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rainbowdarth


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Twilight has found ancient remains of what looks like an alicorn, deep within Ponyville Castle. But what awaits her and the others when she unknowingly awakens it? Will they be able to handle it, if it all goes downhill? Will they even survive this new adventure?

Editor/Pre-reader: lilguppy99 (Chapters 1-3)
Special Thanks to: OrangishPurple

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 1 )

a note for dialogue: don't close the quotes until the character has finished speaking,otherwise it is confusing and gives the impression of an unannounced character. Dialogue for a single character can be divided into paragraphs to sort the topics, only close the last one to mark the end of that characters lines.

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