Scootaloo Scar Wing stood at Scootaloo's side, watching for their acquaintances to walk up the path and knock on the door. Scar Wing saw part of Apple Bloom's pink mane and ran to open the door. Sweetie Belle knocked and Scar Wing opened the door and held it for her and Apple Bloom.
"Hello Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom."
"Hello, Scar Wing. It's nice to see you again. Where's Scoots?"
"She's in the kitchen."
Sweetie Belle left and walked into the kitchen to help Scootaloo with dinner. Heart Beat, Scootaloo and Scar Wing's daughter, walked up to Apple Bloom. Her long, black hair looked dark against her pink coat. She had been born with no wings, only stubs where they should be.
Apple Bloom smiled at her and asked, "How have you been, Beat?"
Heart Beat smiled so big her eyes shut, "Great! Mommy took me out to the grove and showed me how to pick berries. We picked wild raspberries and ate them for lunch."
"Oh," Apple Bloom said with a small smile on her face. Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo walked into the living room and sat down.
"Look at us," Sweetie Belle said, "Here, together, just one big happy family."
"You can say that again," Scootaloo said as she rested her head on Scar Wing's shoulder, "I wouldn't give it up for anything."
5387425 wait so if I say f*** this comment will be deleted?
(its censored so im just testing)
5618340 Nah. I changed the raising to teen, so it's fine. If it was mature, I probably wouldn't care nearly as much.
5658056 Well, the epilogue kinda implies something else, but I'm not sure you've read that yet so comment unless you've figured it out.
5658074 Well I just finished the epilogue and Scootaloo really doesn't remind me of the type to cook for anypony, well except maybe RD and she is long dead. This was an interesting story for sure although I was hoping the CMC would wind up staying dark and becoming dark overlords.
5658206 Well, I thought about it, but another writer wanted their sister side to shine through and they lived up to that expectation. I might make an alternative ending.
5667606 An alternative ending would be great. When I wrote my Terror in Equestria series, I gave the first one two endings, one where Twilight was restored to good and one where she defeated the forces of good and stayed evil, which is what the rest of the series followed from. I'll admit, I like evil ponies.