never let her be lonely!” Pinkie said, lifting her hoof to hold her pendant. “Lulla is my best friend, and even if helping her can be scary sometimes, some friends are worth fighting the scary stuff for, right?”
Rarity nodded mutely, the earth pony’s words pulling her thoughts away from the conversation at hoof.
Pinkie stayed because Luna needed her, not the other way around. It reminded her of Twilight, in a way. Rarity herself didn’t need Twilight, did she? She could have gone the rest of her life without ever having met her, and Rarity’s life would have been… fine. But Twilight?
Twilight Sparkle, who once acted like a terrified animal that had been wounded too badly to ever trust again, and who now had started to open up, to call others “friends,” to… The image of Twilight smiling flashed in Rarity’s mind, and as she started playing with her necklace, words began to flow out of her mouth.
“I have a friend back home,” she started to say, still smiling at the memory of the giggling alicorn. “She’s rather similar to Lulla. She doesn’t have many friends and she’s…” She paused, idly batting the necklace back and forth. “She is a bit of a… recluse, so to speak, but I’m trying to help change that. Er, well, we are,” she added quickly after noticing Fluttershy.
“Really?!” Pinkie asked, leaning in on the table. “What’s she like? What’s her name?”
“Her name? Uh… Well, actually, I also have a nickname for her!” Rarity quickly replied, trying to come up with a nickname and fast. Quick, Rarity, something memorable from your first meeting… Uh… “Sturdy Bookcase!” It wasn’t until after she’d said it that she wanted to slap herself. Sturdy Bookcase? Really? Didn’t poor Twilight already feel guilty enough about that?
“Bookcase?” Pinkie asked. “I like it! She must love books like Princess Twilight! Is that why you chose that nickname?”
Or because she is Twilight…
“Er, I suppose, but it’s more because she’s rather reserved so she doesn’t like it when I tell ponies her real name,” she added, hoping the excuse didn’t sound as flimsy to Pinkie as it did to her.
“Oh my gosh, she’s just like Lulla!” Pinkie exclaimed, blowing raspberries and resting her chin on her hooves. “She’s so silly! I want to tell everypony about her, but she’s all ‘No, Pinkie, no one must know about us.’ Pfft.”
“Goodness, Twi— Bookcase is exactly the same!” Rarity replied, rolling her eyes. “Honestly, and there are so many entertaining stories about her, I could write at least two books.” She giggled and nudged Fluttershy with her elbow. “Like the movie projector, remember?”
It seemed she did, dropping her sewing needle to join Rarity’s giggling. “Oh yes, that was a lot of fun.”
“It was?!” Pinkie asked, eager to join in on the giggling. “Why? What happened?”
Rarity bit her lip.
It… probably wouldn’t hurt to tell this one little story about Twilight, would it? It was just like telling an anecdote from any other friend! Convinced by her own argument, and her intense desire to relive the highlights of the story, she cleared her throat and donned her best story-telling tone of voice.
“So, when you were a filly, did your teacher ever put on one of those documentaries on the roles of ponies in society?” she asked, trying not to let Fluttershy’s giggling get to her.
Pinkie nodded. “Uh-huh! We saw the one on pegasi and the weather! Except…” She grimaced. “They were super duper boring…”
Rarity nodded. “Oh yes, they were absolutely dreadful! Don’t know why they make ponies go through them!” she agreed before waving it off with her hoof. “But that isn’t the point! The point is that, as I mentioned before, my friend is a bit of a recluse, so she’d never even seen or imagined that something like a projector existed,” she explained, Fluttershy’s giggling finally getting to her. She turned to her friend and gestured for her to quiet down despite her own amused snorts. “Fluttershy, please, I’m trying to tell the story!”
“Sorry,” Fluttershy said, turning to her sewing and failing to hide her grin.
“One day, we asked the local schoolteacher if we could borrow her projector for a day, along with some of her films,” Rarity continued, “and we took it all the way to my friend’s library.”
Truthfully, lugging the projector all the way from the school into the forest and back had been quite the ordeal, but everypony’s enthusiasm had been a great motivator—Rarity herself delighted in watching Twilight’s overblown reactions to the most simple modern technology she was presented with.
