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This story is a sequel to The Great Pony War
After the Great Pony War, the Cutie Mark Crusaders are left with nothing and decide to find inner peace by becoming evil. Scootaloo becomes a Shadowbolt, Sweetie Belle starts using dark magic, and Apple Bloom tends to the evil plants of the Everfree Forest. Will the consequences of their actions cause them to loose their friends or each other?
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What are the Great Pony Wars? This is a sequel, right? What's with all the deleted comments?
5387043 yeah, I'm writing the Great Pony Wars now. All the deleted comments had some rude remarks and cuss words.
5387425 wait so if I say f*** this comment will be deleted?
(its censored so im just testing)
5618340 Nah. I changed the raising to teen, so it's fine. If it was mature, I probably wouldn't care nearly as much.
Scootaloo kisses a boy, I never saw that coming. I always saw her as the type to like other females.
5658056 Well, the epilogue kinda implies something else, but I'm not sure you've read that yet so comment unless you've figured it out.
5658074 Well I just finished the epilogue and Scootaloo really doesn't remind me of the type to cook for anypony, well except maybe RD and she is long dead. This was an interesting story for sure although I was hoping the CMC would wind up staying dark and becoming dark overlords.
5658206 Well, I thought about it, but another writer wanted their sister side to shine through and they lived up to that expectation. I might make an alternative ending.
5667606 An alternative ending would be great. When I wrote my Terror in Equestria series, I gave the first one two endings, one where Twilight was restored to good and one where she defeated the forces of good and stayed evil, which is what the rest of the series followed from. I'll admit, I like evil ponies.
5667855 I added an alternative ending. Gosh, it kinda made me wanna write a third story in the series.
I like it.