• Published 30th Nov 2014
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Never-ending Dream - Indi3g



Daniel is incredibly mature for his age...to the point where he's too serious for his own good. What makes it worse is he can't express his emotions well. Throw something like that into a world of colorful singing ponies and you've got

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I completely forgot what this story is about so now I have to re-read it all... Oh well we're dead at work anyway

Are we going to find out who HER is? And good for 'Frost' for speaking his mind. Especially, to Twilight. Well, hopefully, the next chapter won't take as long next time, but real life happens.

I honestly think that the girls should be punished. Twilight PHYSICALLY ASSAULTED him and the others tried to force ably take him. He was not obligated to stay there and he stated that he needed time to himself

I suggest a harsher punishment for Twilight

I suggest a harsher punishment for Twilight

she is now a princess to understand that every action has a consequence

so as I said I hope she has a harder punishment

and it is given by Princess Celestia

and what he said just turn the page please twi not all problems are fixed that easy

Call princess friendship think you need a lesson in humility and think things before acting

I think in this story twi rose too fast

ps I hope not much later the next chapter

Weak punishment if you ask me. Then again, I don't know for how long Frost will be avoiding Twilight. It might take a few months at the least. When someone you don't know attacks you, it will be near impossible to become friends with each other later on.

Blind Teller, much appreciated. Like you said, I'm fairly new at this and I will COMPLETELY take what you said into consideration, especially about the pacing, wording and emotions. Again, thanks!

Why was Luna going to scold Frost? Everything he said was true. The only one that made an effort to do right by him so far are Luna and Fluttershy. Discord did a little, but he's the reason Frost is here in the first place. Pinkie did bring the ice pack, and I think she is just waiting for the right moment to have a surprise party for him.

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No discord said that he wasn't the reason he was here, it was because of (unknown). Discord KNEW of the whole thing, but he didn't DO the deed himself. My bet....celestial did it....or another draconequus maybe?

Maybe...Faust herself (dun DUN DUUUUUUNNNNNNNN!!!!!!) :rainbowderp:

But yeah, when flutter shy was getting the tea discord says he didn't cause the thing, but he does know.

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