“Library?” Pinkie asked, blinking three times. She bit her lip, apparently lost in thought, before shaking her head and then nodding. “Mm-hm… Then what?”
“So, once it was ready, we sat her down in front of it, started it up, and…” She drifted off, the suspense she was trying to create ruined by Fluttershy’s muffled laughing.
“…And?” Pinkie asked, looking back and forth between the two mares. “Did she like it? What did she say?”
“Nothing,” Rarity replied with a devilish smirk. “She said absolutely nothing at all, did she, Fluttershy?”
“Mm-hm,” Fluttershy said, smiling cryptically.
“Aw…” Pinkie’s face fell. “She didn’t like it?”
“Oh, not at all, darling. She absolutely loved it,” Rarity clarified, smiling brightly, still toying with her necklace. “It just took the poor dear around ten minutes to pick her jaw up off the floor in order to speak, is all.”
“That’s great!” Pinkie said, clapping happily. “So she really super duper liked it?!”
By this point, Rarity’s giggling had returned full force. “Oh, goodness, I think she must have watched the same documentary at least twenty times! And she kept pointing out the most mundane details as if they were the most fascinating facts on Earth! It was adorable.”
Pinkie bit her lip. “Lulla doesn’t know about movie projectors, either… Do you think she’d love them too?” she asked, ears flicking up. “Maybe when she— she’s not sick anymore, we could go visit you and your friend.”
“Oh, I think she’d like that very much,” Rarity replied. The look on Twilight’s face if one day Rarity arrived accompanied by Princess Luna… She looked down at her necklace and sighed. “I think that would make her very happy indeed.”
“Aww…”
Rarity looked up to find Pinkie giving her a rather endearing stare, like a foal faced with a little kitten. “Is something the matter?”
Pinkie quickly shook her head. “Nope! It’s just that I’m happy you have such nice friends, like Fluttershy and Bookcase!” she clarified, smiling cheerfully. “I don’t think I’ve ever seen you so excited! Ever! Even if we just met… once. You two must be very close!”
Rarity laughed. “Well, I don’t know if we’re that close yet,” she admitted, finally letting go of the necklace. Or, well, she didn’t know what Twilight really felt toward her, did she? At least she knew they were close enough for Twilight to consider them friends, but… “I hope we are. I like her very much, at least.”
It wasn’t a lie, but her latter statement got the most unusual response—from Fluttershy. Just as soon as Rarity had finished, the pegasus had let out the smallest of audible giggles—a teasing giggle, which she tried to mask by pretending to focus on the last few stitches of her butterfly. Rarity would have thought nothing of it, usually, but the fact that Fluttershy pointedly turned away with a slightly larger smile when Rarity turned to her, well…
It was Pinkie Pie who spoke first, though.
She looked back and forth between the two mares, eyes widening. “Ooooooh.”
Wait, Rarity hadn’t meant to imply that…
Pinkie raised her hooves to her mouth and, as if she were a filly with a colossal secret, whispered, “You like like her.”
Rarity blinked. “I… like like her?” She processed the sentence in her mind, and perhaps what pushed her into reacting wasn’t the statement itself, but rather that her first thought upon hearing it hadn’t been to deny it, but to consider it. “O-oh, no, wait!” she finally blurted out, definitely not nervous in any way. “It’s not like that at all! We’re just very close is all.”
Rarity’s excitement toward Twilight was purely out of fascination with the legend, not to mention her duty toward helping the princesses now that she was involved. It wasn’t because of any… ulterior motive like…
Her blush intensified, and she restrained herself from shooting her friend a flustered glare.
Where had Fluttershy even gotten such a ridiculous notion? And here Rarity thought she was the one who’d read too many romance novels. She couldn’t even imagine it. Twilight was a ghost, an ethereal being who just happened to be… rather cute when she was fascinated by… well, by most anything. She certainly wasn’t unpleasant to look at, either, and she was incredibly intelligent, and…
And she realized she was doing a very poor job at demonstrating why she didn’t have a crush on the alicorn.
