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Echoing what Tencent said, sorry for the wait. This was a very difficult chapter to write to get everything in and not make it come off in an ugly way. Hope you enjoy!
God Twilight, you only have a rudimentary and superficial understanding of emotions mixed in with instances of intense clarity into what the others are thinking (only if you concentrate). And yet, you're still not properly feeling anything, nor are you concentrating on what you're friends are feeling. If she would just focus on her friends instead of the bloody letter from PTC (Paranoid Tyrant Celestia) then she'd get what's going on. Maybe feel remorse too, but goddamn, she has a sun's worth of crap to make up for to Nathan (provided he's alive). I'm almost tempted to agree with tscop that he'd be better off dead. However, I do hope he's alive, adds even more flavor to the story in addition to what he's brought to the surface in the mane 6. This story is a serious gem, that I just happened to catch when I was browsing this needs like a 100 plus more ratings or something. Hope the next installment doesn't take as long but if it does I'm sure you'll make it worth the wait. Keep writing!
Holy shit, this chapter is your best one, they just keep getting more amazing, just ..... damn i don't have words for this, it just blew me away how much emotion you put into the characters, especially Twilight, Rarity .... actually just everyone of the mane six in this chapter, fuck this was worth the wait if the wait was about 2 freaking years, and i am not joking.
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well, if you read it carefully, you can see that something is affecting her memory. After her talk with Pinkie, she suddenly forgets the whole conversation when she looks at the scroll.
Twilight, she's possessed or being controlled by something. that much i'm sure of.
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I'm guessing Celestia enchanted that letter or something? If that's the case that bitch can rot in hell. Even so it was disgusting reading Twilight behave in this manner. And I'm not sure if I missed something or not, but wasn't the entire reason of this trip to Canterlot was to bring Nathan there? How is he now just an after thought that no one cares if he makes it there or not?
Judging from the explosion at the end, Nathan finally snapped!!!
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I agree with your your theory, Celestia probably enchanted the letter and is a ridiculously huge bitch
but Twilight is still a bitch too, not as much as Celestia, but still pretty twisted
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>dat nigga dead
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>My work here is done and my fingers are feeling a little stiff because it's so fucking cold in here, but not that I'm complaining
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and on that note I'm outta here
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Give me your fucking skype (if you have one).
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DAMN YOU AND YOUR CLIFFHANGER WAYS!!!!!
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oh and congratulations you managed to make me hate twilight even more, even if Celestia enchanted the letter shes still a bitch.
Oh and if that is the case I hope Celestia burns on a stake
But yet again another awesome chapter, a brohoof and stash for you sir /)*(\
I THOUGHT YOU WERE DEAD!!!
This chapter is EXTREMELY awesome along with this story. I freaking SQUEE'd when I saw it updated! you seriously don't fail to dissappoint!!!
Um, i didn't read it all yet, but when rainbow is making the realization about friendship near the stare, you Misspled "with" at the end of the sentince. Pretty badlly i might add.
And yes. i bey celestia did echant that letter. If i were RD i would've said "Buck it! if celestia wan't to see us SOO badly, She should get off her flank and see us herself!" And if RD was any more mad, i bet she would have said that as well(and yes.. i know that she could be killed on the way.)
And yes, like everyone else i do belive the note is cursed... I hope that explosion burned the damn thing. After all why carry it with you anyway?
holy shit the door exploded!!
Queue injured Nathan running into the house.
Twilight is a cock-juggling thundercunt!
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I can confirm that, no, you haven't missed anything. Take everything that you've been reading as canonical. This does not imply that everything that's canonical you're able to read.
There, about a big a hint that I can throw that doesn't have any permeable information.
To everyone, I can help elucidate technical details. No information giveaways, but stuff like confusing non-deliberately ambiguous wording and whether or not you guys think there's a plot screw-up because "x and y are mutually exclusive" I can say yes or no to. That kind of stuff falls on the ones writing (and editing) it to be clear and competent about. Of course though, if there's something that I can't reveal and I don't want to not respond to it otherwise I'd reveal something through a non-answer, I will happily exercise my right to lie.
So, if there's anything troubling anyone that's not obviously purposefully done. Shoot.
I have only two options at this point. I must either choose to believe that that author is writing these characters so OOC that I want to put my hand through the monitor, OR, as I suspect, Discord is being Discord.
Look at the evidence people. You know and LOVE these ponies. This is not Twilight Sparkle. Twilight Sparkle doesn't DO these things. Consequently, there is pretty obviously some sort of spell that's exaggerating her bad traits and dulling her good ones. Socially inept? Somewhat. Overly curious? Sure. Easily flustered when plans go awry? I'll buy that.
Callous? NO. Cruel? NO. Stupid? FUCK NO. I refuse to believe it. So the evidence says someone done screwed things up. If Discord can reach into the skull of Celestia and turn her into Der Paranoia Fuehrer Pony, then he can probably do something to mess with Twilight's perceptions.
Applejack is not a liar, but she goes along with a plan coached at her by who? Twilight and Pinkie Pie, who has repeatedly said she doesn't remember saying ANYTHING like that. Translation? Discord, OR, I don't know, those things that can look exactly like you, what are they called? Changelings I think, right? You know, those things Discords been working with all this time?
Rarity is being fed information, in her dreams (where have we seen that happen before?), and from anonymous ponies who we know very little about that sour her towards the human, and consequently Fluttershy. Where did these mysterious ponies get information about humans from? Well, if they aren't ponies... that answers that question.
Rainbow Dash doesn't know what the hell is going on, and she's been acting the most rationally of the group, or at least the most realistically. She's also the hardest member of the group to reach or influence because she spends the most time away from the group. Fluttershy.... poor Fluttershy... what can I say?
When every single element of harmony begins to act in direct opposition to their element, the ONLY rational explanation is that it is DIRECT ENEMY ACTION. Remove the elements as a potential threat, and Discord is unstoppable. Celestia flat out said this before. I would ALMOST be willing to argue that Luna might have been an imposter as well, but if I remember correctly I think she had a POV moment, and frankly, after seeing what's going on in Celestia's skull at the moment, I can't say as I blame her all that much.
Bottom line is this. There is some epic Discord fuckery going on, and until the Elements start acting like the friends they are, or were, in any case, it's going to get worse before it gets better.
If the tone of this comment strikes someone as angry and bitter, that's because I am, but not at any other commenter, and not at the author. I'll save that scorn for where it belongs.
Screw you Discord.
Either Celestia put a hex on that letter or Twilight has lost it. Plus, why do I want it to be a dragon that blew up the front door? NATHAN WARNED YOU ABOUT THEM DRAGONS!!!
Those scrolls.. They are cursed
Celestia in this fic makes me feel bad :(
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Damn. The shit Discord did in the show is nothing compared to the shit he's doing here. Before he just magicked them into being discorded. Now he's inflicting lasting psychological trauma.