Not bad!

Dat cover art. Yis please.

Also, I think I will only read your's and a select few others clop stories (cause it's actually good!).

Eh, it could be better. It's not bad at all, just a bit too cliche for my liking.

Every move from her felt amazing on my penis.

Relevant video for this moment:

(Bet you he called his parents right after he was done dropping off Sunset Shimmer. )

But, little did I know that question started a chain of events that would end in a night that the two of us will remember forever.

But, little did I know that question started a chain of events that would end in a night of blowjobs, anal sex and a night without good ole mister lefty.

"HOW MANY TIMES SHE SUCKED YOUR DICK!?" His friends bellowed.

"I don't know, but I bet your mom has sucked more."

*Black guys begin screaming, shouting, and laughing*

OHHHHHHHHHHHH. GIT REKED FLSH.

Rest in peperinis, flash.

Is it just me, or in the picture, does Sunset Shimmer look like Phyrra Nikos from Rooster Teeth's RWBY during the dance arc?

I love the picture, as well as the story. Keep up the good work my friend

The only issue I had was Flash Sentry started channeling an even more jerkass Flash Thompson there.

nice eminem reference in the beginning

5143640 not just you. They do look a little bit like each other.

Sunset reminds me of Korra.

I laughed at the Eminem reference at the beginning I wasn't expecting that.

The pacing was fast but considering its only 3500 words its really well done.

....while I do not think Flash would say those things....those burns were sick! (In a good way)

I understand people don't like Flash Sentry because he's blander than sour cream, but was it necessary to make him an asshole?

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I like flash, honestly I do. But, which other male has dumped her or has interacted with her that we know?

I need dat picture's source. PLS chelis

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Ill give you his deviantart and not the specific pic so you can see how awesome this guy is, and i'm honored to consider him as a friend of mine :)

I never thought it was possible to make Flash any more unlikeable

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My god...that art...its beautifull.

mom's spaghetti

what

5156871 I thought she dumped him when she was all angry and junk.

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Ill have to check again but I'm pretty sure flash did the dumping

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FLASH AND HIS FRIENDS DOOOH
OMG LMFAO

When this came

"You know, there is still some part of me that is bad."

I was like:
"here comes the clopping part"

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Flash was very out of character. But meh.

I like the story. Cute. Liked.

I came, I saw, I conquered dat ass

5158270 It's an Eminem reference

The SUPER OOC of Flash had me rolling with laughter

It was great

Table app gaming

...FUCK YEAH!!!!!!!!

you know, that scene with Flash at Sugarcube Corner kinda reminded me of that scene at the end of Back to the Future between Biff and George McFly^^

5169527 And thus, the pants came off.

Although not my favorite pony, What'shisface has pretty similar reasons for liking Sunset as I do, so good on him! :)

Soooo can we expect an equally amazing sequel?

My Camaro was 30 years old, and when I inherited it from my uncle a few months ago, it looked like it was headed to the scrap yard.

Anon would later learn that his car was an alien robot named Bumblebee.

As noted, seems a bit cliche, maybe even self-insert-y. A little more character depth would be nice unless this is just supposed to be clop through and through.

...I want a sequel with the second date...or possibly one where they all play D&D.

Very well wrote I enjoyed it a lot have a moustache

"WHO?! SUNSET SHIMMER?! COMPLETE BITCH! I MEAN, IF SHE WAS TRYING TO WIN, LIKE, 'BITCH OF THE YEAR' OR SOMETHING. HONESTLY SHE JUST NEEDS TO GET LAID BY MY MASSIVE THICK COCK!"

"I FEEL THE NEED TO NONSENSICALLY SHOUT EVERY ONE OF MY BIZARRELY OBSCENE LINES LIKE I'M GILBERT GOTTFRIED FOR SOME REASON! STILL A BETTER CHARACTER THAN MR. PERFECT HOT GUY!"

PLS SAY YES PLS SAY YES PLS SAY YES.

Seriously please just finish the word please instead of this

Other that that well written and I enjoyed it

Ah. more best human fics? Already?

"I don't know, but I bet your mom has sucked more."
That caught Flash's attention.

And Ours as well. Well done good sir. Flash Sentry can face Our dark vengeance for simply existing

5416029 bumblebee is yellow with black stripes, not vice versa

6386844 I guess he's got the stealth paint job.
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6386979 huh, didn't know about that

I actually really love. This. I wish you would continue this.

Well i guess ik what my first cars gonna be for damn sure

OK but why Flash Sentry such a jerk. He was never one in the portrayal.

"So, what do you like about Sunset?" Rainbow Dash asked menacing smirk.

I think a few words are missing here...... unless his name is menacing smirk