Which she didn’t!
“Finished,” Fluttershy announced, putting down the sewing needle and allowing Rarity to inspect her hard work. Once she’d gotten her friend’s seal of approval, she put the cloak on and stepped back so as to allow Rarity and Pinkie Pie to admire her new cape.
“Ooooh! You look like you live here!” Pinkie exclaimed, as though putting on a black cloak was all it took to look like a Hollow Shades local.
Unfortunately, it seemed Rarity’s conversation with Pinkie Pie would have to be postponed. With Fluttershy’s cloak done, they didn’t have any more reason to linger inside the workshop.
The three mares made their way out of the shop and into the now empty streets of Hollow Shades.
“So, whatcha wanna do now?” Pinkie asked, still eager to continue with her impromptu job of official tour guide. “The shops are closed now, but we can go to the plaza again, or wander in the forest, or go ask Elder Moonshine if she can tell us spooky stories, or—”
“I think it might be best if we head to our hotel, darling,” Rarity interrupted, offering Pinkie a grateful smile. “You’ve been exceedingly hospitable to us, and we wouldn’t want to impose.”
Night had fallen several hours earlier, and Rarity knew they’d have to go to sleep soon unless they wanted to risk missing Professor Awe yet again. It was fortunate they’d already found a bed and breakfast to stay at.
“Aww… That means no super spooky sleepover?” Pinkie said, her mane deflating as did her spirits. “It’s ’cause you wanna see that mean professor, isn’t it?”
Rarity still didn’t understand what was so terrible about the professor. He had seemed pleasant enough in the article she’d read about him, but he must have done something notably awful if somepony as friendly as Pinkie Pie disliked him.
“Why don’t we meet up after our visit to the professor?” she suggested, eager to wipe the sad expression off her friend’s face. “Our train home won’t leave until tomorrow night, so if we finish up early, we’ll have most of the day for you to continue showing us around. What do you think, Fluttershy?” she asked, turning to her friend who nodded in reply.
“Oh yes, I’d like that,” Fluttershy said, smiling at Pinkie.
“Oh! Okay! We can do that!” Pinkie replied, her cheer returning instantly. “How about we meet up at noon tomorrow? Near Luna’s statue?”
“That sounds lovely,” Rarity said.
Now that they’d agreed on a date, Fluttershy and Rarity bid goodbye to Pinkie and trotted off, waving one last time at the pink mare still standing in the street and watching them go. Admittedly, Rarity’s questions about Princess Luna still burned in her mind, and she felt distressed about not knowing for absolute sure.
If she… If she gave Twilight false hope…
She let out a sigh and Fluttershy immediately nudged Rarity with a wing.
“Rarity?” she asked, concern for her friend evident on her face for what must have been the fifth time that night. Rarity decided she really should try and keep her act together, lest she end up making her friend nervous too.
“Sorry, dear. I was just lost in thought,” she said quickly, running a hoof through her mane. She couldn’t go back to Ponyville without knowing for sure whether Lullaby was Luna, and the only way to do so was to confront Pinkie Pie about it. She just wished she didn’t feel as though it was going to be a very… difficult conversation.
“Do you want to talk about it?” Fluttershy suggested, smiling kindly at her distraught friend.
Rarity mulled it over. Telling somepony of Pinkie’s situation and how terribly she’d been bullied wasn’t really a very… tactful thing to do, but it was the possibility of a princess having been found, and she would be confiding in Fluttershy, whom she knew to be one of—if not the—most trustworthy ponies she was friends with.
“Well…”
“It’s about Moonlight Lullaby, isn’t it?” Fluttershy asked, smiling meekly when Rarity’s surprised expression gave her an affirmative answer. “You seemed a bit too curious about her.”
“Ah…” Oh, enough already. She trusted Fluttershy with her life, and she needed to tell somepony or else it would haunt her for the rest of the night.
“Fluttershy, I have a suspicion about her,” she started, realizing how silly what she was going to suggest sounded. “Now, truthfully, it might sound somewhat… crazy, but—”
“Rarity, you say that as if we weren’t friends with a spirit trapped in a library,” Fluttershy interrupted, giggling when Rarity rolled her eyes playfully.
