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I have never read of so much hate coming from the ponies. Now I'm just hoping
Celestia does the whole "we need your help oh chosen one" thing so they can have
a good ol' karmic bitchslap
Oh.
Fuck.
Him.
He is so screwed.
This is getting intense.
Damn, this is getting intense. Looking forward to more.
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Canonically, the ponies are quite racist and not that kind, at least not half as nice as the fandom twisted them to be. They basically forced Zecora into complete exile for being black and white and wearing a cloak before the events leading into her introduction. I'm actually surprised at how much the other authors rape the canon characters into ponies that are perfect individuals that respond reasonably and kindly to every situation, when it's been clearly shown to be the other way around. Whenever something goes wrong in their usually idyllic and perfect life, they usually respond really, really, badly and, in Rainbow Dashes case violently.
As a general review.... I see what you're doing, and I approve wholeheartedly. Except for a couple things I need qualification for, is the character regression from Applejack deliberate or...? And what the hay happened to Rainbow Dash??? (Unless the exclusion is also deliberate, then)
Epic chapter! Looking forward to the next chapter!
I must say that Discord seems too sinister and too well planned in here but other than that a quite good read
The Cockatrice cant turn Nathan into stone cause Humans dont seem to be in touch with magic at all. But he can be healed by it? Did i miss something?
And when he asked Twilight if only non equines are affectet by this spell i would have exspected him to ask if Spike was repulsed too. Why was he repulsed at all if he isnt "in touch" with magic?
Nice Story but that just bugs me somehow.
sorry for bad english.
How does rarity know so much about the human world?
This is bugging me now, why hasn't anyone commented on Pinkie's reaction to Nathan starting to "date" Fluttershy? She is clearly disturbed by this fact and seems to have strong feelings for Nathan which we can see in her near-absolute trust in him right?
Now i'm probably just looking too much into this but this seems to be foreshadowing the appearance of Pinkamena and that isn't gonna be pretty...
Anyways, I'm loving this story so far, keep up the good work Squid-hoof!
-nadroJ
I want another chapter...now
but seriously great chapter, i eagerly await the next
My only problem is how disliked Nathan is in a world based around friendship. Sure your story does take a more realistic approach on how the ponies would react to a sentient being that eats meat, but i mean come on show the guy a little more love and i fear for the worst when Celestia comes into play. my pinkie sense is tellin me shits gon get bad
other than that, heres a few more stashes to add to your collection
fucking love this story...
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Next chapter has already been rough drafted, but I've found an editor, so I have to give it my editing passes and pass it over to them.
I'm enjoying the questioning attitude of everyone so far- definitely worth it to me when people question what's going on. I know that a lot of my answers won't satisfy everyone, but I've at least taken the care to eliminate any contradictions. Nathan is not going to have an easy time of it until the very end- he's destined for punishment. Not everyone dislikes him though. He'll make a few friends, but it's going to get far worse before it gets better...
Also- what? Not one person commented on "Nightmare Boom"? I was so proud of that pun.
This is a wonderful story, and yes, everypony is an asshole. But what gets to me is the fact that Rarity knew specifically about nuclear warheads, and not just WMD's in general. Methinks Nathan told Flutters about them and then she told Rarity while they were at the spa or something... I dunno.
As for the story:
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I wonder what the pie cannon looks like?
584316 You have to admit though weird it's an interesting concept to have them be assholes. Dunno why I think I just enjoy the conflict or when karma does bite them in the ass like "Hey you know that guy you were an ass too? Yeah he's the good guy. P.S One Day I will find a story One Day.
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i was thinking this with a picture of pinkie on the side:
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Why is he mad? Why is he mad? AND HE APOLOGIZES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
They treat him like crap from day one. Treat him like a African American in the 1930's, Steal half his pay. He gets treated like an animal all the time. He gets beaten saving the entire town and after word they treat him like a freaking rapist murderer.
AND they cant figure out why he is mad?
Is this really what we as people consider normal behavior? That if you're beaten and spit on, and hurt, what you should do is help your enemy? and instantly forgive them for anything, no matter how violent? I mean this is so common in stories here, its not even funny. I mean this character goes out of the way to save the town, just about dies, is laying in the hospital and then treated like a wild animal.
Which he then apologizes for.
It's really starting to concern me, how normal we as Bronies, think this behavior is.