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FINALLY!
1500518
The only thing I could possibly be grateful for a smaller following of people on this fiction, is that there isn't an idiot who tries to post some version of "first". So thank you for existing, and not being that person.
NYUUU! CLIFFHANGER!
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(hanging from a cliff)
1500547
Finally as in it took long enough for Nathan to come back, that I finally have some progression, that I can look forward to an end of the whining that the ponies have been doing a bit too much in the recent chapters of this fic.
Prick
(my apologies to the author, please feel free to delete if you wish)
1500608
Wait, what?
Sweetness. I was getting the feeling that the doozy would be Nathan, and I'm glad that I was right.
1500608
Calm your tits, even if he is being a smartass, your reaction is hardly justified.
1500645
Oh bugger, don't tell me that I was wrong about you typing down a spiteful comment.
Because then I'd feel guilty.
Veeery guilty.
Edit: Yay, no guilt for meeeeee.
1500662
I guess... forgive me?
1500662
I am being a smartass, but I'm fairly sure he was misunderstanding my post.
1500669
Re-read my post I guess? Because there is a way to get genuinely offended by my post, but your response makes it only seem like you misread it.
I see that Nathan has come back from the dead.
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BUCK YEAH! IT'S ABOUT GAWD DYMN TIME!
A NEW WARRIOR HAS ENTERED THE RING!
He's BACK!
Oh you sadistic bastard, how can you leave us with a cliffhanger this big!? Gah, hurry up and write the next chapter!
1501544>>1500606
Come now. By now you must know I love my cliffhangers!
1501650
Doesn't change the sentiment
HOOOOOOOH BOY! XD MOAR!
YES!
There are alot of unseen forces in this fic. I dont know if Mango is discord or just some other person with a part to play.
Nathans Back!
The fight scene was cool. Hopefully twilight finally gets it through her thick head that Queen Celestia isnt who she thought it was. Poor shining.
I wonder where dash is going
Anyways, many questions come from cliffhangers but either way another good chapter. I look forward to Nathans story of how he survived the fall.
This fic is reminding me of LOST. Not the story line but the fact that every time one question is answered, we get 4 more.
Yes... YES! Nathan is back, Fluttershy can stop being saddy-waddy all the time
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, and was very surprised to see Celestia pardon them, byt God damn you and your cliffhangers, you will rue this day.
1500606 HEY THAT'S MY SCHTICK!
1506203
It is? wow, I didn't know anyone had ever seen the show before...
1501323 AMEN AND ALLELUIA~!
Have a song that mostly applies:
1506209 I actually used it a week ago or so. I got a few people recognizing the song. I was suprised as you are that anybody knew what the bloody 'ell I was talking about.
1507346
lol
btw, did you know that lol is really a picture of a man drowning?
lol
1507353 lulz Wow... I just realized that I never really cared enough to find out if he ever made it off that cliff... Dam it, now I'm depressed.
1506852
If only I didn't hate Maroon 5. Hahaha
1507390
He doesn't.
They'd never sell another book if he did
1507392 Tell me about it. This song ended up on my playlist as a joke from a friend, and I just finished reading this, and then I figured I may as well. (bull sounding story is actually true for once! I'll stick to Queen, vielen Dank)
AND he's back!!! from the dead!!! run he's a zombie!!!!
1508162
BRAINS
1508232 Now hang on there, liver is a perfectly good substitute for brains. Twice as delicous without that annoying skull in the way.
1510291
I can respect your opinions and much of what you've said is accurate- a lot of the characters are not acting canonically. That's sort of the point though. Also RD didn't dies so? As for shark jumping- nope, this has been planned out til now. I can't make you keep reading obviously, and if the stretch is too far for you then fine no hard feelings and I hope you find something else to enjoy. However, Within the next 3 chapters a lot of your issues will be addressed as planned, and if you want to give it one more chance wait that out. The big reveal, at least the first one, is comming.
PS- you know he literally jumped a shark right?
1510291
I'd love to say that that was more or less the point of the last half dozen chapters, but I really can't without oversimplifying the issue so I won't. It's actually a thing of wonder that you decided on commenting on the lack of a familiar character at the chapter that you did that it makes me wonder if you hadn't already read the next chapter. But, yes, the fact that the anchor of the story dropped out at the same point the story took a dive into a pool of fubar was for the most part intentional. What was meant to happen, though, was that it was supposed to be the force of the plot itself and not the personalities of the increasingly fucked up cast that was theoretically going to float you until we got back to the anchor (Ch. 18). Unfortunately to keep the chapter flow relatively consistent did mean that we leave you floating for awhile, which is actually even longer than in-universe intentions given that these chapters come out weeks apart and people are often left on the ledge hanging on surreptitious details we deliberately do not elaborate on. The overall feel of the situation was supposed to come off as jarring, but with the added real time waiting it probably ended up just being boring for many.
I want to handwave the issue and say that this work of fiction is more-or-less supposed to be read all at once, or at least at a fast enough pace that the aforementioned plot keeps you lubricated enough not to sink into the sticky sick pit of the currently shitheaded dicks that the characters currently are (ha ha, double entendres, clap, clap, hoot hoot). But the chapters for that aren't even out for those parts, so the readers who are keeping up just end up repeatedly running into erected mile-high rock walls coupled with a barely comprehensible plot that IS supposed to be there, so I do apologize for that even if I feel that much of why the readers get so lost comes from the difference between the long update times and the actual pacing of this story itself. The fact that this problem even exists means that we probably should've taken it into account and, indeed, should have planned for it.
Onto the overall quality complaint of the review, other than what I've mostly outlined above, we simply don't have an excuse for that. So on that I'll probably re-read the story from head to tail, keep an eye out for things that still have desperate need of an ugly, abusive beating (Chs 3-5 come to mind) and probably see to whatever issues we have after we kicked Nathan off the mountain as well. I offer my apologies for that as well.
Thanks very much for the review, and I'd personally like for any others with any reservations to come forward similarly as well.
*Edit
1511171
This is coincidental. The next interlude I'll be able to get to you in the next two hours or so, and i'll be trying to finish up on the sibling one-shot.
I TOTALLY BUCKING CALLED IT!!!!!! HE TOTALLY JUST t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTv5rnNS3xm0lKGbZF9fVs0wtcNdMijZzIbx6AUPhF0hzWFsUHw 'D IN THIS BITCH!!!
Edit: Meh
I love you... I have had this in my favorites from near the start, but as chapter 14 came up, it left my list a day later. I was deeply saddened because I thought you had deleted this story. I came back around 2 months later (today) to google the story in hopes of finding it. I ended up seeing that this story was not dead and continued to read from chapter 14. I quickly disregarded the other favorited story updates and continued to read. I'm overjoyed to see that this has all come back to me, as this was my first HiE fic I ever read on my account.
P.S. It was the change to mature rating that took it off my updates.
P.P.S. I wish I found out later so I didn't have to be left with such a big cliffhanger.
P.P.P.S. I stayed up 2 hours past my usual time to sleep just to read this story so you're lucky! (It's 1:41 now)
P.P.P.P.S. Did I tell you that I love you and that this story is underappreciated?
A VERY happy reader
-munomana
You and these shitstorms man...img3.joyreactor.com/pics/post/funny-pictures-ponytime-auto-brace-yourselves-387413.jpeg
I've been wondering, what does the pie cannon actually look like being a homemade gun and all ?
MOAR!!!
FUCK!