“All right, I get your point,” she said, laughing as well. She took a deep breath, collected her thoughts, and began, “You know how Elder Moonshine and I spoke in private earlier? Well…”
On the way to the hotel, Rarity told Fluttershy everything she knew about Pinkie and her mysterious friend. The pegasus listened quietly to how Pinkie had claimed as a filly that her friend was Princess Luna, to how she’d been bullied by the other foals, and to how Moonlight Lullaby became a nickname for the imaginary friend the entire town said she had.
By the time she’d finished her long story, they’d already reached the hotel, gone up to their room, and Rarity had finished taking off her makeup and other things. She may have gotten a little distracted complaining about how Twilight hadn’t allowed her to mention her existence, but when she sat down on her bed, she was ready to hear Fluttershy’s opinion.
“It just doesn’t make any sense,” Rarity said, stifling a yawn. “Why is she the only one who can see the princess? Are there any conditions to ‘seeing’ her? And when I asked, she said she had no idea where Princess Sele— Luna was. I’d feel inclined to assume she’s lying to protect the princess, but…”
“But…?”
“But if that were true, why would she then claim she ‘believes’ in Princess Luna?” Rarity replied, levitating a brush over and running it through her mane. “Why would she say she believes in her, yet not say where she is? Wouldn’t it help to have evidence of the princess’s existence?” She put the brush down and sighed. Unless Pinkie can’t show proof of Luna? If she says she saw her in her dreams… but then why wouldn’t the princess tell her where she is?
“Don’t worry, Rarity. We’ll understand more when we talk to Professor Awe tomorrow,” Fluttershy said, attempting to soothe the increasingly frustrated unicorn. “And you said you’d talk to Pinkie tomorrow about Princess Luna, didn’t you?”
“I have to, but I just wish… Things would be so much simpler if Twilight were here with us. Maybe she’d know… Well, I don’t know if she’d know if it was the princess, but I just… wish she were here.” Rarity toyed with her necklace, thoughts again drifting toward the alicorn. What was Twilight doing at that moment? Why was she so worried…? “Maybe we should go to bed. All this aimless speculation won’t get us anywhere.”
The two mares lay down on their respective beds, Rarity using her magic to flick the lights out. Unfortunately, sunk in the darkness, her mind started to wander toward its favorite subject whenever she had a brief moment of respite.
Twilight.
It was silly, wasn’t it? The first time, when she left for Canterlot, her only thought regarding Twilight while she was away had been to try and figure out what the story behind her was, but now it was different. Now her thoughts were not wholly consumed by the mystery surrounding the alicorn, but by the alicorn herself, and what she was doing, and how she was feeling.
What was she doing back home in the library? Rarity snorted at her own question. That had an obvious answer: Twilight was probably—no, definitely—reading a book, as she always was when Rarity barged in, announced or not. Except for that one time she’d found Twilight playing with Elara and Themis, and Rarity’s giggling had given away the fact that she was watching.
The memory alone made her feel giddy and she tried very hard to stifle the giggle bubbling up in her throat. She should have taken a picture of the moment instead of cooing at it from afar. Actually, no, she should have taken a picture of how mortified Twilight looked, caught being adorable with her owls. She rolled over again, biting down a large smile.
Goodness, Twilight is rather cute, isn’t she?
“Rarity?” Fluttershy yawned, turning around to look at her friend in the darkness. “Why are you laughing?”
Rarity felt her face grow hot. “O-oh! Sorry, darling, it’s nothing!” she quickly blurted out, clearing her throat and turning on her side to face Fluttershy. “I was only remembering something Twilight did some time ago.”
She was about to wish her friend a good night, but stopped herself the second she heard Fluttershy snort in the same way she earlier had earlier with Pinkie Pie.
“Fluttershy, Twilight is just a friend,” Rarity said, trying to sound stern despite the blush on her face and the hesitation she felt at her own claim. “I haven’t the faintest idea why you keep giggling like that when I mention her, but I’d like that to be clear.”
