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FLY, YOU FOOLS!
*Gandalf slides into the abyss.
Enjoy the chapter.
Oh that is one mean cliffhanger. Pun intended.
Damnit, looking forward to next chapter!
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words cannot describe how epic and sad this is
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nice call on the quote man
That was very gripping. But I think I know how this can end.
Fuck you, that is most killer cliffhanger I have ever seen.
Wow dude just wow. This is easily the greatest yet most unappreciated story I've ever come across on this site. I feel incredibly lucky to have stumbled upon this master piece by chance. I swear as soon as I started reading this chapter I was already dreading the fact that it would have to come to an end.
This is literature not some flimsy half baked idea that this site is plagued with. It almost pisses me off to see gutter trash and troll fics pop up on the featured box while a work of art like this goes by unnoticed. Honestly I think mods should start hand picking what goes into featured instead of this automated mechanic they use.
Well now that I've praised you let's talk about the story. First off I absolutely love Nathan! In most cases in HiE stories the lead's personality usually comes off as too cheesy or too badass. Nathan feels like a real person to me. He thinks his actions through and actually reflects on all of his choices. He does have his superman moments but they're all believable.
The semi love triangle you have going with Nathan, Fluttershy, and Pinkie is also new and refreshing. It's intricate and delicate in a way that's not simple like hey I'm a gary stu all the ponies just fell in love with me so let the polygamy begin!
Let me also commend you on the characterizations of the ponies. They're vastly deeper as characters then they ever were in the actual show let alone other stories. Rarity was an absolute bitch but you gave good reason for her to be that way. Instead of being a bitch for the sake of being a bitch. Discord is one twisted bastard but you've made him into one cunning and entertaining villain to follow. I also love the coupe d'etat angle you have going with Luna. Excellent move it adds more to a story that already had a great deal going for it.
But the character I'm most impressed with is Pinkie. Sweet Celestia you've created one hell of a character with her. You've added an insane amount of layers to a character that's generally two dimensional. Yet she's the most flushed out and probably deepest character in this story.
Even the way you portray Equestria is awesome. It's not all kisses and sunshine but a real world with government and actual danger, and not everypony is a friendship loving saint. Haha Bronzwing was like some mafia boss it was great. It's not often a fimfic will take it's readers to any place that's not Ponyville, Manehattan or Canterlot but you've done it.
To be perfectly honest I can't find any faults in this story. Your grammars spot on, no noticeable or distracting spelling mistakes I can see. So what more can I say besides keep up the good work! I wish I could give you one hundred thumbs up but sadly I can only offer you one.
As for the next chapter I'm guessing Slatehide and Stoutheart will save Nathan. There was a bit of foreshadowing earlier on. Well until your next chapter my good man later.
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Guess where the scene was inspired from?
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Thank you for the review. And you could help us greatly by spreading the word, we don't receive nearly enough pertinent feedback to help with quality control, it'd help me tons as the editor (and co-producer Squidhoof claims, though I am dubious) if we garnered more salient, and just plain more, remarks from the readers. It's kind of a repeated kick in the balls to weigh individual scenes and try to decide whether or not it'll progress the plotline lucidly when we have as little feedback as we do.
This was just simply amazing...
i love this story so much, my favorite HiE ever.
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I was at work when I read this so I didn't have time to post a response at the time, but now that I've waited until Tencent has posted, this will work even better.
First off, I would like to say thank you, both to yourself and others who have thus far enjoyed the story, and have given us such high praise. I don't deserve it, but it does give me all sorts of warm fuzzies inside, and inspires me to try and reach half of that.
Second: please know that, regardless of whether or not he thinks so, any such praise that you believe this fic deserves not only goes to myself, but Tencent as well. This guy pokes holes in my plot and character development, sticks around for weeks helping me iron out what I've already published (hours, and hours, and hours of rewriting scenes and characters so they make sense) etc etc. He's good people, and I fully believe this story wouldn't be anywhere near what it is without him. He's the one that I constantly throw stuff at and I'm happy when I get an "yep, that's pretty ok". He's a tough but fair editor, and does a fair bit of the writing himself if he thinks he can improve a scene.
So, with that said, enjoy reading on, and make sure you drop a line to Tencent once and a while.
838293 No problem I'll spread the word as best I can but I don't really have any pull around here. I can give you guys a shout out with my next chapter update and suggest people read this if that will help any.
838819 Well I commend both of your efforts, you guys make a great team. And don't sell yourself short any praise that comes your way is well warranted. Keep up the good work guys.
Great chapter and best cliffhanger EVER, thats all i have to say.
Cliffhanger? More like Vertical Limit ;)
I enjoyed this chapter. Waiting for the next.
cant wait to see more!!
So epic
Dammit, why does it have to end here!
please don't leave this cliffhanger for too long, this is a great story.
Ok ive got some things to say that i have been saving up since i started reading this last night.
1. One of if not the best HiE fic on this site.
2. HOW THE HELL DOES HE HAVE SO MUCH PATIENTS? I would have snapped a long time ago at the way things are going for Nathan. I mean equestria its self wants him dead, you know what i say to that?
"SCREW YOU EQUESTRIA!"
3. Another thing i have noticed and tell me if any of you have noticed this too, but why is it that no human in an HiE fic has any pride in his species?
I might be the weird one, but i'm damn proud to be a member of a species that has accomplished so many wonderful, terrible, great things.
Sure in comparison to ponies we might appear monstrous at first glance, But man has a very strong duality, equal amounts of good and evil, even if one side isn't as visible as the other in any point in time they are still there.
836837 you are now my new favorite, just for that image
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FIGHT DA POWAH!
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Sorry for the long wait, in any case the next chapter should be up within the next few days.
Fitting music for the 'death' scene....
The fall took on a slightly hilarious note for me when I pictured Fluttershy as Simba when Mufasa fell.
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I had so many feels, until i saw this
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