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Still not entirely satisfied with my own editing. This was a monster to read through every line, I'm positive I missed things, in between going over the plot.
So if anyone catches anything, feel free to shame me.
Nope.
Chuck Te-...
Err... Luna.
Dayum. Write the next chapter quickly!
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Yep, that has to be Luna.
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I'm sorry, my head just exploded from the shear awesomeness of this chapter
Can't wait.
God this story is under appreciated, favorited
Rarity finally got that slap we've been waiting for
>>leafbug nnnnope, it's broken. lol
Celestia's too paranoid anyway
Gotta say mate this is the best fic i have read thus far
I KNOW WHATS GONNA HAPPEN.............................................................................................................................YEAH!
Didnt want the chapter to end! It was very good!
Really looking forward to the next chapter!
PLEASE OH PLEASE UPLOAD ANOTHER CHAPTER!
I need my fix... I've gone a full minute without reading and I'm already starting to twitch...
I NEED MY AWESOMENESS FIX!!!!
Once again, stopping by to appreciate all the comments . Tencent has done a wonderful job, not only in editing my work, but bringing my attention to things I am missing or characters I am underdeveloping. Discussions with Tencent have only made my story better, an the editing is just a bonus. All the props.
When I first started writing this, I had a vague idea where it was going to go, a basic timeline, and some concepts. If I could bang out 10 or 11 concise chapters that covered my ideas, I would have been happy- I legitimately thought maybe 10 or 20 people would take notice and think that it was alright. After the first couple chapters though, the unexpected popularity has forced me (in a good way) to consider better quality in my writing, and ideas. IE in my original story boarding, the trip from Ponyville to Canterlot was scripted as two chapters. Now, I can safely say Nathan won't set foot into the palace for another five or six.
Now, the sad part, is that I'm taking a lot more time with my chapters, and keep rewriting scenes to give less away, or put stuff off until later in the story, plus running everything through a very good editor. That means that I'm probably at best going to be restricted to a chapter a week at best. I also would like to go back and re-write the prologue and probably chapters one and two at some point, but only if I get writers block later on. I'll keep you guys up to date. Please keep enjoying the story, though.
The slap Rarity finally received made me smile with sick, twisted joy.
Damn i need more!
So Tencent and I have decided to give the current chapters a good overhaul to make sure that everything meshes together nicely before things start getting more complicated. That being said: anyone waiting for an update sooner than later is going to be disappointed. We will have edits on chapters already posted to tide you over and make sure you get some more insight into what's going on, but moving forward won't be coming for a bit more. If you're watching this space: We'll let you know when and where changes are made, and when we're ready to keep going. Stay tuned for a better story.
Damn, Flutters! You go girl!
ooooooooo cant wait for he next holyshit moment!!!
Sorry it's been so long boys and girls, but it's done!!! Tencent and I took apart absolutely everything, fixed up our story arc and upped the quality on the earlier chapters. If you are just reading for the first time- great! You'll be getting in without any preconceived notions and you don't have to worry.
Those who have been reading for a while- here's what you need to know. Some of the characterizations didn't quite work right, or were rushed, so we fixed some inconsistencies throughout. Some scenes with changes you might want to re-read (if you don't just read it all over again ):
P- The prologue has been nearly completely redone.
2- Both of the Fluttershy scenes
4- Applejack scene
6- Luna Scene
7- Pond Scene, RD scene
8- TS map scene.
Those are the major revisions. If you don't go back and read them, the story is still going to be the same, you're not losing a whole lot. We're just making the characters line up better with their planned content.
AND WITH THAT: chapter 9 is likely going to be good to roll either this weekend or shortly after. The wait is over.
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My job description got promoted!
And yeah, I fully expect faster putout on, at the very least, the next three chapters. I'll be sending the first draft of nine tonight.
It says a lot about how utterly stupid everybody in this story is that the main character has gotten so used to the oh-so-peaceful and "innocent" ponies trying to violently murder him, over nothing but sheer hateful indignation at some foreign sub-pony daring to talk back at them, that he doesn't even get upset about it anymore.