“I know, Rarity,” Fluttershy replied, stifling a yawn which Rarity was positive was a cover for another giggle. “I just think it’s nice you and Princess Twilight are so close. The princesses are lucky.”
“Lucky?”
Fluttershy sat up, rubbing her eyes. “Princess Luna is lucky to have such a good friend like Pinkie Pie, and Princess Twilight is lucky to have such a good friend like you,” she elaborated.
“Twilight has you too, darling. And Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo,” Rarity reminded her, even if she privately reveled in the fact that she’d been singled out. “You mustn’t diminish the part you’ve played here. You’re just as important as I am in helping her.”
Fluttershy nodded. “Oh, I know, and I’m very grateful for my friendship with Princess Twilight,” she replied, lying back down on her bed and stifling another yawn. “It’s just that she seems to like you very much, and I’m happy for her that you like her very much too.”
“Oh…” Rarity watched Fluttershy for a moment before lying back down. “You say that, but sometimes I wonder if the only thing she likes very much are her books,” she said jokingly, a smile spreading across her lips.
“Good night, Rarity.”
“Good night, Fluttershy,” Rarity said, rolling over, closing her eyes and letting her thoughts wander back to her friend’s claim.
Princess Twilight seems to like you very much…
She let her thoughts cling to that claim, a warmth spreading across her chest, and her blush remaining prominent. She thought about Twilight one last time, wondered what she was doing one last time, hoped she was still safe from the Spirit before allowing her nearly faded mind to ask one last question as it drifted off into sleep.
When did I start caring about that silly alicorn so much?
Shippidy-do-da, shippidy yay~ My oh my what a wonderful ship.
And of course, just when she 'started caring' for that silly Alicorn, shit is going to fly fanwards. I wonder how the spirit fits in...
The chapter before this felt a little slow, but this one was on point. I'm looking forward to Rarity talking to Pinkie about Luna... instead of Moonlight Lullaby.
I was promised Raritwi in chapter 1.
I just finished chapter 10.
Do you have any idea how long you've kept me waiting? I find this thoroughly vexing! I am vexed thoroughly! Ooh, if you were here right now, I'd — I'd — well, I don't rightly know what I would do, but it would be very unkind!
Hair! Yes, I'd pull your hair! And maybe put a slug in it for good measure! Possibly two, but definitely one!
Of course, now I wonder if this story is also stealth Luna-Pinkie.
6526069 This is a longer story and not a one shot. Let Monochromatic build the relationship like a real one, not just jump into it. I like it myself and Rarity has started having those feelings toward Twilight and find it cute.
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Well, good to know someone else likes the ship
I'd like to see a more steady build to a better relationship.
Anyway, there's a lot more to go I believe. Hey, this is part one of two parts or ... was it three? Something along those lines were mentioned in the blog post awhile back...
Anyway, if a lady like Rarity were to suddenly jump into a full-fluff relationship with a rather secretive, reclusive and book-loving ghost she met within a week I'm pretty sure others may start complaining about "unrealistic" or "OOC".
6526092 Ah, the mythical MoonPie. Thought only legend, until now?
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We would if the recluse wasn't royalty.
I kid, I kid. I also like a relationship that develops over time.
6525977 Plenty of moonlight headin' my way, shippidy-do-da, shippidy yay!
And then, I remembered that one of the main reasons for this epic fic to be made was a shipping... xd
Yay, an update! Ahhh! Watching Rarity trying to get this secret out of Pinkie is killing me! Haha it's like I'm glad that she doesn't just come straight out and interrogate her, but I want to hear Pinkie say that she knows Luna! I'm sure it would be such a big relief for Pinkie just to talk about it without being ridiculed, and then we can search for Lulu!!
On the other hand, if Moonlight Lullaby really is just a regular pony who's bedridden that happens to have a night related cutie mark and is in no way associated with Luna... I'd probably laugh hard because I got trolled so badly, then cry internally because it's not Luna!
