I walked outside and then I was stopped by Craig.
"If you're going to be going out there just be careful."
I nodded and continued on. As I looked across the horizon I started to see a city. It wasn't very big but it was still a city. I walked towards it but then I had realized that my previous attempt of entering a populated place had gone awry.
I tried to transform and orange flames starting to cover me but when I looked at myself I was still well... me. I sighed as I continued my slow,treacherous walk. Who builds a city in between a mountain anyways.
I devised a plan to get through the city. I would just hide in the shadows until I could get out. I picked a bush and waited for the ponies to move then I quickly moved alongside the bush. Just then I heard a bright, cheery voice.
"I'm just saying that they should make chimicherrychangas!"
I peeped my eyes out of the bush I was in and I saw a pink pony with a pinker mane bouncing cheerfully. I then saw her body twitching along with her tail moving erratically and ending with her jumping. She really needs to lay off the caffeine.
I saw a purple one ask the pink one what was going on.
"I really don't know. I've never had my tail twitch that much before."
They started to walk toward where I was hiding and I started to get nervous. Luckily they were only talking. I could't move or I risk capture. I then felt a tickling in my muzzle. The tickling grew stronger and stronger and even though I tried to hold it in, it forced it's way out.
"Aaa-aaaa-aaaaa-chooo!"
Great... I just had to signal my location didn't I? The purple one went to my bush. I tried to crouch down to make myself a hidden as possible. It didn't work.
"A CHANGELING!?"
I was then covered in a purple aura, unable to get away. I could just barely move my own body. She pulled me in and took a good look at me.
"What is a changeling doing here? They were all defeated back a couple of days ago."
I tried to look around again and what I saw was kind of frightening. A blue pegasus looked like she was going to beat me up, the marshmallow was looking at me with disgust, the orange one was looking at me a confused look, the yellow pegasus was hiding behind her own mane and finally the purple one was giving me a scrutinizing look. I decided to speak, maybe I could clear things up.
"Umm... hi?"
"Oh my gosh, it talks!" said the purple one.
"Why wouldn't I?"
"You're a changeling. Changelings don't talk. They can't talk."
"Can you let me go?"
"Why should I? You haven't given me a reason to yet. For all I know you could be evil."
I could kind of understand where she was going, me being a changeling in all. Still it was currently better then the griffons. They attacked me on site. I looked around again and I saw the cityfolk were gathering around me. Some had confused faces while other had angry faces. A few of them were just indifferent to me.
"Spike, take a letter."
"About what?"
"About the changeling. I don't know what to do with it."
"Hey! I'm right here you know."
I saw the purple one tell the dragon to take a letter. I think his name was Spike. She was telling him to write a letter to Celestia. The queen always told us to beware of her. Celestia defeated her twice before so who knows what she would do to me. I saw "Spike" breath green fire on the letter and it being sent away. A few minutes of silence and "Spike" burped up a letter.
"Ok girls, Princess Celestia told us to meet her in Canterlot along with the changeling. She will decide what to do next."
I saw everyone else nod and they started to walk towards the train station.
"All Aboard!"
The purple one forced me onto the train along with the others. Everyone screamed and a pony ran into the purple one. The unicorn's magic was disrupted and that gave me a chance to escape. I didn't really care where I teleported it would be now or never. I focused my magic and the purple one along with the rest tried to stop me. Right before they touched me I was gone. I slowly waited for me to go back to reality. As the bright white flash of light faded I saw I was in a creepy, dark forest. I looked around and I saw an old, dilapidated castle. The sun started to go down so I decided to seek shelter in it. I would focus on getting out tomorrow when I can get some rest.
...Sheeeooot.
It's like I'm reading journal entries.
calm down about the length as long as the story line reaches a decent length the chapters can stretch over an hour long