It would be so cool if Twilight could come up with a way to communicate long distances with Rarity, like sending scrolls to her and teaching Rarity how to send scrolls back with her magic! Rarity isn't a super powerful unicorn though, so maybe she'd only be able to receive scrolls but not reply? Hmmm.
A wonderful chapter as always!
6526286 Eh, the fic is more than good enough to make up for it, if you're not into shipping.
And really, with characters so removed from their counterparts (in history, albeit not quite in personality), and the entire story building up to the shipping, its introduction feels neither dissonant nor forced to me. I liked how it's handled in this.
I suspect Rarity is going to dream of a certain lavender Alicorn.. and dreaming of the REAL Twilight might get somepony's attention.
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One of my pre-readers wondered if perhaps I should wait a bit more before establishing the crush, and I honestly just went...
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I can neither confirm nor deny this.
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Ah, I'm glad you liked the pacing better! And yeah, we'll be learning about Luna soon :D
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We're at Part 1 of 2!
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I also can neither confirm nor deny this.
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Thank you, Peachy!!! It means a lot that you liked it, as always!
As for your concern on communication devices, well... there's a reason Rarity's necklace is glowing pink in the cover art :P
I have this sneaking suspicion that the curse somehow stops anyone from helping if the princesses ask for it. Or something like that.
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6526286 Because a story stops being epic the moment it includes shipping at any point? Well, it's still taking its time, but the shipping fuel has been building for quite a few chapters already.
Whelp, if by chance you stop reading over a shipping story having shipping developments that was conceived from a shippy one-shot, then guess you'll just have to miss out on the not so epic, epic next chapter. *whistles innocently*
But seriously, if you've enjoyed the story thus far, there's no real reason you'll not continue enjoying it since I very much doubt you didn't know what you were getting yourself into when you started reading a fic with a big giant ROMANCE tag on it. I can assure you, it isn't being rushed. The groundwork has been built, and story is chugging along nicely and it's far far from being over.
6526553 Oh, nevermind me, boys. Just anoter innocent bystander hanging by the fan.
Great chapter!
Such a lovely chapter! And yay for that romance peeking in n___n
Twilight has a friend. Luna has a friend. Does Celestia also have a friend? (or more (stealth)-shipping )
I hope we get a Moon pie ship. Luna is the only ship I like for Pinkie when Twilight is not available.
I'm going to take a guess and say that Rarity is going to meet Luna in her dreams. I personally found that then ending there to be a little convenient for that outcome. Also yay for Fluttershy ribbing Rarity about her crush.
6526009 I think Professor Awe is the Spirit in Disguise. He's tricking ponies like Rarity into coming to him for information, and giving away that they have found one of the princesses, at which point he kills/traps them.
It's either that or Rarity is the Spirit, either Reincarnated, or a form without memories of being the Spirit, used to love and be loved by the Princess, before turning back into the Spirit to rip the Princess' Heart out and eat it joyishly.
After all, Twilight can not escape on her own, and if she has her heart broken by someone who cared and loved for her deeply, she would break and banish everyone from her home and let none ever enter again, effectively trapping herself forever.
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Well, I have a theory on that. We've seen Fluttershy, Rarity, Twilight, Pinkie Pie, and Applejack
...But we have not seen Rainbow. Rarity mentioned the Weather Team Leader in an earlier chapter and it wasn't Rainbow, as far as we know, she isn't from Ponyville just like Pinkie Pie isn't
And Celestia is trapped near a Falls, but what if the 'stories' have it wrong about it being a WATERfall. There is another type, namely a RAINBOWfalls, where a rainbow colored Pegasi might be a weather pony, working with Rainbows?
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Oooooh! I like it, I like it a lot! Also, I made myself giggle by imagining that it makes printer noises and spits out a small sheet of paper, though I'm sure that's not how the crystal is going to work at all!
Urgh. Shipping. Can't say I'm in favor. I still want to know what led to all this, though. It's been an interesting story thus far.
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I kind of wonder about 'Professor Awe'. It seems far too convenient that he should be knowledgeable. They probably ought to skip visiting him altogether.
6527438 Romance tag was there from the start though... if you knew this was coming, why even try to read it? Or do you just like whining about it?
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Because I enjoy reading and good stories. The romance just often feels unnecessary to the story, tacked on if you will. I feel obliged to state my feelings on the matter. I do not see how is any different that going about liking it for those who enjoy shipping.
6527533 Generally? Commenting is useful in one of two ways: One is as motivation for the writer, writing comments that inspire them to continue writing the story. The second is constructive criticism, helping them improve. Just talking about your dislike for particular (and disclosed) parts of the story is just unhelpful and rude.
I'm not saying that you shouldn't read it, but if you don't have anything constructive to say, silence is preferred.
6527533 But the romance *is* important for this particular story. This is why it has a romance tag. What you are doing is not constructive criticism.
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Hi! Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy the story!
As for the shipping aspect...
Before posting this chapter, I... assumed I would get similar comments, and I think it's important I say something about it now that the shipping is 'official' within the story, even though it's always been official both in the description and well, the romance tag.
So I suppose this is the best time to give an official stance for those concerned.
Of course, my goal here is to make an enjoyable story to everyone, regardless of the romance or not! It's an incredibly hard task, and I may be doing it terribly, who knows. Though I'm happy you've been able to enjoy the story despite what you don't like about it, I feel like I should point out that the shipping is going to become more and more prominent.
You mentioned in your reply to Karrakaz that the romance feels tacked on to the story (or onto some stories you've read?). I understand why this would be a concern, however, I can assure you that Enchanted Library was conceived and has been designed as romance story through and through. I'm just taking it slow because I want to develop the relationship steadily and believably.
I realize, of course, that this is bound to alienate some readers, especially those that are against shipping or RariTwi, but the entire story is designed around them, and it always has been!
I'd go as far as saying that the adventure was what was tacked on hehehe...GIVE IN TO THE SHIPPING RARITY!! You know you want to >=)
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No, its like this!
And then, its like this!
But just the part about resistance being futile!
I'm curious as to how Rarity and Fluttershy's visit with the professor will go, and the following time with Pinkie. I suspect that when Pinkie tells Luna about 'Bookshelf', she'll want to meet Rarity and Fluttershy.
inb4 Luna sees some of Rarity's inevitable dreams of Twilight. Also inb4 the professor is a jerk-ass who won't do anything but aggressively insist to the girls that the Princesses don't exist and possibly even that they never did, completely ignoring any argument to the contrary, being completely useless and generally just frustrating Rarity to no end.
Jus' finally getting about reading this story after having seen its title however long ago, and I get to this point and think "Yesss it's time to read the everything that happens in the next chapter" and then I click the button but all it does is make the list of the previous chapters appear and I just click on it repeatedly, confused, wondering what happened until I remembered that this story is in progress.
Pls. I don't generally like RariTwi (although your stories have pretty consistently made me satisfied with the ship) but you've been building it up and to just now get to it after going on a three-hour reading binge on this story which also has a fantastic story without the shipping thank you it's painful please i need this in my blood
And so IT BEGINS! Muhahahahaaaa! This is so cute!
How did I miss this yesterday?
Anyway, I really loved this chapter.
When Fluttershy giggled I broke into a smile. I'm all, "I know where this is going."
It's lovely.
More more more more more
Heart heart heart heart heart
WE'RE FINALLY GETTING SOMEWHERE (maybe)
6529195 good thing they are all going to sleep then huh?
Todays' shipping forecast: 40 knot easterlies coming in, with strong RariLight on the horizon. Sporadic patches of d'aww and squee to be expected
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I love this story so much you can't even imagine!
And today that it was the only bright thing after a long difficult day, I love it even more.
6527533 I remember raising a mention against the romance on the story once (5926549), to which Monochromatic replied (5926750) that while the point of the story is the shipping she wants it to develop naturally.
I then only could ask Mono not to rush Rarity and Twilight's relationship, and so far I can say she has delivered.
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While I do sometimes aim to be helpful in some particular way, comment section are for comments. Good, bad, positive, or negative it doesn't matter in the slightest. I don't find see it as rude and whether it is helpful or not isn't important at all. You and others (author included) may prefer silence, but this is the comment section. It is not the critique section, or the book discussion section, etc although it may contain any of those things. In fact, because you aren't the author, I give even less of a damn than usual.
To make a point, see the results of a define search on Google:
Comment (noun) - a verbal or written remark expressing an opinion or reaction.
Romance being the point of the story seems very strange if you spend most of the story not focusing on that. 105k words (single space, 12 pt font) amounts to 200 pages (based on a web word count -> page calculator). That's a lot of running around without addressing the main point of the story. Unless I misunderstand something.
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For what's worth, I am rather ambivalent on the purpose of tags. I generally think they should signal substantial parts of stories, but that doesn't mean that I expect any one tag to represent the major or sole direction of the story. I don't see a romance tag and expect CLOP or a romance novel or a story that never talks about anyone outside of the romantic ship and close friends.
If you keep going the way you have thus far, I'd recommend doing some re-reading or revision later to check that the pace is what you want it to be. Being a tad more overt might not be such a bad thing.
If anyone at all cares I generally have a lower opinion of shipping between princesses/mane six/etc.
Nice job catching up to the rest of us, Rares... Somewhere, Cadance giggles at your reluctance. The number of folks confused or negative about the shipping... well, I'll ignore the obvious romance tag... and the author's body of work here... and just ask if this was really out of the blue? The little signs were there way before this chapter. What I will say, unless you're really against shipping on principle, is that it won't detract here. How do I know? Well, I actually don't... other than that body of work note above... but look at what we have so far. Given the tone and the little touches, are you worried that a romance (or a few) can't have a place in this? Everything is certainly fine (dodges anvils and such).
Hope real life is looking good for you, Monochromatic, and it's nice to see a new chapter. Looking forward to more, especially since this one did little more than build tension and questions. *blows raspberry* I do enjoy a not completely sugar overdosed Pinkie though, so points there. I'm with Rarity, we need a way to keep Twilight involved while she's questing. I miss their interactions in these away chapters... though if they meet Luna, completely worth.
From a comment by Jirodyne:
It's joyously, by the way, no big though. Also? Whoa... neat trick on an incorporeal being, but uh... wrong tags for that sort of thing, wouldn't you say? Beyond that though, you make an interesting point that I'd also wondered about... where IS Rainbow? I'm sure they'd all find their marks even without a Rainboom to kick them off at the same time... don't see blank flanks at their ages. Still, without said kick off, what did happen for each of them and where's ole Loyalty napping these days?
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In short: you're an asshole with no idea about pacing or buildup. Gotcha. You will be ignored. Go back to reading/writing whatever crap doesn't require any of those things, some people actually enjoy a story that doesn't dump everything into their laps in the first few thousand words.
6536274 You're not very well-versed on how to make an interesting story, are you? Thinking that an author should make things blatantly obvious to readers is a ridiculous notion. As others have said, a majority of readers enjoy the steady build up and development of a story and its characters instead of being beaten over the head with certain aspects as though they were a hammer.
And, by the way, we are only 10 chapters into the story. Things are progressing nicely, and developments happen as is logical (especially emotional connections between certain characters that had little realization those connections existed at all). Who is to say how long this story will end up being? It could be upwards of 20 - 30 chapters, with increasing romantic exploration later in the story. I like the Romance tag at the beginning of the story so I know where the story is intended to go. Just like with gore, adventure, and character tags. They allow readers to decide whether their time would be well-spent reading a story (especially lengthy stories like this one) before they get several chapters in, only to realize it's going a direction they prefer not following.
I ship Rarijack as my second favorite ship (after Flutterdash) but the character development and the steady pacing of the emotions in this story makes this engaging and entertaining for me, even though it's not a ship I normally prefer (in fact, loathe is a more opportune word). Character/plot development is EVERYTHING. If this had been a story that started off with Rarity feeling instantly attracted to Twilight (the way some stories do), I would have dropped it faster than you could say, "Give it a chance."
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I want to send you a cookie, IRL.
Denial thy name is Rarity...